1V1, no system, marriage change, slightly abusive in the early and middle stages, but sweet at the end. Pure newbie. The whole book is relatively slow to pick up, and the transformation doesn't occur until Chapters 7-8. (This is my first time writing. My writing style was not very good in the first 30 chapters. Later my friends commented that it got better. I kindly ask readers to criticize and correct me. Thank you very much!)
Guo Ling's family had a lot of money due to demolition. His parents were busy managing the money and enjoying themselves, and neglected to pay attention to Xiao Guo. Although Xiao Guo's childhood was rich in material life, his spiritual world was slightly barren. He has been getting into trouble constantly since he was a child, but there are always people to help him get into trouble, which makes him even worse.
After the last girlfriend broke up, Guo Ling received a text message: I wish you will always be controlled by others in your life, have a big belly, and never want to get the love of a girl.
Xiao Guo sneered at this curse.
Reader comments
Let's do a self-evaluation first.
I sincerely thank every reader who clicked on my debut novel.
I also feel that this subject matter does have traces of more than ten years ago. Originally I wanted to add some new ideas to the old routine, but because it was my first time writing and I lacked experience, it ended up being stuck. Some plots are not handled delicately enough and the pace is too slow, which makes everyone very tired. I must admit this.
In the story in the book, except for the setting of changing marriage, many details actually come from life, and the characters are also written according to their true appearance. No matter whether everyone likes it or complains about it, I read all criticisms. Only with criticism can I make progress.
I will definitely finish the story of Guo Lingli and Tian Sihao, and the ending will definitely be good.
In the next book, I will definitely learn from my lessons and work hard to polish it, so as not to disappoint everyone.
Once again, I would like to express my heartfelt thanks to all readers.
After reading the first 15 chapters, I really feel that the first few chapters are a bit trivial and boring. Most readers nowadays are accustomed to fast-paced reading, especially on a free reading platform like Tomato. The first few chapters are the key to determining whether readers can stay. Generally speaking, there must be enough gimmicks or strong conflicts in the early stage. Conflict attracts readers' interest in reading. Well, it's normal for the author not to write so well for the first time. I also realized that the first thirty chapters were not very good, so I jumped to chapter thirty and started reading. It is indeed an improvement for the author. It is not as strenuous to read as before. At least the language is relatively less trivial, 👍🏻
Please give a five-star support and encouragement to a new author's debut work [laughs][laughs]
It's almost impossible to tell that this is the author's first novel. The writing is very good, and the psychological description and emotional transformation are very natural. The description of campus life is not as rigid as many transformation novels. The key is that the logical setting is relatively reasonable. It is a rare masterpiece among transformation novels!
It's nice. I haven't read such a nice book in a long time.
This book is amazing, so beautiful
Okay, I feel pretty good [Like]
Slowly warming, traditional marriage changes
Not bad, very well written
The pace is slow and beautiful
Has flaws but overall smooth
The story ends when the marriage is completed. Then just add a few extra chapters.
Let's do a self-evaluation first. I sincerely thank every reader who clicked on my debut novel. I also feel that this subject matter does have traces of more than ten years ago. Originally I wanted to add some new ideas to the old routine, but because it was my first time writing and I lacked experience, it ended up being stuck. Some plots are not handled delicately enough and the pace is too slow, which makes everyone very tired. I must admit this. In the story in the book, except for the setting of changing marriage, many details actually come from life, and the characters are also written according to their true appearance. No matter whether everyone likes it or complains about it, I read all criticisms. Only with criticism can I make progress. I will definitely finish the story of Guo Lingli and Tian Sihao, and the ending will definitely be good. In the next book, I will definitely learn from my lessons and work hard to polish it, so as not to disappoint everyone. Once again, I would like to express my heartfelt thanks to all readers.
After reading the first 15 chapters, I really feel that the first few chapters are a bit trivial and boring. Most readers nowadays are accustomed to fast-paced reading, especially on a free reading platform like Tomato. The first few chapters are the key to determining whether readers can stay. Generally speaking, there must be enough gimmicks or strong conflicts in the early stage. Conflict attracts readers' interest in reading. Well, it's normal for the author not to write so well for the first time. I also realized that the first thirty chapters were not very good, so I jumped to chapter thirty and started reading. It is indeed an improvement for the author. It is not as strenuous to read as before. At least the language is relatively less trivial, 👍🏻 Please give a five-star support and encouragement to a new author's debut work [laughs][laughs]
It's almost impossible to tell that this is the author's first novel. The writing is very good, and the psychological description and emotional transformation are very natural. The description of campus life is not as rigid as many transformation novels. The key is that the logical setting is relatively reasonable. It is a rare masterpiece among transformation novels!
It's nice. I haven't read such a nice book in a long time.
This book is amazing, so beautiful
Okay, I feel pretty good [Like]
Slowly warming, traditional marriage changes
Not bad, very well written
The pace is slow and beautiful
Has flaws but overall smooth
The story ends when the marriage is completed. Then just add a few extra chapters.