Simultaneous Transmigration: Starting with Joining Baiyun Temple

The rhythm is very steady, and it is not a bad idea to maintain this rhythm and writing style. However, the rhythm at the beginning is too flat. It is recommended to start reading from Chapter 10, and then read the first 10 chapters. In addition, each protagonist's post-travel memory seems to be different. Is it foreshadowing or the author made a mistake in writing? For example, does each protagonist really know about dragons and mortals? The author is clueless and the reader is vague, so the author needs to explain or change it later.

It's okay. As long as you're not a temporary worker, it's good. I can watch it.

The author needs correction. Chapter 49 contains content related to Fuli Lian and Seurahat, the prophet of the demon race. According to the content of the original work, it is not included in the Seven Bengxians. The battle between the Hero of the South and Shorahat was done by Shorahat as the high priest of the demon race, leading the Seven Bengxians to fight against the Hero of the South. Then the Hero of the South killed Shorahat and the other three Seven Bengxians. There were only a few left, one was solved by Frilian and Simmel on the way to form a team. The other was Mahat of the Golden Land who was killed by Frilian, and the Guillotine Aura was also killed by Frilian. The one who was sealed. His specialty is murder magic. That demon was also Qi Fengxian, and he was killed by Fulilian. Then he was called a miracle or something, and he appeared in the Chapter of the Goddess Monument and was killed by Yukimei (I can't remember clearly here, not sure if he was killed, maybe his arm was cut off)

The writing is good, solid and interesting. The relationship between my brother and the world is also handled very well. The only shortcoming is that I feel a bit elevated. Compared with cultivating immortals, a person is still wandering around in the mortal world.

The story, pace, plot line, overall is very good. But I feel like the author didn't read much of the original work, and many things are different from the original setting.

It's so pretty. I didn't expect to be able to take Han Li's Sky Palm Bottle. He's so powerful [laughing] Sanlingen established his foundation at the age of 18, but could not make any waves in the sect.

Don't look at those bad reviews [cover face] [cover face] I feel like this is pretty good and pretty good-looking

This clone flow is very good. It is not a simple power sharing that ignores the differences in the world. It is just a basic knowledge sharing. It cannot be used directly and requires the transformation of the respective world systems.

It's well written, it has its own ideas, and it feels like watching (simultaneously traveling through 99)

It can be seen that the version is too old and the connection between different worlds is not very good.