HP: Obscurial from the Start, I Picked Up a Young Dark Lord

Finally, it's not a story about Tom torturing the protagonist and being unable to resist. If asked, the Dark Lord will certainly not be able to defeat him. It's really touching. It's really hard to find a story about the heroine not feeling aggrieved. I'm so touched. It's not the kind of story where the male protagonist actually wins in all the confrontations on the surface. I'm so excited. And although this article doesn't have many emotional lines, it is still very enjoyable. Although some parts of the plot are a bit complicated and redundant, the flaws are not hidden. I would give it full marks just for the characters.

Nice. It is rare that Tom is not demonized into an extremely bad character, and at the same time, the heroine can stand up as a fan who has not been played around with her character. It's very comfortable to get along with, Tom's character is also very good, and the writing is very mature.

It's really because no one is watching it that the score is low... 😭The whole text respects the subjectivity of the heroine. The two babies have their own strengths, and there is no plot that the woman is stronger than the man. The psychological description is very delicate, and the narrative is very natural, and the author's imagination seems to have no end at all. Moreover, the process of dealing with the line where wizards gradually face ordinary humans is really patient, and the emotional line is also smooth and smooth. You can definitely see that feelings are accumulated over time. The plot is handled very naturally and is not abrupt at all. Compared with the fast-food mode of most of HP's Tanglider's CP novels (there are also the oily ones, the spoiled wife and the domineering boss. Tang's CP novels particularly like to do this, but this novel is completely about falling in love under equal conditions.) Is simply commendable. Teacher must persevere... I almost vomited after eating fast food before meeting the teacher. It is my lifelong dream to be able to narrate as naturally as the teacher. Moreover, every change in the soup is foreshadowed, so it won't be very OOC. I won't say anything else. Anyway, I love you, goddess. This book is really a treasure among HP soup CP articles.

It's beautiful, but I still have more to say! The heroine meets little Tom in the orphanage. The plot is different from that of the redemption story. Although the body is of the same age, it is more like a foster cub (raising a child laborer). The setting is very reasonable. The addition of the heroine changes some of other people's views. Moreover, it is not blindly protective and occasionally quarrels. It has a sense of life, and the warm daily life of fighting with awkward children is cute and cute. At present, the scenes of 100 chapters of adventure + crisis + strength improvement are very balanced. The rhythm is not too tight and it does not make you feel bored and lose the fun. Some comments say that it is dull and I think it is okay (do you want to watch the first grade to save the world)? Many money-making inventions are also quite interesting. The original second design for exploring the secrets of Hogwarts is also exciting! The emotional line shouldn't be particularly cruel. After all, little Tom has been very jealous at a young age. I am looking forward to the future development of the male ghost (let me see how to wrap around the heroine's waist...) Zongzhi, follow up, collect, and update!

It's so good that I love watching it and want to watch it again. It's top-notch delicious. Although I don't read much fan fiction, this book is indeed the most appealing to me (it feels like an INTP, manual dog head). Antalis and Riddle are both academic research talents, haha, they have opened up the world and directly promoted the technological revolution in the magic world. Through dedicated research and genius, she has become extremely powerful. In fact, I think she is the strongest heroine I have ever read in HP fandoms without any cheats. She is very strong just by relying on her brains. The flexible use of magic is also refreshing to me. The author has indeed written out the strength of the male and female protagonists. The research on magic spells, potions, and alchemy also seems to be extremely solid. It doesn't look watery at all, and it makes sense logically. There are indeed so many interesting things worth studying in the magical world, which is why it is so fascinating. The author has written about the charm of the magical world (at least it is to my liking). Not only that, the male and female protagonists are also very charming. Slytherin's shrewdness, judgment of situations and elegance are indeed shown. Antalis is self-improving and positive. Even if she encounters many misfortunes in life, she does not blame herself or blame others. Instead, she works hard to find a way out for herself. She burns like a flame and has a calm mind and a firm mind. She is a strong heroine that I like very much. I have always believed that people are affected by their environment and experiences, and different choices at key nodes in the past will often lead to different paths. Although instinct will guide everyone back to the original path, the mentality and thoughts of embarking on this path are also different. Riddle's key nodes have been changed, and because Antalis has a more comprehensive understanding of the wizarding world and looks at Muggles, blood, and even death with a more calm eye, it will indeed change a lot of views, at least there will be a lot less haze. But ambition, apathy and suspicion, which are almost instinctive, have not changed. Well, in short, I think it is very reasonable, logical, and consistent with people's psychological changes. Riddle's talent has not been wasted at all. Using his talent in magic research makes up for my regrets and regrets about genius. The future is Minister of Magic, Professor at Hogwarts, or other career paths, all are bright. ✧٩(ˊωˋ*)و✧ The author works hard and looks forward to the unfolding of the story, Antalis and Riddle's adventures and various research in the wizarding world, and the technological revolution and other reforms! Ah, I feel like there are so many things to write about! (*๓´╰╯`๓)♡

I really like this kind of writing. The last time I read it was Wendy's chronicle. I like that Riddle has a paranoid and violent tendency in his heart, but he is warmed by the heroine and the people around him, and will not show any malice up to a certain level. Sometimes I want to read his novels, but many of them follow a very similar process from the beginning to the middle, that is, the heroine is basically suppressed by him. Although it will change Riddle a little, it will not change much. He will still go down that path, but the ending will be different. It is really rare to change his character from the beginning. I have found a treasure. Good for the heroine, good for Riddle, and good for everyone [Adoration]

Although I haven't finished it yet, it's really good. The picture is very strong. It's not just about love or adventure, but it's closer to watching the protagonists grow up little by little. I don't know when the emotional line will be written, but they are still young anyway. Their story is still very long, so there is no need to get entangled. This book is one of the few fanfics that I have the patience to read. It does not portray Riddle as a heinous and born evil. Everyone has his own characteristics. As he grows older and expands his knowledge, he gradually becomes a more three-dimensional and intuitive character. The heroine is also very vivid and beautiful! I hope you won't stop updating and keep writing slowly. I'm really looking forward to their future stories [Sending my heart][Sending my heart][Sending my heart]

What a rare hp bg fine grain!ヾ(@^▽^@)ノ There are fewer HP fans in the parent generation than in the offspring generation, and it is difficult to write. It can be said that most plots require the author to create his own creations based on the worldview of the original work. It is also very common for the combat power to accidentally collapse. Although most of the time, Mi can selectively ignore this, but when I see how good the writing is, I still want to praise it~ Many plots in the article made me feel very "new", such as the combination of various magic spells and the birth of new magic spells, the discussion of the blood curse and the Obscurus, the "mutation" of the Patronus Curse, and the reverse Animagus, which is derived from HP but transcends the original work. It is a typical double-power novel. Riddell in the original novel has not lost his personality charm, and Antalis' own unique color can also be seen. Both of them have their own strengths and weaknesses, as well as their own persistence and goals. The former little bitter gourds helped each other and supported each other, and they have become big people who can stand alone~ It can be said that we have watched the two of us grow up and gained the happiness of being nurturing~ [Shy] The emotional line is also very logical~ Although they are not adults yet, the youthfulness of childhood sweethearts is also very good! Occasionally, because they know each other too well, they give me the impression of an old married couple~ Needless to say, when she was a child, Antalis had a very left-wing temperament~ Of course, she also had a left-field temperament when she grew up. Kittens ate ravens and so on, but Riddle was just developed~ (Mi is kowtowing again, don't imitate Mi) In fact, according to my habit, I should catch up to the latest chapter before considering whether to write a book review. But when I saw that there were more than fifty chapters left, I suddenly had a strong idea of ​​writing a book review, so I immediately came over. Maybe I will write a review after catching up to the end~ Great writing! I hope you won't be fooled ~ [love] [love] [love]

Finally, I came across a book with a male and female protagonist that is more in line with my wishes. Nowadays, HP fan fiction is overflowing with heartthrobs. You said you can write about heartthrobs, but don't make it so weird, okay? Even people like me who read books without thinking can't stand it [Fear] The author like this has written much better. The male and female protagonists are very powerful. The career line looks very interesting. The love line may be more obvious in the later stage. In the early stage, I mainly focus on career [Shy] Hehehe, I will also follow it during the holidays [Sending Hearts] Oh my god, the score has finally increased from 8:00 to 9:00. That's great! [Sending Hearts]

I saw this in one breath, it was very beautiful and had strong emotions. First of all, the author's characterization is very good and in place. Without OOC, people are not in a vacuum. Everyone's three views are shaped by the social environment. When the social environment changes, people's personalities will also change. It is not black and white. A contradictory individual is a live and real person. Different social environments bring different experiences. There are causes and effects. Different causes can lead to different effects. People will also react differently due to different experiences. In the original book, Riddle obviously cannot afford to buy a house in Hogsmeade, nor can he stay in school during the summer vacation, nor can he avoid returning to the orphanage and being in World War II. Therefore, the most horrific war will give Riddle the most terrifying and powerless experience, intensifying his disgust and prejudice against ordinary people. However, due to the appearance of the heroine, Riddle did not have to face the horror of war. At the same time, the knowledge of ordinary people brought by the heroine allowed Riddle to enjoy peace and quiet in the lives of ordinary people. Naturally, Riddle would not hate ordinary people, and it would be impossible for him to become Voldemort. The author's plot arrangement and plot structure are quite reasonable. Events promote character creation, events are embedded in events, and different behaviors made by the emotional outlook of each character are fed back to the event itself. Therefore, the growth of the characters and the relationship between the characters are eloquently told, and the rhythm is very good. I look forward to the author continuing to write until graduation and working, because the author's additional settings are actually very interesting. This kind of innovation is fascinating. If the author feels that it is too much, he can use the time method at certain ages, at least allowing us to see Harry's birth. I really want to know how the protagonists will get along with Lily, James, Sirius, Harry, and Hermione~