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Finally, it's not a story about Tom torturing the protagonist and being unable to resist. If asked, the Dark Lord will certainly not be able to defeat him. It's really touching. It's really hard to find a story about the heroine not feeling aggrieved. I'm so touched. It's not the kind of story where the male protagonist actually wins in all the confrontations on the surface. I'm so excited. And although this article doesn't have many emotional lines, it is still very enjoyable. Although some parts of the plot are a bit complicated and redundant, the flaws are not hidden. I would give it full marks just for the characters.

Nice. It is rare that Tom is not demonized into an extremely bad character, and at the same time, the heroine can stand up as a fan who has not been played around with her character. It's very comfortable to get along with, Tom's character is also very good, and the writing is very mature.

It's beautiful, but I still have more to say! The heroine meets little Tom in the orphanage. The plot is different from that of the redemption story. Although the body is of the same age, it is more like a foster cub (raising a child laborer). The setting is very reasonable. The addition of the heroine changes some of other people's views. Moreover, it is not blindly protective and occasionally quarrels. It has a sense of life, and the warm daily life of fighting with awkward children is cute and cute. At present, the scenes of 100 chapters of adventure + crisis + strength improvement are very balanced. The rhythm is not too tight and it does not make you feel bored and lose the fun. Some comments say that it is dull and I think it is okay (do you want to watch the first grade to save the world)? Many money-making inventions are also quite interesting. The original second design for exploring the secrets of Hogwarts is also exciting! The emotional line shouldn't be particularly cruel. After all, little Tom has been very jealous at a young age. I am looking forward to the future development of the male ghost (let me see how to wrap around the heroine's waist...) Zongzhi, follow up, collect, and update!

Although I haven't finished it yet, it's really good. The picture is very strong. It's not just about love or adventure, but it's closer to watching the protagonists grow up little by little. I don't know when the emotional line will be written, but they are still young anyway. Their story is still very long, so there is no need to get entangled. This book is one of the few fanfics that I have the patience to read. It does not portray Riddle as a heinous and born evil. Everyone has his own characteristics. As he grows older and expands his knowledge, he gradually becomes a more three-dimensional and intuitive character. The heroine is also very vivid and beautiful! I hope you won't stop updating and keep writing slowly. I'm really looking forward to their future stories [Sending my heart][Sending my heart][Sending my heart]

It's really because no one is watching it that the score is low... 😭The whole text respects the subjectivity of the heroine. The two babies have their own strengths, and there is no plot that the woman is stronger than the man. The psychological description is very delicate, and the narrative is very natural, and the author's imagination seems to have no end at all. Moreover, the process of dealing with the line where wizards gradually face ordinary humans is really patient, and the emotional line is also smooth and smooth. You can definitely see that feelings are accumulated over time. The plot is handled very naturally and is not abrupt at all. Compared with the fast-food mode of most of HP's Tanglider's CP novels (there are also the oily ones, the spoiled wife and the domineering boss. Tang's CP novels particularly like to do this, but this novel is completely about falling in love under equal conditions.) Is simply commendable. Teacher must persevere... I almost vomited after eating fast food before meeting the teacher. It is my lifelong dream to be able to narrate as naturally as the teacher. Moreover, every change in the soup is foreshadowed, so it won't be very OOC. I won't say anything else. Anyway, I love you, goddess. This book is really a treasure among HP soup CP articles.

I really like this kind of writing. The last time I read it was Wendy's chronicle. I like that Riddle has a paranoid and violent tendency in his heart, but he is warmed by the heroine and the people around him, and will not show any malice up to a certain level. Sometimes I want to read his novels, but many of them follow a very similar process from the beginning to the middle, that is, the heroine is basically suppressed by him. Although it will change Riddle a little, it will not change much. He will still go down that path, but the ending will be different. It is really rare to change his character from the beginning. I have found a treasure. Good for the heroine, good for Riddle, and good for everyone [Adoration]

What a rare hp bg fine grain!ヾ(@^▽^@)ノ There are fewer HP fans in the parent generation than in the offspring generation, and it is difficult to write. It can be said that most plots require the author to create his own creations based on the worldview of the original work. It is also very common for the combat power to accidentally collapse. Although most of the time, Mi can selectively ignore this, but when I see how good the writing is, I still want to praise it~ Many plots in the article made me feel very "new", such as the combination of various magic spells and the birth of new magic spells, the discussion of the blood curse and the Obscurus, the "mutation" of the Patronus Curse, and the reverse Animagus, which is derived from HP but transcends the original work. It is a typical double-power novel. Riddell in the original novel has not lost his personality charm, and Antalis' own unique color can also be seen. Both of them have their own strengths and weaknesses, as well as their own persistence and goals. The former little bitter gourds helped each other and supported each other, and they have become big people who can stand alone~ It can be said that we have watched the two of us grow up and gained the happiness of being nurturing~ [Shy] The emotional line is also very logical~ Although they are not adults yet, the youthfulness of childhood sweethearts is also very good! Occasionally, because they know each other too well, they give me the impression of an old married couple~ Needless to say, when she was a child, Antalis had a very left-wing temperament~ Of course, she also had a left-field temperament when she grew up. Kittens ate ravens and so on, but Riddle was just developed~ (Mi is kowtowing again, don't imitate Mi) In fact, according to my habit, I should catch up to the latest chapter before considering whether to write a book review. But when I saw that there were more than fifty chapters left, I suddenly had a strong idea of ​​writing a book review, so I immediately came over. Maybe I will write a review after catching up to the end~ Great writing! I hope you won't be fooled ~ [love] [love] [love]

It's very interesting. It's rare to see such detailed and exciting writing about the fan fiction of the original generation. The setting of the heroine is also very interesting. It is the combination of Obscurus and Blood Curse, as well as a lot of research on the flow of magic power. It makes people feel that the author has done in-depth research on the same. [Note] It's not a loss to invest in a good-looking article! [Eat melon]

Finally, I came across a book with a male and female protagonist that is more in line with my wishes. Nowadays, HP fan fiction is full of heartthrobs. You said you can write about heartthrobs, but don't write it in such a weird way, okay? Even people like me who read books without thinking can't stand it [Fear] The author like this has written much better. The male and female protagonists are very powerful. The career line looks very interesting. The love line may be more obvious in the later stage. In the early stage, I mainly focus on career [Shy] Hehehe, I will also follow it during the holidays [Sending Hearts]

It's the first time I've seen a story that suits my taste [Adoration]. The heroine is very attractive. I'm quite surprised. The plot is not draggy. To be honest, many of Tomato's HP fans are very Mary Sue, very bloody, and the plot is too long, otherwise I will stop updating. Author, you must stick to it!

A very nice fan work by CP Riddle! There is no Virgin, no doting, just getting along with Tom as a normal person, occasionally guiding him from black magic to other things worth studying. Because the appearance of the heroine almost changed Riddle's future as the Dark Lord. But I still want to complain. Due to my personal personality, I feel like I don't get along well with the heroine. The heroine is a person who lives a very self-centered, detached, very strong and curled life. It feels like she is thinking about her research all the time. No matter what the surrounding environment is, when a friend finds her in a daze and asks her something, she always replies with "Huh?", Giving me an unknown fire [face covering]. She is too lazy to open the Christmas gifts from her friends, and can't think of her friends who are in hospital. She puts her own research first in everything. It seemed that she took the initiative to find Riddle because of research and things she was interested in. She would always be jealous if Riddle had any talent that she didn't have. Currently, it was Riddle who was taking the initiative to get closer to the heroine. He didn't know when he would see the heroine gain consciousness. To sum up, I think the heroine is a very strong person and very generous. She does not hide her knowledge. She will teach anyone who asks her. Although she is usually in a daze when she gets along with friends and doesn't care much about others, she will protect everyone when in danger, and she used the Patronus Charm because she thought she had friends. Although I don't like such friends, the heroine is a person who makes people feel safe!

I haven't finished reading it yet, but after reading more than sixty chapters, I couldn't help but comment. It's a very good book. At least nearly two hundred days have passed since the last Harry Potter novel that kept me hooked until now. It was such a surprise to find this. I am an omnivore, and I can knock out any CP. I am a Hufflepuff, and when I read books, the four houses usually do not take sides. But I rarely watch Voldemort. Because many authors treat Voldemort, who has committed crimes and made mistakes, as a child in an orphanage and care for him. They completely ignore that he is a villain and killed many people. They just talk about love and start to blackmail Gryffindor. They completely forget that many people have died in their own generation, including Potter and Lily. Therefore, I feel that I cannot understand and cannot stand the CP Voldemort. But what makes this book different from others is that you can feel that the changes in Riddle's whole person are completely different from the original work. There is an extra variable of the heroine, so all his subsequent changes are reasonable. And there is no arbitrary beautification of Riddle, some of his qualities still exist. It's very reasonable. Five-star praise, I hope the author can finish this book completely, don't leave it unfinished, don't stop updating, as long as I keep up the good work, I will keep following it.

It's very interesting and interesting. It allows me to see new possibilities for these characters. Little Riddle is also a bit cute, arrogant and super irritable. The heroine is also great. The two of them grow up with each other and study and progress together (PS: do bad things). The bickering is also very interesting. This line is very well written.

I didn't expect to see such high-quality tom text from Tomato. Most HP fans were watching from next door, and their threshold was raised by Domumudo. Riddle's portrayal is quite reasonable, and there are no shortcomings that embellish his character, but he is also transformed into a very lovable character, like a gloomy 9-year-old child. This is the most rare thing. The heroine is strong but not outrageously strong. There is still room for growth and there are some external constraints, but I feel that this makes the plot more unpredictable. Enjoyable writing is like playing a game. You will get bored after just buying a full-level account and playing for 2 days. The heroine's combat power will be at its limit and it will easily become boring.

It's really good to watch, and it tied up within a few days. You can clearly feel that Riddell is changing, the logic is reasonable, and the heroine also has a good personality, and I like it very much. The main reason is that Riddler's cognition is changing, and the two of them have really made a lot of inventions. I really like their career lines.

It's good-looking, and the heroine is very powerful, but sometimes the heroine's behavior makes me feel disconnected. Tom is also well described, a bit arrogant and bratty [crying with laughter] I don't know why although Alphard's character is very good, I don't like him for some reason. Is it because I don't like Sirius, and Sirius is his nephew? [Thinking] I wonder if it will be written about the family generation, and I wonder what the author's attitude towards predators is [I understand] and at what grade will the emotional line be developed? I'm only in second grade now, so it seems like this is going to be a long story [Chigua]

Very very good! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! The plot is very interesting. I especially like the fan teacher's use of personal settings to add adventure plots to the characters. It's like experiencing the fantasy magical world again🥰 An's character design is great. It's very interesting to see two little snakes fighting each other while being childhood sweethearts. They talk about bad things and tightly hold each other's hands when attacked...🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰 The comment section and the author are both good at making hell jokes (∀)

Oh my god, I was actually very dissatisfied with CP Tom before, because at first I read a lot of fanfics from the Slytherin perspective because of Snape, but the more disconcerting stories I read, the more I turned away from being a Slytherin fan. I am indeed more of a predator fan, but this one is completely different. It is really well written, and the perspective is amazing, and there are many unique plot designs. It is a completely excellent new article that uses HP's world view, unlike those that just fine-tune the original routines and plots. It is great. I hope the author will work hard. I still don't like Voldemort, but I like the author's Tom and the powerful, cute and interesting Anta

It's a very cute article. I wasn't used to the author's writing style at first, but as I read it, I could taste the light humor in it. Occasionally, some of the plots made people smile. This is an excellent leisure read

Beautiful, love watching. There are many themes about Voldemort, and this one is very well written. The structure is very clear, and everyone is not portrayed as a fool. Voldemort himself has character flaws, but he is not a fool. The author writes about that kind of change. That's pretty good. I feel like I need to brush it three times~

So good-looking, beautiful and powerful, childhood sweetheart, villain. These elements often make people feel uncomfortable nowadays, but the author writes these elements very well. The heroine's life experience is very miserable, but her daily life is very strong and happy. The plot of growing up with Tangli Dou is also very well written, very interesting and not boring, and you can see Tangli Dou's nature changing from time to time.

It's not bad. I liked it more when there were more scenes with Tom. Now it's even. It's a bit bland. Overall, it's still an interesting fanfic. The heroine's setting is also that of a strong woman.

Among the many Tom Riddle fan novels written by CB, this one is the one I have read. It is written as close as possible to Tom's original background of pursuing power. Moreover, the part that made Tom oppose the theory of pure blood was also very well written. After Tom learned about Muggles, the theory of pure blood was simply a ridiculous theory in front of him [laugh][laugh][laugh]

It's super, super, super good-looking. The relationship between the heroine and Riddle is a bit like happy enemies. The relationship line is also relatively slow to advance, and the heroine is not aggrieved at all. The heroine has her own career, and she and Riddle look like good friends now [Adoration] [Adoration] [Sending Hearts] [Sending Hearts] [Sending Hearts] (*•ω•*) ᕙʕ✿✪ᴥ✪ʔᕗ ～(^з^)-☆

It's really good-looking. I immediately reviewed it. I really like the heroine. She is studious, smart, and capable. I really like her. In fact, I am a career fan of the heroine, haha. And I personally think that she and Riddle get along very well. Because the heroine didn't know that Riddle would become Voldemort, it was natural for her to get along with each other, so Riddle's transformation was also natural. The story is narrated without boring people and is worth reading

It's very interesting. I've never read Harry Potter. Except for some minor points, it doesn't affect my understanding of the plot. There are explanations left by book review readers in many places. I really like this way of pursuing my career. Although the male protagonist appears a lot, the love line is less described. I like this so much. Now, this is how I start my career. I have read more than 80 chapters, so I am commenting. I hope it will be the same in the future. I have read many articles before. The first half of the article is about pursuing a career, and the second half suddenly has more emotional lines, and then the emotional lines affect the career line. Don't do this, I will explode.

The writing is very good, the writing style is very smooth, the author must not give up [crying][crying][crying] It's super, super, super good. Why doesn't Rotten Persimmon provide traffic for such a good book? [Cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry]

The plot is smooth and the emotions are delicate. It maintains the background of Riddler's character while recreating him as the same but different (praise). The interaction between the two is so beautiful to me ꒰* ॢꈍ◡ꈍ ॢ꒱✿ Well, the two little ones have to be together all the time! ! ! ! ! (Why do you write so beautifully? It's not good enough!!!) ₍ᐢ..ᐢ₎ ༘♡ How come my wife writes so beautifully! Totally not enough! After reading this book, I feel that none of the other books are as attractive as this one. (♡>𖥦<)/♥It's so pretty! ! ! !

The writing is very good. I rarely read CPs written by Tom Riddle. I usually bypass them when reading HP. However, this book attracted me very much from the beginning. The relationship between the heroine Anta and Riddle seemed to be smooth and logical. The plot is very natural. I really like this sense of daily life. The writing is also very good. There is nothing unexpected. It seems to be going smoothly. I have tied it after two days in a row. It is painful not to be able to read it.

I use the most straightforward, purest, simplest, most magnanimous, most sincere, most practical, most hard-core, cleanest, most neat, most straightforward, least roundabout, least roundabout, least roundabout, least roundabout Procrastination, the least sloppy, the least hiding, the least trickery, the least scheming, the least roundabout, the least false, the least cunning, the least cunning, no pretense, no trace I will tell you the truth in the most down-to-earth, easy-to-understand, easy-to-understand, straightforward, and straightforward way, without exaggerating, without minimizing the facts, without distorting the original meaning, without deliberately beautifying, without deliberately concealing. I will tell you the truth, tell the truth, talk about the truth, and talk to you from the heart. I will not pretend, act, act, or pretend, but will be sincere to the end, frank to the end, and straightforward to the end. This horse is so beautiful [laughs]