Red Mansion: Starting from the Engagement with Wang Xifeng

It's quite cool to receive them all, but just sitting around in the garden doing nothing all day long, in the end, you still have to stand out on your own.

The Red Mansion is very tasty, but it has lost the taste of travelers. Could it be that you just want to collect them all when you wear them? Don't you feel sorry for these girls? Since you want to take them, you should make their lives happier. At present, there are no modern people who have been assimilated. You can't tell how they are time-travelers.

I read it in one sitting, it was very well written, I liked it and have continued to read it. It is indeed a harem novel, and I have not seen any serious poisons such as self-love for the time being. It is a rare red mansion novel that does not contain violence. If you are interested, you can take a look. The author's way of writing does not sound like the protagonist is ambitious. He should not be able to conquer the world. It is just a normal novel. If you don't like Wang Xifeng, I won't recommend it. This book has a lot of content and is not a clickbait. [The masterpiece of bird food][Grass has been planted][Bookshelf plus one]

Not bad, I read it in one sitting. The Garden Opera is good. The one I came to see in Red Mansion was the Atomic Opera. For other things, why not read fictional historical novels, court battles, counterattack stories, and war conquests.

Come on, author, there is nothing wrong with restoring the characters of the original characters. Many of those who are making nonsense have never read Dream of Red Mansions, or they have read too many cool articles. Some people do not accept that Wang Xifeng is so cruel. Wang Xifeng is just worried that his status will not be guaranteed. If you give him a shot of cardiotonic, it will be over. It can be solved easily. If a reader doesn't buy it, everything that needs to leave will leave, and those who remain can understand it. I think your work is okay. I have never read Dream of Red Mansions. I was a little uncomfortable with it at the beginning because of the writing style. I got used to it after listening to the book for a few chapters. This novel gave me a good feeling, at least I can listen to it. A maid is always a maid, and she still needs to be disciplined. When it comes to bad reviews, you need to know how to distinguish which ones are acceptable and which ones are not. There are good and bad reviews, and you have to know how to face it. No one's work is satisfactory to everyone. [Eating melon] Come on Since it is a fan, it must have its own story, and the characters must be close to the original work, otherwise they will be criticized if they are too different. Some readers criticized Jia Zhu's wife for hanging up without even getting through the door, saying she was poisonous. You don't need to read the comments of those readers. Those people always like second-hand cars. Isn't the original car bad? 🙄😂, It's normal to have some changes in the plot. It's originally a fanfic. As long as the logic is appropriate, the plot is not abrupt, and the characters are distinctive and interesting, it's fine. Tomato novels are generally for fun stories. Just make everyone happy. Some readers who are picky about the plot are worried about the speed of the plot. I just want to say, why don't you read the original novel? Yelling nonsense here. I think Wang Xifeng is a very good person. She has a very good character and ability. I want to find a way to harmonize the relationship between the protagonist and her and make her realize her mistakes. It is better to delegate power to her. People who are capable do not have to use it in vain. The protagonist is a time traveler after all. The author wants to find a way to write a more upbeat character for him. Can't the fierce horse like Wang Xifeng be trained? [Eating melon][laughing evilly]

It has the flavor of Red Mansion, and the characters are neither OOC nor facial makeup, especially the old lady's behavior, especially the change in attitude towards Jia Baoyu (according to the external environment) is handled very well. The way the characters speak is an authentic Yuanzi drama (if you calm down and look at it, it is a high-quality Red Mansion fic) But what can I say, I have read a lot of books, and now it is better to write content that is not OOC and is cool. (Logical is cool) This book is not OOC + a high-quality garden drama (I haven't been able to calm down and savor it recently, so although it is a high-quality product, the plot has little ups and downs, which makes me lose the motivation to continue reading it)

It's pretty good. I hope I won't be like other Red Mansion novels that give men and women the wrong place. In fact, there are some good Red Mansion novels. Although most Red Mansion novels don't dare to change the settings, which makes it impossible to get a full C, there are still some who get a relatively complete version. It's just that they like to make mistakes and give women to men and end up ruined.

It's really good. I find that these Red Mansions novels are really tasteful, so tasteful, in this era of parallel AI. There are also some older generations who are very good at rubbing their hands. What's more, the writing can make people read it carefully. They have good intentions.

To be honest, the author really wrote this fanfic very carefully. In my eyes, the characters of core characters such as Lin Daiyu and Wang Xifeng are highly consistent with the original work. In particular, Daiyu's tone and demeanor, which seems to be weak but has a barb in every sentence, is restored very well, and it is obvious that the author has made great efforts to read the original work carefully. Nowadays, many Red Mansions fans like the cool formula of turning demons into war strategies, fighting for power, and becoming emperor and seizing the country. But whether it is the original work or the orthodox story of Red Mansions, the core is always the warmth and warmth of human relationships in the Grand View Garden, the rise and fall of the family, and the step-by-step decline of the Jia family. It almost does not involve the struggle for imperial power in the court or military power. Because of this, many readers who don't like the daily life in the house and just want to see the counterattack strategy will feel uncomfortable. Most likely, they have not really understood the background of the Red Mansion. Readers who persist until now and stay to read the book carefully are basically those who recognize the author's style of writing and understand the taste of the original work. For example, the scene in the previous article where Wang Xifeng forcefully chases people away completely fits the original character design. In order to control Jia Lian and prevent him from flirting with women and having concubines, Wang Xifeng's aggressive, family-protecting, jealous and shrewd character was vividly and vividly restored. I really don't understand the thinking of those negative reviews. In my opinion, this is a very high-quality Red Mansion fanfic. The details are exquisite and the characters are not OOC. It can be seen that the author has paid great attention to the whole process. I sincerely hope that the author can continue to update, and I look forward to seeing the happy million-word ending of this book!

The writing is quite good, I just hope it can take care of those who have not read Dream of Red Mansions. In some grudges or certain relationships, the original plot is mentioned appropriately. If I encounter someone who doesn't understand it, I will skip it. I only searched for the plot of Jia Rui and Wang Xifeng. Without mentioning the original story line, I feel that not many people will search for a plot that they can't understand.

The level of the Red Mansion novels is much higher than those of the formulaic Red Mansions novels on the site. The character interactions are very original, and the language and emotional expressions are restrained and polite. Unlike most of the Red Mansions novels, the protagonists look greasy and domineering, and when they first meet Jin Chai, they seem to be flirting. I hope the story can be complete

Isn't this really cool? There are very few harem and red mansion fics, and the collection in this book is more natural, quite natural, and you should eat it as much as you need it.

It's very interesting. It's the author's first time writing it. Some of the plots are a bit dry, so I need to pay more attention to them. If some veteran authors with serious water injections were left out, the plot of more than 100,000 words would have to be watered down to millions of words, which also shows that the author of this book is full of sincerity and does not limit the number of words.

What can I say, the book is very good. I personally feel that this book can only be regarded as an official or ancient style novel with harem elements. There is a bit too much content about the male protagonist's official examination and too little description of emotional exchanges with the female protagonists. However, the writing is very good and the author has literary skills. Regarding lightning protection, there are relatively few descriptions of the harem, so there are not many descriptions of possible lightning protection.

9000 Hours of online time, highly recommended It's not too poisonous to say it's poisonous, right? I finished reading it in one sitting, it was quite good. Come on!

It's very flavorful. The weight of the garden drama is very big, and there are also identity logics such as imperial examinations. I feel very comfortable with the coordination. I am consciously the first in the character design of the Red Mansions fan, and the poisonous point is the protagonist's character. I don't think it is established. The author must not listen or follow. I hope there will be more, and I will continue to read another book. Don't be discouraged (I love watching the garden drama)

Recommended by old bookworms, the whole story shows that Wang Xifeng's jealousy has caused a bit of disharmony in the family. It's a bit confusing that the protagonist didn't intervene in advance. It's just a marriage arranged by the elders, and it's generally harmless. It's quite outstanding.

The book is quite good, but some parts are too brief and the reading is a bit streamlined. I feel it would be better if it could be more detailed.

Each character written by the author retains its original personality. Simply put, there is no OOC.

I've seen 52 chapters so far. They're pretty good and payable. I hope there will be more.

The writing is very good. I read it in one sitting. Come on.

It's rare for a new author to write to this level. I found it very comfortable to watch, and the characters are also delicately drawn. I hope that the subsequent plot design will go its own way and keep it fresh. After reading too many Red Mansions fanfiction, the characters and personalities will be imitated in the readers' minds. It is not difficult to imitate them, but it is rare for the plot to follow the author's own path.

I feel that the writing is very good and very consistent with the original work. Like other fan fiction, it always writes about court disputes, which is too dramatic. The language, words and deeds of this book are also very restored.

It looks good, it's really good, and the language style is also very comfortable.

The writing is quite good, and the characters are consistent. I love watching garden dramas. It's normal for some people not to like it. Most people who watch Tomato like to read cool stories. They think garden dramas are just for everyday life, so they like to watch pretending to be slapped in the face and directly rebel.

The Garden Opera is the closest to the original work I have watched so far. The dialogues of the characters are very consistent with the original work. I am afraid that the resurrection of Mr. Cao will only be at this level. There are also shortcomings. The plot is too scattered and updates are slow. It is indeed not fast to write in this type.

It looks good. The author's writing style and character descriptions are very close to the original work and very consistent with the portrayal of the characters in Red Mansion in my imagination. After all, it is a fanfic. It is already very good that the author can write like this. I hope the author will continue to work hard, full marks! ! !

If it is all collected, I suddenly thought of a big question, what about Yuanchun?

Please mark it, the writing is good, but the garden scene feels girly! And it doesn't work. No matter how grand the world view of Red Mansion is, it is nothing more than (Emperor) (Prince), the main thing is the interesting timeline!

Good book, more from the author soon