The 7Th Book in This Life of Writing Books

It is indeed a classic goblin fantasy literature, but the writing is not bad, keep up the good work It becomes more abstract as you go to the back, and the protagonist in the back has become Brother Huozi [laughing awkwardly]

To be honest, what the author wrote is really real. I haven't seen such a real novel on Rotten Tomatoes for a long time. I really couldn't stand it after watching it. There was a story about how the author's writing was very good, but it was too real and depressing. There was nothing exciting about the whole process. I only saw the protagonist on the side of the road. Anyone can step on it, and the system is even more of a joke. . .

The author's psychological description and emotional mobilization are really good. The only problem is that it is dark and depressing. I always feel that the author is such a person in real life, so he can write such depressing and dark things. X depressive masterpiece Why do the male protagonists get more cs as they write more and more? I see the latest trend is that the male protagonist cheats money and sex.

The writing style is delicate and true, and it's not the cool kind. If you want to read cool writing, you can take a detour. I've tasted it. If you want to try a different style, you can take a look. It's a bit depressing during reading, see if you can accept it. 🉑Maybe I haven't seen this before, but I actually saw the latest chapter [face covering], it's incredible. I seem to see a little bit of myself in the book, and I have mixed feelings about it. Let's see the follow-up. I hope the author won't hurt Li Jiayi too much, be nice to her, and give her a good ending.

The author is so patient... The pace is very slow, and the protagonist's own immaturity led to depression in the early stages, so it can be expected to be a coming-of-age story. However, the logic is always self-consistent, and the protagonist's problems are explained by his identity and growth background. The writing is neither fast nor slow, and the story has good tension. However, I am very worried about how long this book will be. This kind of seemingly big-budget story will not be interesting enough if it is not long enough. I wish the author smooth creation and fast and frequent updates! The turning point finally begins... The author is so patient! Come on!

[Facepalm] I've read too many tomato novels, and suddenly I came across this kind of stinky rat literature. It's quite interesting without bringing in the protagonist. The author profoundly depicts the behavior of a sexually repressed paranoid after acquiring the system, which is a new track.

It's pretty good, because with the system you can't tell the difference between dreams and reality. I feel like the writing of the diaosi male protagonist who can do whatever he wants is very realistic. I have read a lot of dream books. Most of them are about men and women being dragged into a dream. When the woman wakes up and has memories, she will fall in love with the hero. Even if the woman is a female CEO and the man is a male loser, it is outrageous. This opening is hilarious and true. Haha The psychological description is very delicate, the description of women is also very delicate, and the psychological description of the male protagonist is also very real and delicate. Better than 99.99999999% Of Tomato books. Including those books rated nine or above. This is no exaggeration. As you read on, you will see many comments from readers saying, "This can't be the author's personal experience." This kind of comment is basically one of the highest-level comments on a novel. In the past, novel authors spent several years collecting stories, researching and experiencing life, in order to make the novel look like the author's personal experience!

Yes, although the protagonist is a coward, it is very real. I can't stand the current cool article at all. I look forward to the protagonist taking down that Zhou Xiaolu Author, you are so invincible. Even if you can make the protagonist a bit more cowardly, I have never seen a protagonist who was so scared that he peed his pants. God, but I will continue to read it. You are so awesome.

The author Ma De has written so well, perfectly portraying the image of a sexually repressed diaosi in reality. Just like the protagonist in the description, I like obscenity and have often done so since kindergarten. Alas, I am depressed and poor, and obscenity is the best way to relax.

It's cool and humane. Although some parts of the plot are slightly depressing, it also expresses the amplification of desires of an ordinary person. Human nature is evil. When one has a sharp weapon that no one can discover and suppress, the evil of human nature will be magnified. Now I feel aggrieved and no longer happy at all! I can't stand it anymore unless it's reversed [face covering]

In fact, the writing is quite good, but the protagonist is a bit abstract, but it does use the perspective of a very mediocre protagonist with low self-esteem. It is not that there are no such people in reality, and the perspective is strange. It is the first time I see it, and it is quite interesting. I can't stand it any longer. Can the author make the protagonist smarter? The main reason is that this is really too stupid. After reading Chapter 58, although I am also a mouse and a dark person, I am really not that stupid. I am greedy and stupid. This is really unbearable. Although the writing is indeed very mouse and dark, which is quite interesting, but it is so stupid.

I have read a work with a similar theme before. The plot of "Goldfinger", which changes cognition through hypnosis, also starts from the female boss of the company. In comparison, the current protagonist of this book is a bit paranoid and depressive, and the reading experience will make people feel that the pace is relatively heavy. After seeing the latest chapter, the overall atmosphere is still "depressive". I personally hope that the protagonist can grow up as soon as possible and give full play to his own advantages and abilities, so that the plot tension will be stronger. If there are breakthroughs in subsequent character growth and plot development, I will consider adjusting the rating. I hope the author will continue to work hard.

Although the protagonist is trash, he is also very three-dimensional, delicate and real. Overall, it doesn't feel like a novel, but feels like a life note and a journey of growth. The storyline unfolds naturally and does not take the perspective of the protagonist. It is very good from a third-party observer.

You are mistaken. This is not a funny article but a satirical article [laughs]. The author is warning us to grasp our own boundaries and not interfere with the happiness of others. It is so realistic. Don't you think it is sacred?

The truth is indeed true, that is, the male protagonist is getting born more and more

Awesome, written in a realistic, ugly and funny way

Full marks, realistic, bypass the suggestions for reading cool novels, but the writing is very good, and it feels like you are reading a serious novel published by a publishing house more than 20 years ago. The author should not be affected by the rating and just keep writing. The Tomato rating is not very useful. Just follow up and read it. It will be ok. This novel will eventually get a rating of 8.0 Or above.

I feel like it's the author's autobiography, @EATING Monster, right? Or is it the autobiography of a criminal?

Awesome, very immersive, very realistic

It truly simulates the process of a little person who lacks love getting magical powers that are not his own and thus indulging his desires. This is called the mismatch of virtue. When a person's inner strength cannot control his own magical power, is this system a blessing from the gods or a temptation from the devil?

The only sexually repressive novel I've ever seen. Ha ha ha ha

How should I put it? [I learned] mainly not to take on the role of the protagonist. I just like to watch the protagonist, a gutter crawler who is incompetent and furious. It is inexplicably refreshing.

The protagonist is Cao Cao. Cao Cao can watch it. If he gets the golden finger, he will keep circling around the married woman. The couple is very loving, so the protagonist insists on getting in. [Smile] The first thirty chapters are pretty much like this [Smile]

If you don't find a way to exploit the system, you blame the system for not being good. You are really just a mortal. You are setting your sights. You will probably find out how to use the system later. Hahaha

Can. Good. The main character is awesome. Very perverted. I like it [laughing]

This is the first time I have read a novel like this. The author's writing style and plot are very good.

I have read the latest chapter, and it feels like the author is constantly refreshing the moral bottom line, which is poor Li Jiayi [face covering]

Toxic, run quickly, don't look back

The author's writing is good. I just want to interview the author. What is the original intention of creating this system? All I can say is that this subject matter is too bizarre and I don't understand what the author is thinking. Can't you just write a great novel? It's not like you can't play well

It's a wonderful book, you can give it a try It's not that there are multiple female protagonists, it's all just YY. There is no single female protagonist. The protagonist is also very useless. He has cheats and doesn't know how to use them, and his brain is not working well.