The Sin of Immortality: The Corruption of Heaven's Will

The combination of Cthulhu and Xiuxian is very good and very curious. I won't go into details and show the original text: Countless disciples were so excited that they were shaking all over. Some even became incontinent on the spot and leaked poisonous water from excitement. Ancestor touches the top! That is the opportunity to be directly implanted into the original parasite by the ancestor, and then reach the sky in one step and become a real monster!

It's super good-looking, and the description of weirdness is no less than that of a weird fairy. The heroine (probably the senior sister) is described very well, and there's no straight masculinity at all, which makes me wonder if the author is a girl. I highly recommend it!

This novel feels pretty good, the Chinese Cthulhu flavor is very strong The style is a bit similar to a novel I read before called The Brother of the Younger Brother. It also gradually splices together the clues of the world based on the plot. The protagonist sees the world and the reader also sees the world. However, there are some differences. The novel of The Younger Brother of the True Brother is finished, but this novel is not yet finished. And the novel about Who Comes Out of the Earth is scary and strange, not Cthulhu-like. The last star will be given after the novel is actually finished.

This book feels like a dark myth, with plant distortions, the changes of a group of people chasing the immortal road, and a very novel angle of cultivating immortals. The author's writing style is very good. It is not recommended to read it while eating. The description is too detailed and makes you crazy. The character polish is perfect. Senior sister Su Qing is now not only a grasshopper on the same string as the protagonist. , As the plot develops, I feel that the two of them are both teachers and friends. What impressed me the most in the whole story is that the boss of the black market is very generous. I hope to give more gold coins to the protagonist in the future. (I forgot the full name, but it melted like a candle, and the gold elixir turned into a little monster that can eat people from the inside, which really surprised me)

It's a pretty good book, but nowadays there is serious homogeneity. The core of what this book says has not changed, it is still about eating turtles. Then slap him in the face. Eat the turtle and then slap it in the face. But this book describes it completely differently, and it's quite interesting.

The character setting and world view are indeed very good, with strong impact and novel setting, and there is a clear contrast between the characters and the world view. However, the article has a strong AI flavor, the connection between the plots is not tight enough, there are too few foreshadowings, and the turns are too stiff. For example, the token for the Outer Sect Competition was never mentioned in the previous article and the protagonist obtained it, but it suddenly appeared. I hope the author can add more foreshadowing on the basis of AI polishing to make the plot connection less rigid. Come on, author, I think your article is still very good.

Ten chapters create a complete protagonist's personality, and the writing is top-notch. No matter what, this early novel, which is not brainless, can be given five stars.

I personally can't tell if it's written in AI, but three chapters a day is a normal pace. I personally think it's pretty good. It's not as boring as traditional fantasy, and it has an extremely dark world view of Cthulhu cultivating immortality. I personally think this book is very good. This kind of non-refreshing novel about survival and Cthulhu cultivating immortality is very good.

It's very interesting. Why is the rating so low? The rhythm is very good. The protagonist is not a brainless one. It's a bit like the Infinite Flow Cultivation version. It's my first time encountering this kind of movie. I haven't finished it yet, but I recommend it.

Novel but worried that the author's ideas are not sufficient