Evil of Immortality: Pollution from Heaven

The combination of Cthulhu and Xiuxian is very good and very curious. I won't go into details and show the original text: Countless disciples were so excited that they were shaking all over. Some even became incontinent on the spot and leaked poisonous water from excitement. Ancestor touches the top! That is the opportunity to be directly implanted into the original parasite by the ancestor, and then reach the sky in one step and become a real monster!

It's super good-looking, and the description of weirdness is no less than that of a weird fairy. The heroine (probably the senior sister) is described very well, and there's no straight masculinity at all, which makes me wonder if the author is a girl. I highly recommend it!

This novel feels pretty good, the Chinese Cthulhu flavor is very strong The style is a bit similar to a novel I read before called The Brother of the Younger Brother. It also gradually splices together the clues of the world based on the plot. The protagonist sees the world and the reader also sees the world. However, there are some differences. The novel of The Younger Brother of the True Brother is finished, but this novel is not yet finished. And the novel about Who Comes Out of the Earth is scary and strange, not Cthulhu-like. The last star will be given after the novel is actually finished.

This book feels like a dark myth, with plant distortions, the changes of a group of people chasing the immortal road, and a very novel angle of cultivating immortals. The author's writing style is very good. It is not recommended to read it while eating. The description is too detailed and makes you crazy. The character polish is perfect. Senior sister Su Qing is now not only a grasshopper on the same string as the protagonist. , As the plot develops, I feel that the two of them are both teachers and friends. What impressed me the most in the whole story is that the boss of the black market is very generous. I hope to give more gold coins to the protagonist in the future. (I forgot the full name, but it melted like a candle, and the gold elixir turned into a little monster that can eat people from the inside, which really surprised me)

It's a pretty good book, but nowadays there is serious homogeneity. The core of what this book says has not changed, it is still about eating turtles. Then slap him in the face. Eat the turtle and then slap it in the face. But this book describes it completely differently, and it's quite interesting.

Ten chapters create a complete protagonist's personality, and the writing is top-notch. No matter what, this early novel, which is not brainless, can be given five stars.

The character setting and world view are indeed very good, with strong impact and novel setting, and there is a clear contrast between the characters and the world view. However, the article has a strong AI flavor, the connection between the plots is not tight enough, there are too few foreshadowings, and the turns are too stiff. For example, the token for the Outer Sect Competition was never mentioned in the previous article and the protagonist obtained it, but it suddenly appeared. I hope the author can add more foreshadowing on the basis of AI polishing to make the plot connection less rigid. Come on, author, I think your article is still very good.

I personally can't tell if it's written in AI, but three chapters a day is a normal pace. I personally think it's pretty good. It's not as boring as traditional fantasy, and it has an extremely dark world view of Cthulhu cultivating immortality. I personally think this book is very good. This kind of non-refreshing novel about survival and Cthulhu cultivating immortality is very good.

Novel but worried that the author's ideas are not sufficient

Very pretty. Li Huowang should be able to feel at home here.

The details are well described and I finished reading it in one day. I like the description of the weird flesh and blood. Recommend to others the genres I like to watch, (AI Demonic Cultivator, Computational Power Creates the Road to God (AI Seeking Demons)), (When the Moon Appears, I'm Invincible, You Can Do It As You Like), (Horror Fairyland), (Hearing the Voice of the Corpse, I Killed Crazy in the Weird Dungeon (Demon Player)), (Sequential Highway: Don't Fall Behind! (Brother Mo's Extraordinary Highway))

Overall it's very well written! However, after reading the article, most of the descriptions feel handwritten, but the panel part has a strong AI feel. It is recommended to make appropriate adjustments.

It's very interesting and the plot is very logical.

Why do those twelve senior brothers, including Senior Sister Su, look like humans? According to the world view, aren't the higher the level, the more inhuman they are?

Li Changye: I want to expel you all

It's pretty good, but it's a bit average in some places.

It's quite good-looking and suits my interests, especially the Su Qing part.

It's very interesting. Why is the rating so low? The rhythm is very good. The protagonist is not a brainless one. It's a bit like the Infinite Flow Cultivation version. It's my first time encountering this kind of movie. I haven't finished it yet, but I recommend it.

It's quite beautiful, a bit like the weird world of immortality. The only drawback is that there are too many descriptions of details, which makes it a bit visually boring and tiring. Suggestions can be improved in the future

It's very beautiful, Xiu Xian Jia Ke Sulu, the writing is very realistic.

The storyline is very special, the writing is very good, and the characterization is also great. I really like the male protagonist and the senior sister.

I think it's very well written, I mean the author's writing style! It reads very smoothly. Many authors write good stories and have a good structure, but their writing style is so poor that it makes it difficult to read... But this author's writing style is really good! I am particularly willing to see this! The writing is so real that I can see the picture in my mind ~ It must be five stars. I hope the author will continue his efforts and finish it as soon as possible! [Top post][top post][top post]

Curious, inhumane, heavy-handed, it's hard to imagine that the dark web accepts novels from members, but here they are free

It's great, the best book I've ever read in this genre.

The writing is exquisite and the plot is vivid. At first glance, it is not a product of AI. The author, please keep up the good work.

Very good

Very nice, looking forward to the follow-up

Awesome, this idea is okay

Subverting the traditional cultivation of immortality

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking