After Seven Years as a Kept Man, I Got Dumped and Hid a Beauty in My Villa

It's okay, it's pushed pretty quickly, but the pressure on the male protagonist was too heavy in the first few chapters, and the innocence that the male protagonist had guarded for more than 20 years was given to a woman who didn't know how. I'm a little resistant to it personally. Although it's a story about prying off corners, I don't think there's any problem with arranging a few clean ones. What does it mean if the two people don't come back quickly with revenge at the end of the game? It's too frustrating for readers to continue to delay, not many people like to see the male protagonist defeated⭕️

"The story about me being cheated on for 7 years without much revenge, but instead cheating on other people's girlfriends" I thought you were going to attack other people's spawn points.

The yellow-haired perspective is very exciting 🙂[smirk][smirk] After watching too much of the protagonist's perspective, I suddenly realize that I am chasing my husband. It's also good to have some yellow-haired perspective occasionally. 🤭🤭🤭

The male protagonist has no ability to continue his journey with money, and all his money depends on green energy points. Other urban system novels (except for the male protagonist who is a rich second or third generation), have rebates, companies or real estate, but this novel has nothing. The money can only be exchanged with green energy points. I only conquered two of them after 50+ chapters. I earned a total of 3200 green energy points, which only cost 320,000 in money.

Being cheated for seven years? Then green others and take revenge on society

Non-payment of wages and direct dismissal from the Labor Insurance Bureau. Because the basis provided by the company cannot be used as legal evidence. Moreover, in private companies, these are not legal reasons for dismissal. Labor arbitration will definitely win, and you can also report some areas with inadequate fire protection to report to the company.

The plot design is not very good! The character design is okay and the system is also good! It's just that the male protagonist is unlikable regardless of his personality, IQ, or EQ. He looks very weird! The greatest ability of the system can improve various occupations and life skills. The male protagonist used all the points to exchange for money. Just looking at it makes me want to laugh! If you don't have your own business, you will achieve nothing just like you have a system. If you want to open a fish pond, you will end up with no money all day long. There is no fundamental solution to the problem! Then there is the area of ​​emotional intelligence, which is too rough and not thin enough. And when it comes to emotional problems, it is even more of a mess! Nothing cool!

The reasons why I write about cheating are all related to the male protagonist's treatment of the female protagonist. Yes, the female protagonist is very stupid. She was cheated once and will not react if she is cheated again. Hahaha. The first one is that she often doesn't go home, and then they break up. Then the male protagonist often doesn't come home when he succeeds. The second one is that he is not willing to wear something revealing, but he is willing to wear it if the male protagonist allows it. Can you write it? I'm speechless. Author, it depends on whether your writing is embarrassing or not. If you don't know how to write it, then don't write it. It's a weird reason and it's disgusting.

Let's talk about the advantages first. I can responsibly say that the author's writing style is definitely not a piece of writing, but rather thoughtful. The portrayal of the male protagonist is also quite good, unlike some male protagonists who suddenly get the system and reveal their true nature like a nouveau riche. The male protagonist is also an ordinary person. He is happy to change his destiny, but he also has a bad side. However, there is no uncomfortable feeling during the strategy process, and he even blushes and shy from time to time. In the process of conquering, the bystander mentality gradually changed. In the process of getting along, I can feel the plight and struggle of the heroine. All in all, he is not a physically uncomfortable male protagonist. Lin Yuwei writes very well. Let's talk about the shortcomings. This book is written by Cao Wen, and the strategy process is really too fast. I don't know what happens next. I think what Cao Wen enjoys is the process of the heroine going from feeling good to being ambiguous to struggling to being determined. Among them, there is some ambiguity in the background of the object, and the feeling of being conquered by Huang Mao is the most satisfying thing. To be immoral, stealing directly during an ambiguous relationship is also an exciting way of writing. Rather than breaking up suddenly. It's too fast. If you write like this, you have to keep adding women, and it will eventually become a bulldozer. I only saw the first female protagonist, I hope the author will consider it. After all, without the background of the suffering master, the sense of plunder would be much worse.

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