After Ascending to the Throne, He Discovered That His Boyfriend Was Actually a Male Video Player, Long Aotian.

This kind of writing has such a strong ancient flavor. This is the real writing about cultivating immortals. The author writes it very delicately. Come on, author.

It's a very pure taste of ancient male characters. To be honest, it suits my taste. The female protagonist and male protagonist are perfectly portrayed. The male protagonist is also the kind of ancient Long Aotian who has a strong and mature personality. However, I can only give 3.5 Stars because the female protagonist is too lonely in the front and I haven't seen the back yet. I know that the person who saves her from fire and water is destined to have a very, very profound impact on her, but I not only want to watch this Oh, I've been watching it for so long, and there isn't even an NPC of the same age. It's all subjective descriptions, too long-winded and boring, and I always think of the male protagonist in some places that should be more exciting. I can understand the logic, but it really feels like my breath is stuck in my throat. I still like the kind of female protagonist who is more youthful, rather than always trapped in the warmth and redemption of the past. I want to see the heroine walking out of the Hundred Thousand Mountains, wandering around the world, making friends with heroes from all walks of life, and being high-spirited, instead of staying in this broken mountain all the time.

I thought this was the renamed sequel to Wanwan's book. I liked Wanwan's book very much. The author and Wanwan's three views are super upright. The descriptions of fighting and understanding upgrades are great. Can you continue writing it? No matter how you write it, I will support it.

It's really beautiful to watch, the battle descriptions are also very good, the framework is also very good, and I really like the character of the heroine, straightforward, strong, and courageous. It's been a long time since I've seen a work with a strong traditional cultivation flavor but an interesting plot line. I'm looking forward to it. The growth line behind the heroine, the author wrote it really well, and the writing style is also very good. No one has seen it and I will be really sad. The writing is really good. I feel that because it is a serialization, it has persuaded many people to quit. After a while, the number of readers will definitely increase [love] [love] [love] Oh my god, it's really well written. I haven't enjoyed such a fairy tale for a long time [send my heart] [send my heart] [send my heart] [send my heart] [send my heart] [cry]

I haven't seen such an authentic taste in a long time! It's this sense of cultivating immortality ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! Finally I found a book with such a pure sense of cultivating immortality! Come on, author, you must finish writing it. Don't stop and don't give up!

It's very beautiful. I like this kind of heroine very much. She is strong, not timid, has her own character, and can express her love firmly and frankly when facing the person she likes. I think everyone will fall in love with such a firm and bright heroine, so the author is really great. Be sure to write it down~

It looks good, and the setting and content are also very good. It's just that the technique is too old, some narratives are too detailed, and the progress is indeed a bit too slow. If you like ancient genres, you shouldn't miss it. Maybe you've read too many non-complicated genres and you can't stand it anymore, but it's a really good book. The setting, content, and general central points are all very good. There are too many adjectives and detail words, and I have no patience to read any more. And the writing progress is indeed too slow. There are many words, but the writing level is very slow. I'm almost halfway through the movie now, but I just wrote about the heroine's family being ruined, getting the golden finger, seeing some foreshadowing, being asked to stay behind to get rid of her crimes, and then encountering a monster. Later, I read the title: After defeating, I received a golden finger, and then I went to become a disciple and met many companions on the way to seek Buddhahood. Then, after I succeeded in becoming a disciple, blah blah blah blah blah. The setting is still good, but you can predict what will be written next.

I really like this type of novel, please recommend it. I like the heroine so much. It's well written, it has the flavor of a male cultivating immortality upgrade stream, and the emotional scenes are handled better. Ahhhhhhhhhhhhh but it's too short and not enough to read. [I'm about to cry]

The plot and characterization are both great! The emotional expression is also very delicate, but this book has a lot of psychological journey and detailed descriptions. I couldn't stand it because it was too slow and I skipped through it. (Personal thoughts)

The concept is good. The time traveler transforms into a cultivator of this world. The idea of ​​first a woman chasing a man and then a man chasing a woman is also very interesting. The fighting plot is also graphic, and the emotional transition is also very delicate. The growth experience in the middle has accumulated perseverance and the female characters she meets have distinctive personalities. Especially Yue Liu's decision to become a Taoist monk is impressive. The shortcoming is that some of the content is too trivial, repetitive, and contains a few mistakes. For example, after being rescued by the male protagonist in the early stage, the heroine was called Brother Hao. It was obviously natural the first time, but it was said again later that it was the first time and it was difficult to predict the emotional significance; another example. It's okay to mention once or twice the principles and principles of how the exercises work when cultivating immortality. It's okay to write them clearly, thoroughly, concisely and concisely. Some of the long articles have some truths that I dragged on for several chapters, which made me tired after reading them. We readers all know that they are powerful but we don't need to know how powerful they are. The writing can be concise but not redundant. Also, I didn't have a deep impression on the heroine. She is a little girl with good abilities and can farm, a resolute, silent, affectionate and immortal cultivator. There is a lot of psychological description, but it feels like there is a layer of barrier between her. There is not much language description, but I don't have much understanding of her charm. It's a bit broad and I can't understand her flesh and blood. Of course, I believe that the subsequent plots can better reflect the heroine's vivid pursuit of freedom, independence, women's love and justice, and the plots will be more exciting. I look forward to the heroine becoming the Zixiao Fairy as described in the writing.

The author's writing is really great. The story has a strong sense of coherence and the content is connected very well. It tells the story of ordinary people moving upward step by step. Rather than being strong right from the start, the character is really well created. I hope the author will update more

I like this novel so much. The heroine is determined to have dreams and work hard to become stronger. I haven't encountered a novel that suits my taste for a long time, but the novel is too short and there is a shortage of books [crying] [crying] [crying]

This book is really well written! ! It's a very pure ancient fairy tale style, but the plot is too long [laughing and crying] I haven't read such a long article for a long time. I feel that Chasing Wife's Crematorium is very late, and it takes a while to watch it, but I'm afraid of dying, and I really can't do it.

Very nice! The author's writing style is delicate, the characters are vividly drawn, and the complexity of emotions is vividly depicted. It's rare to find an author with such good writing skills in Tomato. I hope there will be more updates, come on!

When I saw the destruction of the family in Chapter 9, the family line was so well written that I added it to my bookcase... The writing was so good and the writing was so empathetic, I couldn't stop crying [crying] [crying] [crying] [crying] [crying]

I found a book that moved me again. At first, the heroine slowly adapted to the world, but she found that she couldn't protect what she wanted without fighting hard. When the heroine's family was destroyed, I really hoped that a monk from outside the world would come to save them, but in the end, only the heroine was left. It was really heartbreaking and made me cry. It felt so good that the heroine gradually became stronger. I hope she will become stronger and stronger every night.

The setting is good, AI is used a lot, but there are no big flaws so far. Because the author has modified the text based on AI, it is more fluent and the vocabulary is quite gorgeous, but it lacks a bit of soul. It is a good book to read.

The biggest feeling this book gave me is that its flaws do not hide its virtues. Perhaps there are too many descriptions of the heroine's psychology and battle scenes. But it is undeniable that the author has really captured the core of the protagonist Shi Wanwan: even after experiencing pain, he is still willing to believe in beauty and follow hope. Longing for power, longing for light. The emotional line between the male and female protagonists is really, really attractive to me. Although there are some clichés in the plot, it will only be an incomparable fit between the two of them. There is nothing wrong with a weak person craving for power and status and falling in love with a strong person, not to mention it is the first ray of light that truly shines into his dark life. Furthermore, the heroine is not a love brain. She is determined, has a strong heart, has goals, and will move towards the future she has planned. It is precisely because she and the male protagonist are the same kind of people that they are sympathetic to each other and are attracted to each other. The author will update it soon! I can't wait to see what happens next for the male and female protagonists. Never give up!

Beautiful! Really pretty! Please don't give up. [Send my heart] [Send my heart] [Send my heart] I can feel the psychological change of the heroine, it's very well written! For example, at the beginning, the heroine was transported into this world. As she had memories of her previous life, she could not actively integrate into the new world, and it was even difficult for her to accept it. Therefore, she could not speak and could only passively understand. Later, she slowly accepted herself and integrated into the new environment. This shows that she believed that she was a person in this world and recognized everything about herself, including her age, so she would not accept playing with brats at the beginning and then play in the mud with her peers. The process of integration is the process of being gregarious. The second one is the psychological change of the female protagonist liking the male protagonist. I think it was written very well! Shiye Village was wiped out, and all the villagers were dead. The heroine was burdened with the lives of her parents and even the whole village. She tried her best to survive, but was still caught up by the monster. At this time, a person who saved you from the tiger's mouth appeared. I can't help but burst into tears with gratitude, and even the adrenaline surged. I had a very thick filter on this person, and even later became dependent on your savior for several lives. Yue, you find that this person is very strong, handsome and has a funny personality. It's hard not to like her. Moreover, the heroine was still a teenage girl at that time. It was very painful when something happened and her parents and relatives were gone. She was an ordinary person from the beginning. I think she did a great job, and she worked hard and was strong. She liked someone and was brave enough to express her feelings. She was very cute. Very well written [send heart][send heart][send heart]

It's very beautiful, I like it very much [Shy] The heroine Shi Wanwan has gone from birth to childhood to now, from letting go to understanding to growing up, everything that can't kill her will become the ladder of her progress [Thinking] The male protagonist is the existence of Bai Yueguang to the female protagonist, and the most beautiful thing when she is about to die. The last life-saving straw taught her and gave her hope. Although it was only a short month, the desire to survive and the instinctive choice to be close to warmth [shy] In short, it is really good-looking and well-written. I am looking forward to the second half of the introduction [I learned it]

The author has only written so many chapters, it's not enough to read. Please, please write more. It's so beautiful, it made me shed tears. I really want to see the female protagonist act awesome as soon as possible, side by side with the male protagonist, no, more awesome than the male protagonist. [Cry][cry]

No, I'll go, I think it's very interesting, but the plot content is really very little. I feel that it's boring to watch a long fighting scene. After reading the introduction, it feels like it takes a long time for the female protagonist to level up. I feel like it takes a long time to see the male protagonist until chapter 200. I really feel that the two of them are incompatible. We are so sweet together, and I really want to meet each other soon. Sometimes I really feel tired from watching those intrigues. I just want to read some cookies, hoping to speed up the plot. After several years of cultivating immortals, I feel that it is too slow to watch the development [I almost cry]

Very shocking! This book gave me a feeling that cultivating immortality is not about the favor of heaven or the halo of the protagonist. It is just a fight like raising poison. Whoever survives will have the last laugh. The heroine's particularly outstanding "strength" is her character. Just like the author said, the heroine will admit her heartbeat, but she will never stop there. If you want power, try your best to get it, even if you are broken into pieces. Some scenes really gave me goosebumps. . . The decisive devotion of a mother, the desperate pursuit of strength... In short, the style of this novel is something I have never seen before in all my years of reading on Tomato! It's not pure happiness, it's the result of a transformation after tremendous suffering. To a certain extent, it's very real. Where can there be any gains that can be obtained without hard work? ദ്ദിᵔ.˛.ᵔ₎✧

Faster, faster!! I mainly like to watch the plot. The fighting plot is over at a glance, so it is tied up quickly. I really want to see the plot of meeting the male protagonist again after becoming stronger [crying]

It suits my taste very well. The characters, especially the protagonist, are super three-dimensional. It feels like the protagonist is slowly growing up. The author is also very good. When other authors are still writing a chapter of 2,000 words, our author can already write a chapter of 6,000 words. This point must be praised. Our author is simply the king of kings and the strongest of kings (´∩｡• ᵕ •｡∩`)

There are too few full-length female fanfics in Perfect World on the market, and Shi Hao's serialization that satisfies CP has recently been updated. Two strong and two clean 1V1s. The male protagonist has no ambiguity with the opposite sex. The female protagonist is a time-traveling woman who knows the plot. She is sober and independent and does not lick. The male protagonist has her own main line. There is a male partner pursuing the female protagonist and the male protagonist is jealous, but the female protagonist does not hang around or raise fish. But There are basically no high-quality and good articles that accept original and private works but cannot be OOC. To be honest, this book is the closest to my ideal fanfic at present, but it still feels awkward in some places. I can't explain it myself. I can only say that the author still has room for improvement. Maybe I have too high standards for reading [laughter]

A must-see if you like strong women! In the author's writing, the female protagonist is really a very vivid person. She really won the golden finger with her unyielding will. At the same time, the whole world was also successfully created. The bond with the pet and the male protagonist's love are also described very logically. The female protagonist is really a must-see! Let me emphasize that there are not many love lines (which suits my taste). If you go for the love lines instead of watching the upgrade of the heroine's baby, you may be a little disappointed, but the heroine's baby is really good! Great!

Hahahaha, the heroine's growth experience is really great, but sometimes it makes me feel a bit verbose? Maybe I read it too quickly and don't know what I'm reading, but overall the perseverance of the heroine is really rare on Tomato. It's just the differences in individual characters that I think are very good. I guess it's also a full-length novel, so I'll wait.

It's very, very beautiful. The author's writing is very good. I especially like the refreshing feeling of the girl's cool upgrade. The girl is very cute regardless of gender! ! ! I love watching confession scenes. The girl bravely speaks out her inner feelings and expresses them. This is something that most people are unable to do. She feels refreshed after saying it, and the subsequent emotions are what the hero should deal with! I'm really looking forward to the next plot! ! I'm curious about how many words this article will probably have. I really hope it can be longer. There is no meal replacement in this article. I really want to read it. I want to see it. It's heartbreaking.

I will say in the most straightforward, ruthless and direct words that this novel is simply awesome! Ram within ram! Ram within ram within ram! [Adoration] First of all, I haven't watched Perfect World (I've finished this article and am already planning to watch it). This one is really, really, really, really good to watch, okay? The emotional line makes me tingle and tingle (although we are separated again on the 10th, I respect you as a man.) [Sending Hearts] The career line makes me wow wow wow wow hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha (big heroine! Cool writing but not brainless) [laughs] The family line makes me whimper. (I keep crying.) [Crying] In short, don't miss it if you are passing by! (I rarely give good reviews hehe) But! The only drawback is—— Author! Even! Too! Slow! Got it! (Goddess, you'd better save your manuscript [smile])