Luno Trip

The good news of the Lunuo Party is that it's good to let Shai Zai get a handful of Young Master scripts [laughs] Sinuo Fist, thoughts are flowing like a fountain! 👊😱👊 Remember the sword, never forget it! 🗡️😱🗡️ Lu Nuozhang, life after life! 👏😱👏 Nono! Nono! Nono! The movie theater comes to the rescue, the first light! Echo from the subway, happy birthday! The devil under the Three Gorges turns out to be you! The conversation in the attic was poorly conveyed! Nono! Nono! Nono!

It's well written, but I have a few suggestions. 1. I have read Chapter 7 now. The author can try to learn the more popular paragraphing in novels now. Reading a long paragraph will dissuade some readers and make people feel tired from reading. 2. The author does not need to put so many brackets to explain the terms and reasons in detail. If there are settings that must be explained, they can be placed in a separate PS at the end of the chapter. That's it, I hope the author can continue to work hard

This book is very good among Dragon Clan fans. Whether it is Lu Nuo's emotional line or the decline of the boy, it is rare to see. The plot has only reached Long Er now, and there is great potential in the later period. I really hope that this book can be well written and landed safely [Like][Like][Like][Like]

A good-looking Dragon Clan fan, a different Lu Mingfei. If you like Senior Sister, you must read it. It's very well written.

I'm back [Sending Hearts], did you miss me [Sending Hearts], the company is on holiday! I arrived at my hometown [Love] today and have updated it five times a day since then! Because the author has to contact customers and be responsible for recruitment, he can only update five times a day, sorry! [Love]

The emotional description is really delicate, and the emotional line of Lu Nuo is also well written. The impulses of boys and girls are depicted, which made me feel some empathy. The author keeps up the good work, I really enjoyed reading it.

Lu Nuo's fairy tale. Hmm~ 99% rare~ Ah ha ha ha Rare thing~ It's still very interesting, but why does it feel like the number of readers has dropped so much?

The clear traffic in Novel on Haokan Road is also huge. Chapter 10 is so cool [laughs] 666 Labor actually changed the cover and it looks pretty good [shy]

Very nice, meets my expectations

Are the Lu Mingfei in front and the Lu Mingfei in the back the same person?

So damn good looking

It's a little bit nice, it's nice, it's a bit nice, it's nice

This is the fastest author I have ever seen Come on author [code hold] [code hold]

How could this book not be rated? I almost missed it when I first looked at the name. It's very well written. It's so interesting and I love reading it.

It's very beautiful. Lao Zuo also has his own design. I'm looking forward to its future development.

Very good. I hope it can be updated continuously. Don't stop updating. Please author. Author, please don't do it. You won't let Eri Yi and Gen Zhi live together in the future, right? If we are really together, then I'm sorry, your five stars are gone. I can't stand this.

Very well written, good luck to the author

Ninety-nine percent, that's too public

Very, very, very beautiful

It's great, why doesn't anyone see it?

This book is very good, the writing is moderately good

Very well written, good writing style

Lunuo Party's dream has come true [Like][Like][Like]

It's different from the previous one, but it still looks good.

It's very beautiful, and the updates are of high quality, so it doesn't feel too bland.

Excellent writing style, strong sense of substitution and easily arousing associations

Perfect, five updates a day, the writing is also exquisite, Lu Nuotang is ecstatic [like][like][like]

It's beautiful, I can't get enough of it

The plot is written in quite detail. It completes part of the settings of the original work and makes a good change. The writing is quite good.

Very pretty, lots of sugar