Shuobei Longyin

The entry point of the story is better. The combination of border army cannon fodder and iron weapons is very tense. The description of the war scenes is very impactful. The pressure of survival of the characters is well portrayed. The overall story is more passionate. The disadvantage is that some plots advance quickly. The details can be polished. Fortunately, the writing is good, so it is not harmful.

The subject matter is considered a relatively hard-core border style among time-travel novels, focusing on battlefield survival rather than machinations in the harem, and the style is tough. The opening chapter has a strong sense of substitution and a sense of oppression. It is suitable for readers who like realistic military affairs and survival in troubled times. The writing is good and there are no obvious poisonous points. But overall there is still room for improvement

At the beginning of time travel, you are a frontier scout, facing the desperate pressure of tens of thousands of cavalry, and in the next second you take out black powder and blast out a new world - this book perfectly combines the thrill of dimensionality reduction with the roughness of the iron-blooded battlefield. Three hundred thousand cavalrymen bowed their heads in front of the Modao formation. In the undercurrent of the court, the prince poured the wine himself. The beauty of the prairie and the daughter of a famous general each had their own character. Xu Mu's "Xu" means making a wish, and "Mu" means shepherding the world. He led a group of frontier men, used gunpowder to blow through the conspiracy, and also exploded the hottest brotherly loyalty in troubled times. It is densely packed without losing the background of home and country. It is worth picking up for readers who like iron blood on the frontier and battle of wits in the court.

A great start! The time-traveling scout encountered tens of thousands of cavalry, Black Gunpowder reversed the desperate situation, and 300,000 cavalry knelt down to worship the leader. It's a hard-core and exciting work with a story about frontier affairs, machinations on the battlefield, beauties and famous generals, sophisticated writing, compact plot, and historical time travel! Wonderful, looking forward to, fattening,

Different from traditional time-travel novels, "Shuobei Dragon Song" breaks out of the stereotype of personal heroism. In addition to Xu Mu's rise, it also writes about the passion and return of a group of frontier soldiers. From breaking the situation with black gunpowder in a desperate situation, to subduing the cavalry and calming the undercurrent in the court, the story always closely follows the background of the war at the frontier, and writes the cruelty of war and the treacherousness of intrigues deeply. Xu Mu is not a lone hero. He is surrounded by brothers who live and die together, soldiers who fight side by side, and undercurrents in the court. The plots of the prairie beauty and the daughter of a famous general did not take over the spotlight, but instead made the character arcs more complete. This is not only the legend of one person, but also the epic of a group of people protecting their homeland. It has the joy of a refreshing novel and the weight of a historical novel.

The opening chapter is about becoming a god! Passing through the frontier army scouts, encountering Tiele's tens of thousands of cavalry, plus aristocratic families digging pits and powerful people stumbling upon each other, the atmosphere of the desperate situation is full! Everyone thought that the male protagonist was dead, but he took out the black powder with his backhand and destroyed the enemy camp with a "boom". The dimensionality reduction attack made people's blood boil with excitement! Behind him, 300,000 cavalrymen knelt down and surrendered, Mo Dao arrayed and swallowed up mountains and rivers, the beacon smoke at the border was intertwined with the iron-blooded brotherhood, and the secret battle in the court was even more suspenseful. The beauty of the prairie and the daughter of a famous general are destined to be together, but the prince wants to share half of the kingdom? Those who make wishes, those who graze, control the world with their strength! This is not the legend of one person, but the return journey of a group of people. It's determined!

This article is so good, folks! The writing is very good, the characters are detailed and three-dimensional, and the plot doesn't feel like a routine. Woohoo, I haven't seen such a heart-warming article in a long time. I love it so much. The author, please pick up your keyboard and cook a few more chapters for me. I eat it like crazy, I love it! !

The overall reading experience is smooth, without obvious flooding, and the opening chapter is attractive enough. The battlefield is described with pictures, and the protagonist's growth line is clear. The disadvantage is that some of the plot twists are a little deliberate, and there is less psychological portrayal. It pays more attention to rhythm and refreshing feeling. It may not be suitable for those who like slow and delicate.

It is an exciting story about ancient wars, with a fast pace and a dense atmosphere. The beginning is a desperate situation where aristocratic families are digging holes and barbarians are suppressing the situation. The protagonist uses black powder and golden fingers to make a comeback against the wind, and the dimensionality reduction attack is full of excitement. The protagonist has steadily grown from a low-level scout to become brave, resourceful and responsible, the supporting characters are vivid and three-dimensional, and the group portraits are passionate and moving. Logic Online's writing is excellent and I couldn't stop reading it. Please update it with my real name!

There is no protection period for novices at all, and I am killing like crazy at the beginning. I am facing tens of thousands of iron cavalry. The advantages are outstanding. There is no unnecessary foreshadowing in the climax at the beginning. The sense of quick kill at the border is restored very well. The logic is relatively reasonable and there are not many mindless and cool routines. The sense of realism is relatively strong.

Time travel has led the whole country to the top. Recently, I have been addicted to the "Cheng Hetai", and I have become obsessed with this kind of upper-level vision. The logic of this book is online, and the excitement is online. You can't stop reading it. The last time I saw a special soldier galloping through the ancient battlefield and reaching the pinnacle of life was so enjoyable to read, it was Xun Qin Ji. Haha. Not only is the protagonist responsible and reliable, but the ancient companions are all flesh and blood, some are funny, some are tough guys, and some are fans, which makes people want to stop. Real-name reminder!

Xu Mu counterattacked in a dead end, with black powder blowing up tens of thousands of cavalry, and 300,000 cavalry obeying orders. The princes were divided into kingdoms, and all the beauties and famous generals were under his command. The pace was fast and dense, the iron-blooded border fortress and the court were full of intrigues. The more you watch, the more you become more and more superior!

What strikes the eye is a stunning picture, and what strikes the heart is a profound soul resonance. The writing has thundering momentum, but also tenderness and delicacy. The work has great stamina. It is refreshing to read it for the first time, and it is worth savoring it again and again to realize its true meaning.

This is a fast-paced, exciting story about an ancient war. At the beginning, the protagonist Xu Mu is placed in a desperate situation where aristocratic families are digging holes, powerful people are constraining them, and barbarians are suppressing the situation. He uses "black powder", a golden finger with a strong sense of contrast, to complete the dimensionality reduction attack, instantly turning the "certain death situation" into a "one-pot" crushing situation, which directly fills the feeling of satisfaction. [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

The author's writing style is calm and delicate, without piling up rhetoric or deliberately sensationalizing. The details such as environmental description, psychological description, action and demeanor are handled accurately. A few strokes can heighten the mood and conceal clues, which not only serves the plot but also enhances the texture of the text. The characters are touching and touching!

It's my favorite type, the plot is great! Well written and the plot is good

The theme of the story is novel, the plot is compact and not sloppy, the author is very imaginative, and the plot is very creative. The details are in place, making it look like a painting and very attractive. The protagonist's character is likeable, the plot advances layer by layer, and the twists and turns are surprising. Recommended!

The wonderful pen is soaring into the clouds, the meaning is long and the rhyme is fragrant. The chapters are interlocked like rings, and the layers are like waves. The characters are vivid and vivid, and the plot is full of twists and turns. Since then, the literary world has become more colorful, and his ink has been well-known throughout the ages.

The writing is good so far, the plot is compact, the design is reasonable, and there are no fake and empty designs. The only drawback is that it's a bit scattered. I hope there won't be any designs of guns and ammunition at the back, that would be a bit fake.

Crossing the border guard to start the game, the thrill of counterattack in a desperate situation is full of excitement!

It's so beautiful, it makes my blood boil! Just finished reading it, the writing is very good

After watching it, the plot rhythm is very good and very interesting! Come on! !

Very beautiful, very imaginative, and well written

Very exciting, the plot is very contagious! It's very well written, cheers!

The writing is very good, the plot is strong, and it is very interesting to watch!

The plot is very exciting, the subject matter is very good, and it's beautiful to watch. Just finished watching it, looking forward to the episode tomorrow

The scene of the surrender of 300,000 cavalry was domineering and shocking!

Step by step, he grew from a young scout to a general commanding 300,000 cavalry. While fighting the barbarians at the frontier, he also dealt with the nobles of aristocratic families in the court. There is also the emotional line between the beauty of the prairie and the daughter of a famous general. It is passionate and touching! There are many battles and famous scenes in the book. Those who like passionate time travel and frontier war stories must read it!

The writing is very good, the pace is fast, and the entry point is sharp. It is a rare good book. The whole storyline is very exciting, with climaxes, rigorous logic, and smooth structure! People who watch it can't stop, it's very beautiful!

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