Xingyue: Let Me Go, I Don't Want to Be the Savior

I think it's a good book. The transformation process from wanting to be hugged to being rescued at the beginning is okay, but it still feels a bit stiff. Maybe it's because I don't know enough about the plot. It feels like the protagonist is accommodating others, and the author may not want to change too much. But hasn't it changed from the moment the protagonist entered the scene?

Yes, play it slow. The protagonist has an IQ, doesn't act rashly, and has a certain charm of personality. Although it strictly follows the original work, it is more stable and the writing is good. However, the starting point of the protagonist is a bit low. At least he can be easily assassinated by a single soldier.

A very good FGO fanfic, although the protagonist is not a succubus like Guda, and there is also Nero Sega This issue is really good, Nero returns

Looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good If you pull it off, it won't look good from behind.

How to put it this way, we who don't pay much attention to the plot of the game can barely make up for it. I feel that there are too few changes. After all, the protagonist has foresight and many things can be changed. It feels like a good hand of cards has been played badly. It would be better if more changes can be made in the future.

The character description is very good. I feel that the protagonist is a bit like the more rational Ritsuka. He has correct views and is not brainless. I am looking forward to the subsequent plot.

It's really good. I like this book very much. Author, please update. Don't stop updating. In fact, the reason why I can continue to watch it is because the author is willing to use props to save people in the plot. Instead of acting selfishly like other fanfiction. It all depends on the author, who has morality and conscience. Although the writing is a bit miserable, it is still thoughtful.

I said why it smells so bad and so long, it turned out to be the author of Wan Geng [laughing evilly] [please update] [top post]

So since you have such high magic qualifications, why not learn magic from a martial-level servant?

The writing is quite good, starting from the first and second chapters, it gradually becomes creative, and the protagonist is well portrayed. The most important thing is that the updates are stable, and there are updates almost every day. It is worth reading [Like]

The protagonist has a certain charm of personality. The author must update it quickly, otherwise he will exclude you.

It's quite interesting. Maybe you can really make me fall into a trap [face-covering][face-covering][face-covering]

Nero starts the plot very well

I think this book is quite good.

Although the setting is a bit loose, it does not prevent it from being a good-looking book.

The writing is good, but can the protagonist learn the Shadow of Spirit Base?

It's so delicious. We're almost in Goetia. I'll watch it seriously [lick the screen][lick the screen]

Take Karna under your wing

Come on, I feel good about it

I'm not very good at writing, so I can only say one sentence. It's really nice.

Well, good, it's time to review the plot...

Finally, I found another FGO fanfic that I like. Please, I must keep writing!

The author is writing seriously, although it is not very good. I hope the author will do something different and not always follow the plot.

Sorry, dear author, I have been following your book for half a year and I still haven't given you a five-star rating. I'm sorry. And what are those one-stars? The director hasn't appeared yet?

It's pretty good, although my knowledge of the main character's plot is limited. If you lose at the beginning, there won't be so many problems [face covering]

Very good, from the very beginning until now! Come on, author! (≧∇≦)/

It's okay. It's just that the difficulty of the protagonist is a little too high. I'm almost exhausted every time before I can hit the end.

There are a few minor flaws, but overall it's well thought out.

It's okay, you can watch it. For those who don't pay attention to the plot, you can watch it.

Personally I feel pretty good