As a Ghost, It Is Impossible for Me to Be Liked by the Yandere Heroine

I finally found a satisfactory fanfic. It's not easy to find a fanfic that is more about daily life and has a single heroine Gui Yanye. What a good girl. She deserves someone who loves her wholeheartedly [crying] I felt so sorry for her after watching the original drama.

The character has no OOC, and Setsuna's description is particularly good, especially the middle finger on the train, which made me want to punch him a little bit. Although this book doesn't have many love scenes, the author always puts sweet things in unexpected places for me. This sense of surprise made me couldn't help but keep reading. Very interesting, hope the author keeps up the good work!

The setting of the protagonist is quite fresh. He is a ghost and must participate in the main plot to maintain his shape. I always feel that there will be a knife. The writing is very good. Come on! There are more than 70 pictures. It was okay in the early stage, but it felt too stretched in the later stage. At least there should be some progress or a confirmed relationship. In the later period, the abstraction of the protagonist was too cruel, and I felt that the protagonist was very coward, and he avoided Yan Ye's feelings. He was too coward, Yan Ye had already used force, but the protagonist came directly, and the soul form was really disgusting, and all he wanted was to escape. The first 50 or so chapters of the protagonist are more abstract, which is good, but the later chapters feel more abstract or less sampled. It's so abstract that it feels disgusting.

Full marks! ! ! Super pretty! ! ! The author has a sense of funny daily comics in the creation of the protagonist, very funny! The protagonist also has special abilities, and they only use them when it's important, and they don't use them randomly and without any bottom line at all! He is also very correct about feelings and three views, and he also strikes hard at other people's bad behavior! It's completely the golden spirit possessed by the protagonist, don't miss it! It's really beautiful! It's the author, I can't read enough, I'm hungry~FanFan~Update soon! (I want to eat! Rice!!! [Angry]. Jpg)

It's also based on old works, but Gui Yanye is not a yandere in the true sense, more like being driven crazy in the original work. And whether the abstract character of the male protagonist is acted out or is it just like that [Like][Like][Like]

Very nice to look at. I have heard of the legend of Brother Cheng before, but I still read this book in one go. The male protagonist has some shining points in his character: he is like revenge against bullies and does not steal things, but I think the motivation is not very satisfactory - three years of ghost life allows a person to choose between life choices and launch an offensive against Yan Ye. I can't explain the choice in front of his life, but it still makes me feel that it is really difficult to like this male protagonist in front of the female protagonist created by such an author. Yan Ye🍒 has a very good character. Judging from the current character creation, the interpretation is very good. Secondly, the male protagonist returns to the world and the city. I think Setsuna's appearance is very good, but I feel that it is best not to let such a male protagonist know that the world is good to him and then fall in love with the world. On the contrary, I think the little girl played by Setsuna is quite interesting. It's also pretty good to be beautiful alone or something like that. Don't mess with the world, fall in love with the male protagonist, and then misunderstand Yanye again. Otherwise, I really wouldn't be able to pursue it, it would be too painful. Not bad writing

There are a lot of jokes, the characters are quite fleshed out, and Cheng and Huang Mao have reached the ending they deserve. Who doesn't want to have a little sunshine who is energetic every day and chirps next to him. I used to hate the setting of Gui who is rich and has low self-esteem, but when the protagonist is directly given an entry point, it can only be said that Gui has no hair and the world is brought back on track. I don't know if it's a fan filter, but I feel sweet when I read this kind of article. There's nothing that feels like a knife, and the protagonist doesn't go into tragedy, it's just another brief farewell. I still need to learn more about my skills, and when I am successful, I will also write about fan romance [laughs]

It is a very exciting and well-written Japanese fanfic on campus. It is identified as a small number of novels found in a large number of tokusatsu and comprehensive comics. The breadth and density of the coverage are breathtaking, and it can be so abstract and interesting that it is difficult not to laugh. I recognize the author's two-dimensional veteran qualifications and divine attributes. Although several plot points at the end still failed to consistently defy clichés and were quite awkwardly written, I still chose to understand after reading the author's admission in the final chapter that this was a reflection of his own character and experience, and planned to follow the next book. Such interesting radio articles (Japanese otaku self-pleasure articles) are really rare on Tomato, and they have the legacy of ancient comprehensive comics.

First of all, this book tells the story from a unique perspective. The past of becoming a ghost makes the protagonist cherish the time of becoming a human even more. Although I have not watched the anime, I really like the character portrayed by the author. The male protagonist does not conquer the female protagonist, but to have more time to become a human. This novel setting attracted me immediately, and it is still the same sentence: CS Ito Makoto

Very nice Most of the characters have met happy endings, and some characters who were not punished in the original work have received the punishment they deserve. It's a pity that the author originally planned to make a side story to talk about the aftermath of the ending, but because he couldn't publish the side story after Tomato ended, he could only mention it in the closing remarks. It's a pity. Finally, what I want to say is that since imagination can give birth to a work of any form and give it a world that we cannot touch but really exists, as well as a predetermined ending, then we and others can naturally use our imagination to give it a new birth and give it another predetermined ending.

It's good to read. I think it's one of the few books I've read on Tomato. I feel that the score should be at least 8. I don't know why it's so low. This Tomato has already figured it out, but the ending is really a big flaw. Although the author said it was he, but if it's actually he, just write it more clearly, or post more extra stories. This way the ending is a bit unclear. I personally hate this kind of open ending writing, but considering that this book is really good and it really saved my favorite character, I still give it five stars.

Wow, the world view and characters are very good. It's a pity that there are too few updates. It would be nice if there were more updates. Now it's a bit more entertaining and nonsensical. Although the original theme is almost the same. But in fact, you can add a little more understanding, otherwise it will look a bit confusing. Come on author, as long as you perform stably, you should have no problem reaching 8 points.

It's a very interesting work. I read it in one sitting. The highlight is that the writing style is very consistent with the two-dimensional work. It's so right. It's funny and at the same time, the original characters are well portrayed. This is really rare. One of the major criticisms of fan fiction is that due to the addition of the protagonist, the later plot deviates from the original work, causing the original character to be OOC. This work was written without delay, and the original characters remained consistent until the end. Overall, the portrayal of the original characters is very consistent with the original work, and it is a very niche subject. Whether you have come into contact with the original work or not, I highly recommend reading it and give it a full score. The only shortcoming is that the author didn't know the rules when writing the article for the first time, so he can only briefly mention it in the extra chapter. Unfortunately, the ending is a bit rushed. I feel that it could be divided into two chapters, and more detailed descriptions can be made to let the emotions ferment. When reading, you can resonate with the emotions between the male and female protagonists at the end.

As a fanfic writer on campus, I personally feel that the overall story is good-looking. Whether it's the protagonist's epileptic character or the jokes, I can get it relatively easily. I still like this writing style. I read it all night long last night. As for the setting, I can give it 4 stars, but it is quite innovative. However, I feel that the final ending is not very well written. I don't really like the protagonist's tone of having to carry the whole world on his back, or the open ending. It's a nice fan fiction.

It's pretty good. There's nothing too OOC. The characters are basically the same as before. Brother Cheng can only say that they are still the same. It introduces a mechanism that has a sense of presence in the animation plot and makes the protagonist live a crazy life. It is quite interesting, but the emotional line with Gui Yanye is a bit stomach-ache... Gui Yanye can no longer be direct. The protagonist still rejected the relationship twice because of the ghost that might reappear after the plot ends. Maybe he didn't want to hurt Gui Yanye, and he didn't want to make himself even more lonely when he might become a ghost later. However, now that we have come to this point, aren't the two rejections really hurting Gui Yanye? Aren't they denying everything between himself and Gui Yanye? The protagonist who dares not face up to this emotion, if he faces such a love with no ending, can he really let it go even if the relationship is not confirmed? It is obviously a kind of harm to himself and Gui Yanye. Of course, I can still understand the author's plot design, but I just feel a little stomachache. However, the protagonist has indeed experienced ghost transformation for a long time, so it makes sense logically. I hope the relationship can be confirmed soon... (Contains spoilers) It's over. The protagonist finally finalized his relationship with Gui Yanye, and Brother Cheng also got the ending he deserved. The final ending, the author himself said, is a good ending, which is acceptable. At least the passionate feelings have settled. In fact, the ending of Fallen Line is even more touching. After all, it feels like everything is disillusioned, and we finally end up together on the boat (maybe). Inexplicably, I feel that this feeling is more like the original work of Day on Campus, a (bloody) story about the entanglement between adolescent men and women, and the passionate or chaotic emotions. The difference is that, at least in this novel, the feelings between You and Yanye are real. It can be seen that because it is the first time for the author to write, some parts have not been handled well (maybe due to space limitations), but for the first time, it is already very good. It is a rare masterpiece of a Japanese fan on campus, and it is worth reading.

Well, the subject matter and writing ideas are good, but the protagonist, uh, can be abstract, but it is too abstract. It feels like it is abstract for the sake of abstraction. The description of the characters needs to be improved, and the part where the hair is dyed is a bit uncomfortable. I thought that the original series is also very "sacred", so I will give you a fair evaluation. Please write it better, the author, the experience comes from writing, doesn't it ↖(^ω^)↗ Overall, it's very good. You have to be moderate when adding jokes. Come on, author↖(^ω^)↗

This book is considered an excellent work among comics and fan fiction. Although the protagonist's performance art may feel a little awkward when reading it at first, once you get used to it, you will obviously feel a unique flavor, which gives the protagonist some unique charm.

I can only say that School Days is basically full of gods, but the author is also trying his best to perfect his plot. Although the confession and You's struggle at the end are very painful to watch, the final ending also makes me very satisfied. Long live the Yan Ye Party, who doesn't like a beautiful girl with long black hair and straight hair who loves you wholeheartedly [blowing kiss]

A very good work. The writing is not procrastinating and the main plot is introduced quickly. It is both funny and refreshing. However, the background is relatively thin, which makes some emotional outbursts slightly abrupt. The protagonist's characterization is excellent, he is a positive person, and sometimes he is crazy. However, without watching the original work, other characterizations are a bit mediocre.

A happy ending? I like to watch. To sum it up, it turned the gloomy and dull atmosphere of the day on campus into a light love comedy. But if the protagonist does not have enough plot weight, he will turn into a ghost that is invisible, untouchable and unmemorable. There is a sense of compulsion that supports the joyful atmosphere of the entire plot. A bit like a comedian showing off in reality, right? However, because the author set the protagonist to be a god-man, this sense of destruction will be much weaker.

Five stars for the plot and five stars for the writing. It looks good. If the protagonist could control his ghost state anytime and anywhere, it would be an invincible campus novel. Please save the protagonist [making faces]. Of course, there may be bugs. Ghosts have no power to exist and will be forgotten.

It's very interesting that the protagonist is far away from people and not close to God. The plot is quite interesting, but it's a pity that the rating is not high. The author should work hard to speak up for me!

It looks good, the writing is five-star, the setting is novel, and the pace is bright. The lively and crazy appearance is the protagonist's protective color to sort out the numbness in his heart. The contrast with Yan Ye's healing is also very beautiful. We must keep going.

It is a masterpiece of the radio wave series, and you can appreciate all aspects of life by reading it. Sakurajima Yu, I will always remember you as a person [like] [like] If you want to make a serious evaluation... Then just mention it~ (α) This must be praised. The main characters created in this article are quite three-dimensional and made me feel the spirit of a teenager. The author's treatment is very appropriate. On the basis of retaining the flavor of the original characters, he treats them and the original characters in a seemingly objectified manner, but in fact highlights the original personalities and temperaments of different characters. For example, ridiculous names, punishment games, street power generation, willingness to accept defeat... A series of interesting designs! A wonderful floating picture is shown in the seemingly absurd but actually well-designed plot. Then came the passionate thoughts: (β) In reality, visible and nameless people are normal people. Sakurajima Yu was a normal person from the beginning. The ghost setting is, in the final analysis, tangible and nameless, with a human shape but no human history. This is also the attitude of history towards life. It is too big to contain our temper and character, so we slowly become people who have fun and admit our stupidity in overestimating the world. How I love plot and the world beyond the senses! I love everyone who experiences dramatic and absurd tests in the plot, and regard their happiness as my happiness, so I don't want to deny the plot. I also want to continue the plot, enter the plot, and not let the work end. Whenever this happens, my emotions will experience a rupture. I can't reach the plot itself, so I still have to be a real person. This is why every plot is already over. No matter whether we justify ourselves or not, reality is longer than the plot, history is further than thinking, and there is no need to say more. The next night will be a blurry night, and the next time we meet, I just hope it will be on the far shore.

Thanks to the author. The first time I read it was when I graduated from high school. I really felt sorry for the character Yan Ye at that time. Although the male protagonist struggled a few times in the middle of the book and it was quite uncomfortable to read and there were a lot of jokes (because it was too complicated and it affected the perception), but the flaws were not concealed. Thank you to the author for giving Yan Ye a good story😭😭😭 In fact, I think it would have been better if the author didn't add so many jokes when he wrote this article. Maybe the score would be around 9.3 (After all, if you wait for a day while catching up on updates, it would be quite despairing to get a chapter filled with a lot of daily jokes that you don't understand). There are also some low-star reviews that can't be understood because the male protagonist is afraid of being ghosted and refuses to agree to talk to Yanye several times. This is indeed unavoidable. 8.6 Is still too low for this fanfic😭

Very good article, with a lot of funny jokes, the author writes very well, very powerful ദ്ദി ˉ͈̀꒳ˉ͈́ )✧ Because of this book, I went to make up the manga, even though it was the wrong version. . . (Crying and laughing) The supplement is the he version of episode 6, but you can see that the real Gui Yanye is a very good little girl, but also very lonely. She deserves a beautiful story

I also successfully finished reading it, a very successful fanfic, and someone got the ending he deserved. The single female protagonist is also very easy to beat. Judging from the ending, it should be he. To be honest, I have watched so many pure love dramas and never encountered the sun on campus. This statement is true outside, but this fanfic is very good. By the way, there are still some pitfalls that have not been buried, right? What is the name of the security uncle? It leaves a question in suspense. Is his surname really Sakurajima...?

In the early stage, I didn't see the protagonist's divine character, but in the later stage, I felt the abstract style of the cat station next door. It was interesting and sweet at the same time, and it was not a formulaic plot. I guess it was because it was my first time to write a book. Not so many people read it, and the title The material is also relatively unpopular, but I believe that the author will definitely make great achievements in the future. Finally, when will I write a ccb extra? I haven't finished reading it yet. If there is a group, please give me a kick. Please, I will do anything [cry][cry][cry] @ who loves to eat beauty liver

This is the first time I have read a book seriously. The author has a wide range of knowledge and exquisite writing style. There are such high-quality fans in such unpopular works as Schooldays. I am looking forward to the author's next work.

I have finished reading them all. I have any questions. 7.8 Points are worthy of this score. It is good-looking, but the single heroine plus tragedy is similar to the various endings of Yuan Zhikong. Unfortunately, the heroines are the same, and the endings are the same, because life is not particularly perfect. The best ending is actually a tragedy. I also agree with this. It is not poisonous. It is a passionate love that will eventually disappear. It has passionate nonsense and sadness. It is a good book. [Laughing]