High Martial: From the Start, I Marry Twin Sisters

After reading 8 chapters, I realized why no one commented on 200,000 words. I either deleted it or just left after I couldn't read it. These chapters feel like a native, cowardly, inferior, and gloomy. There is no stagnant protagonist, no vitality of a time traveler, and no explanation of when I traveled through time. I just walked through it. The one who transcends is to go directly from childhood to adulthood. If you have just traveled through time, you will be cautious, but you will never be cowardly and incompetent. If you are from childhood to adulthood, a person who has traveled through time will not refuse to practice martial arts if he knows there are immortal cultivators. He will practice even if he is not famous, so he is inconsistent and cannot retain people.

After reading Chapter 15, I started to not understand what the author wanted to express, what was he thinking about? In a world where demons are rampant, that little flag keeps turning over and over again? Classical Chinese essays are not that difficult 🤦 🤦 🤦 It's harder to read a cool essay than to take the postgraduate entrance exam 🤦 🤦 🤦

The system wasted on you

When I received the reward, my first reaction was that I was afraid that the protagonist would eat it himself 🤦, but I really tried every means to arrange the plot so that I could eat it... There is a big pie...

Al, in many paragraphs a person appears inexplicably, and then some words keep repeating.

Are you that powerful without any martial arts skills? Bragging should be done in a certain way

There are too many adjectives!!!! It can be described as very gloomy. It looks so depressing!!!!

The writing is too depressing and affects the sense of reading.

It took me 20 chapters to advance from an ordinary person to a warrior. It was so tedious and not enjoyable at all.

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