Collapse of Iron**********

The plot is coherent and the writing is excellent Emotional, brainless * Text Expresses the protagonist's homesickness In fact, there are only a few chapters, and nothing can be seen. The specific situation should be [Time Travel] [Goldfinger] [Multiple Women] [Not Invincible] The author's strength can still be believed. It seems that there are no poisonous points so far, and the author's production speed is excellent.

It's good to read. I love reading it. I feel like two chapters a day are not enough. I hope the author can post a few more chapters.

From the first chapter to the latest chapter, I read it without skipping a chapter, and I feel pretty good. I feel like the recent chapters have been written in a bit of a hurry, but I personally feel that the writing is quite good. I hope that the emotional lines and other things can be written in more detail, as some of them are a bit rushed. Come on

It's not bad. As a book to make up for regrets, it's enough. Some of the characters in the back are OOC. After all, a lot of things have changed because of the protagonist. It's okay to have a personality change. It's just that it's uncomfortable for a lot of people to wait for a long time. At the same time, because there are more and more female protagonists in the back, the number of words appearing in many people has begun to decrease. And it can be seen that I really like Silver Wolf, and I gave her most of the words. I can only say that a bowl of water is trying to level it up.

Very good, the plot is compact and coherent, and the writing is smooth. Come on! [Sending Hearts]

Daily healing, I feel better after reading it.

It's okay, typical eggplant style, fast pace, more enjoyable!

I read dozens of chapters in one go. The character of the grocery store owner is very interesting, the plot is easy and effortless, and the character interactions are so sweet. I couldn't stop reading. Highly recommended!

It's a clear stream in fan fiction, and it's very well written.

The character-specific plot is very thoughtful.

Wu Chen's complaints and Xiao Meng's troubles make daily life full of joy and laughter.

It looks good. Come on, the author, keep updating. Just don't stop updating. Okay, okay, the relationship in the harem written by the author is very subtle, there are enemies and friends, jealousy and sweetness, but the progress is a bit fast, but this is a harem and it is understandable. The protagonist is not the strongest in combat, but he is not aggrieved. It is very interesting ヾ(ｏω)ノ

It's beautiful~~[Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like] As long as you keep on chasing it to the end!

Everyone is cute and not nagging. It's really beautiful! ! !

Come on, write about the emperor's uncle's big brother

There is no complicated plot, just a light-hearted little story, which is very relaxing.

The grocery store owner leads a messy life, but unexpectedly gains the favor of everyone, a dual destiny of breeding + happiness, healing and sweet pets.

It is a sweet and cruel-free spin-off of Beng Tie. The daily rhythm is so right. Each heroine has her own role. I feel very good after reading it.

The plot is relaxing and the sugar content is super high. I love it.

The writing is very relaxed, and I feel that some readings become more addictive.

The content is super nice and rich. Highly recommended.

The writing is very good, the details are very realistic, and it is easy to be drawn into the plot without knowing it.

It is a refreshing article that meets the needs of high-quality plot and innovative content. I look forward to the author updating more content.

This is the most exciting novel I have read so far. It is very well organized and very enjoyable. It is an excellent reading experience.

I feel like the writing is pretty good, with a sense of immersion. Although it has flaws, it doesn't have much of an impact, and it makes people keep reading!

A nice looking steel fan. Perspective and Star Master. The plot arrangement is very comfortable to watch.

The writing is very interesting, it opens up your imagination, and I can finish it in one go. I will write more if I am going to write more.

Objectively speaking, it's still good-looking. Although some of the emotional lines are a bit inexplicable, it's okay in a fanfic and there's nothing majorly toxic about it.

The exclusive plot for each character is also very interesting and worth reading.

It's so beautiful, the plot and writing are very good, it must be praised.