Beyond the Edge

OK, it is also very amazing. Children, I am the Dark Wen Shennong. After the appraisal is completed, you can buy it! It's an order! ! 😡 Although few people are watching it now, and it feels very niche, it is really well written. In Tomato, there are very few plots that are compact, even hand-written, and not mixed with inexplicable emotions. I hope the author can stick to it. [Sending Hearts] When I saw this name before, I thought it was a little white book and crossed it out. I scrolled back and forth on the homepage until it was on it. When I clicked in, I discovered Xintiandi [laughter]

The writing is good, the plot is very good, the settings are a bit too complicated, and the second world is also quite curious, which affects the readers' interest. Things that are too abstract will make people suspect that they are AI. It's really hard to describe in one sentence in the early stage, but the more you write in the later stage, the better.

Yes, it looks good, and I am decisive in killing. If I encounter a low-strength person who does not go my way, I will kill it directly. I will use the simulated world to brush up my strength. I know it is a simulated world, so I will not only improve my strength, but my strength will increase quickly. I am very happy. There are no twists and turns. When I encounter problems, I have enough strength to directly fight. No ink. Good book. Good book, good reading, focus on improving your strength, don't lose your wits, just go blow up fish ponds when your strength improves, very enjoyable writing

Very good, the copy is well written, you can level up with unlimited bugs, and the protagonist is not merciful, but the number of words is relatively small at the moment [Chigua] The world of the Immortal Cultivation dungeon later is also very good. I look forward to backhanding the first Qinghe Evil Shadow dungeon after upgrading [laughing]

It's not dark, it's self-interested, it has a bit of humanity, it's not too ruthless, it's a standard and enjoyable story. If you're bored, you can watch it. I feel like I wasted my time watching it for two hours.

It is worth recommending. The various stories are intertwined and there are no more emotional dramas. The first time I saw a woman, it was not that I couldn't walk on the Taoist road. Master Duan Shui, the identity of the Taoist priest is also a male and a female. I also feel that the child is not simple. The female is one of the twelve holy masters.

It's a very cool article. The protagonist has brains and is decisive enough. He can do anything for the sake of strength. This is a normal person. The author doesn't correct typos and there are many typos. If there were no typos, I would give it five stars.

The writing is very good. At first, I thought about the dungeon in Qinghe County to keep improving my proficiency. After reading a few chapters, it appeared, and it coincided with me. Later there was an expansion of the Qinghe County dungeon. I actually felt that the dungeon was quite well written, but unfortunately, the protagonist didn't finish it. But I kept reading it later and realized why I didn't finish it. There is actually an upper limit for this dungeon expansion. Then came the second dungeon Eternal Green, which has a very high upper limit. As of now, there is not much content in the main world. But it's not a bad point, I just feel that the author may just want to write one, similar to the kind that keeps simulating and being awesome, but the plot of the main world is indeed a bit too little, I just don't know how the author will arrange it later. I still feel that adding more content in the main world can make this book more perfect. I feel that the combat power system can also be improved in the main world. Such an event and a combat power system will be confusing to convert, and if there is no standard system in the later stage, it will actually collapse easily.

It's true that the protagonist has the brains to kill decisively, and he is determined to become stronger and will not stop because of emotions.

This simulation novel is really the best I have read on Tomato in a long time. The protagonist's combat power has been steadily increasing, and the various spell training systems are also very good. He is a perfect egoist who only wants to become stronger. He has the desire to keep reading.

The plot is not cliché, the characterization and writing are both good. There is currently no female protagonist, no ambiguity, and a dark plot. The protagonist is always simulated regardless of his fighting ability. There is no real-world pretentiousness that I hate. I don't know why the score is low

It is a rare simulation novel that does not involve the real world. The protagonist basically develops in the simulated world. Unlike other simulation novels, after a while, he cannot hold back and find branches in the real world to show off. Moreover, the positioning of those simulated worlds is the basis for his own growth, and he will not show any mercy to them.

It is considered an excellent work and should be given a nine points. It is obviously a simulator article, but it is able to grasp the rhythm of the writing very well, which is very impressive. The content of the text, plot arrangement and design are also excellent. As for the shortcomings, one is the problem of sentence grammar, such as "the distance between the two can be said to be still a long way away" and "the appearance of the Oriental is quite good", some words appear repeatedly in the same sentence, and a considerable number of sentence errors and omissions have not been corrected. The second thing is something that appears in many novels. On the same map, the protagonist and the enemy were fighting to death, and even after defeating it, no level 10 boss appeared. The protagonist came here again after upgrading, and a lot of passers-by at level 12 and 15 appeared inexplicably. In short, the combat power followed the plot and did not take into account the rationality. Thirdly, the second half of the novel is too urgent and ends a little hastily. What impressed me deeply was this: From the beginning to more than a hundred chapters, the protagonist is in the realm of dust. He is not even qualified to look at the projection of the strong man, and he can't even remember any information about the strong man. From more than one hundred chapters to nearly four hundred, this is a long ant stage. The protagonist can occasionally look directly at the projection of a strong person, and occasionally explode on the spot after being glanced at by a strong person. After about four hundred chapters, the protagonist went through the junior stage and the peer stage relatively quickly, until the finale, when the protagonist finally entered the senior stage. The performance is to be able to look directly at the projection of the strong person or be glanced at without dying, to be able to barely see the strong person clearly, and finally to be able to crush the strong person to death at will.

The character of the protagonist you wrote is like the early protagonists of Wenzhao Gong. Look at Wenzhao Gong, the protagonists are now very slow to level up. Not as good looking as before. You're not bad. The protagonist upgrades quickly. This is my favorite Christian text again. Wen Chaogong is the great author of Qidian. But I think Wen Chao is sick, so you should encourage him.

It's good to watch. The plot is very compact. Basically, the feud in this chapter will end in the next chapter. The strength has improved rapidly. The design of the second form is also very good.

It's pretty and interesting. It doesn't have a big world view like other simulation novels. However, there are no poorly controlled situations in the current chapters, and it really doesn't overwhelm the combat power. It's just that the character of the protagonist has not grown much from the beginning to now and has remained the same. There may be some growth, but not much, and it's a very stable line.

It's okay, a good simulation novel, mainly about simulation. About 400 of the 475 chapters in the whole text are about simulation. There are few realistic plots and no emotional lines. It's a pure and enjoyable novel. If you like the main simulation, you can read it without thinking.

It looks very cool😆. The protagonist upgrades quickly, and there is no miscellaneous content yet.

Five-star praise. Although the author often makes typos and does not correct them, this simulator is different from other simulators that constantly change map matryoshka dolls. This one is more like Astronomy, with different plots in each world and no repeated matryoshka dolls. It looks good, but it's too much. A little tired. The latter part is a bit more weird and puzzle-solving, and the plot of killing everything without thinking is much less.

The protagonist is cold-blooded, not a virgin, upgrades quickly, and does not overwhelm combat power.

The score for this simulation essay should be 8.6 Or higher. The plot is logically self-consistent, which is something that 90% of novels cannot do. The protagonist's character is stable, unlike other novels. He can be a saintly person at times, inexplicably cruel at other times, and reckless at other times, making him look uneasy. There is no common use of retarded trash talk in conflict plots in other novels.

Nice. The rating is a bit low, but it is better than many books rated 9.

I open my eyes and watch until I can't stand it until I fall asleep. Then I open my eyes again and continue watching until I can't stand it until I fall asleep... Not enough [punch out][punch out][punch out]hurry, hurry, hurry

It's really good, because the main plot is clear at a glance, it's about fighting celestial creatures, so the combat power can't collapse. The most important thing is that the simulation can't be stopped at all. It's really fun to be able to simulate all the time.

It's pretty good. The world view of the setting and simulation is very interesting, and there is room to expand and stack the combat power without causing the collapse of the combat power. However, it is already 150 chapters and the real plot has not yet unfolded. However, the simulation itself is well written. I hope the combat power is not set too early. At least I think it can be written from low martial arts to high martial arts.

Quite a good simulation article. There is no romance with the characters in the simulated world, and the worldview decryption is also good. There is no plot where the protagonist improves greatly in the last simulation, but a tough man suddenly pops up and kicks the protagonist to death before the next simulation starts a few pages. This is also quite good. And as a simulation text, it's refreshing enough. It's a pretty good simulation text.

You need values, you need mechanisms, you have to grasp them with both hands. You can completely think of the protagonist as an evil player who perfectly uses the SL method. He only pursues strength and combat pleasure. It is simply perfect and bloodthirsty readers will be delighted. (As of now, there is no female protagonist and no ambiguity, and I feel that I will not be backstabbed by the author in the future.) That's it, I'll post the article and wait for it to be completed, and I'll first attach a 5-star review.

The writing is good, the pace is tight, the plot is okay, and there is no deliberate pretense to slap the face, or seeing the woman unable to walk, etc. It is quite enjoyable to read it in one sitting.

It ranks among the top three simulation novels I have read. The early stage of the plot is old-fashioned, but the later stage is very novel. The unique training system is quite interesting. Moreover, the protagonist is very high-end, and it is very enjoyable to read. It is not like ordinary novels, which shows that it has reached a higher level, and it does not feel high-end at all. Moreover, it is almost over, and I am looking forward to the ending.

It looks good, no problem, keep maintaining the current style, come on