Quickly Pass Through Passers-By, but Something Is Wrong with the Male Protagonists

I've only watched one world so far and I quite liked it! Although the introduction says that the heroine is not a beauty but an ordinary person, the character charm of the heroine is more highlighted in the article, instead of focusing on the ordinary appearance of the heroine like some common female heartthrobs. Since appearance is not a prerequisite for being loved, why not emphasize over and over again that it is incredible that the heroine is loved by so many men despite her ordinary appearance? I like it, keep up the good work, teacher!

First of all, encourage yourself [currently working on the manuscript] Then comes demining: [1. Every world is HE, even if there is a forced plot, it is also HE. Every world is here to stay. (Although I'm sorry, this will not change. Love is not everything for the heroine. She stays because she can learn more. She is not here for the hero, I hope you know. If you leave every time you complete a task, what is the difference between this and working year-round?) 2. Every world has multiple male protagonists. 3. The heroine is not beautiful in appearance and has a weak personality. (The author did not bring it in) 4. Overall, it's quite daily and bland, and I feel like there's nothing memorable about it after watching it. 5. The male protagonist is poorly developed (in terms of character), which makes some readers feel uncomfortable. (This is my problem) 6. I feel that the points obtained for each task are too few. (But the author thinks that the system mall is not that important, and the heroine doesn't care much about it. The things learned in the small world are the most precious tips. However, some readers do have points deducted, so I mark it) 7. I feel that the female protagonist has no resistance to the male protagonist's coercive behavior and has no idea of ​​escape. The above are all the points mentioned by the negative reviews in the comment area. If you continue to read, it will be accepted by default. If there are more in the future, the instructions will be updated in the first chapter]

The female protagonist is quite good. I like gentle types, and the writing is good, but I really get angry when I see coercion. The female characters I met in the first world also like the female protagonist, but they are supportive, willing to help the female protagonist escape, and even want to follow. They are worried that the female protagonist will be trapped by the male protagonist, and the male protagonist The main idea is to trap the heroine. He won't even let the heroine out from the beginning... The most important thing is that the heroine actually has no ability to resist. The heroine's only capital is the hero's love. If the other party really does something, the heroine can't do anything, such as being knocked unconscious or locked up. And the heroine obviously didn't want to be trapped, but she was locked up very obediently. She accepted it very well🖐🏻Fortunately, the ending was that the hero chose to follow the heroine, instead of asking the heroine to give up herself.

An ordinary girl + love at first sight + a heartthrob. Rather than saying that she is an ordinary girl, the author does not depict a fixed appearance, but simply outlines a look. There is not much description of the appearance. Every time, he only mentions the heroine's dark hair, warm eyes, light lips and white skin. There are no insults to women, the heroine has always been the one in the relationship. The plot is concise and progresses quickly, and the writing style is generally good. I personally prefer this kind of soft-hearted fraternity flow. The female protagonist will not push the male protagonists out because of the task! Recommend

Nice! I really like the heroine, and I love watching the male protagonists go to great lengths to get close to and conquer the heroine! The emotional lines are all very well written. I hope there will be more male protagonists in each world in the future, and the female protagonist's baby should be loved and admired by many people. Keep writing and don't stop. Come on!

After reading the first world, the author said it was not well written. In fact, I felt it was pretty good. It was not abusing women at all! You can enter with ease as the female protagonist, and she has a very charming personality. She has great love and courage in times of crisis. She is willing to take risks to save people. She will not be embarrassed to stay in the palace just because she has a crush on the male protagonist. The price of freedom is higher! And in the later period, when He succeeded in revenge, he did not force the heroine to stay. Instead, he abdicated the throne and ran to find the heroine himself. This kind of thing is quite rare. Female fans should follow the heroine! (At first I was worried about whether the heroine would be forced to be the heroine)

It's very, very, very, very, very beautiful. The author's writing skills are very good and the writing is very smooth. The characters are also very clear. The heroine is very lovable. I don't know how to describe it, but she has a very natural cuteness (not the cute and soft type). Every time the male protagonist thinks that the female protagonist is cute, I nod crazily in my heart. Yes, it is really cute... The male protagonist's style is different, and the author's portrayal is very distinct and there is no repetitive feeling. It's cute! ! ! ! ! !

I can't help it, I look so good! Every character written by the author is very good, and the people in the small world are all well [cry][cry][cry] The heroine has a very charming personality. You can feel the charm of the heroine from the author's description, and I thought that such heartthrob novels are basically the type of forced love, but this novel! It's all based on the wishes of the heroine. It's really good-looking, and everyone's characters are very full. In the end, I don't want the heroine to punish the world. Although it may be paving the way for the next world, I hope the heroine's baby will always be well [cry][cry][cry]

Super pretty! I like this kind of cool heroine [Adoration][Adoration][Admiration]

The biggest highlight of the whole story is the heroine, who is really full of personality and charm. Although sometimes the emotional scenes are very angry, she does not abuse the heroine, and she is not a strong woman. The best thing to watch is the world of the princess, where the heroine finally rises up and becomes the queen. From the first world to the finale, it can be seen that the heroine has been learning and growing. She has always insisted on her own path, except for the fact that there are always a few extra male protagonists getting in the way [facepalm]. For the task, it doesn't mean that the female protagonist doesn't work hard, but because there are too many obstacles. Sometimes she doesn't do the task for the sake of the mission. The female protagonist can stick to herself. The biggest shortcoming and highlight is that the female protagonist is too soft-hearted, otherwise there will be no emotional scenes [facepalm], come on!

It is smooth and comfortable to read. There is really no abuse throughout. I feel that the heroine has always been soaked in love. Although it is ordinary, it is not heart-breaking at all. Alas, I am getting older and can no longer read those who abuse the body and mind. I like this feeling of soaking in love. Hahaｸﾞｯ!(๑•̀ㅂ•́)و✧

The content and protagonist are quite in line with my taste. Although I don't know why his score is so low. It may be because he is a fast traveler, but he only has more than 200 pictures, and he started writing in January this year and only wrote for 6 months.

It's well written. The heroine has her own charm. All the characters have their own reasons for their feelings for her. The plot develops very smoothly. I fell in love with the heroine's baby naturally. I hope this story can be written in 100 small worlds.

It seems pretty good so far. It's much better than the love at first sight novels I've seen before that have no writing or brains. However, there is a little plot that may make you feel embarrassed for the heroine. I'm currently starting to watch the third world. The first two worlds are pretty good, both are he, although I didn't have the patience to finish them all and only watched a little more than half of them. Each world basically has two fixed female suitors, and they all fall in love at first sight. Although the male protagonist is sometimes strong, the author describes it very well and does not make me feel disgusted or resistant. Well, there will be more than 2 male protagonists in the future, there seem to be 3, and I don't know if there will be more in the future. I am a little bit curious about why the female protagonist is kissing someone one second or being able to kiss another male protagonist without any psychological burden the next second. This is no longer something that a natural scumbag can explain, because the heroine seems to be interested in it, and it becomes more obvious as we go to the back world.

The author's emotional drama is very sticky! Super delicious! Moreover, this love-at-first-sight setting does not focus on describing the appearance of the heroine at all, but more of a personality charm, which is particularly good! Does this writing only get 6 points? My God, the character setting, emotional description and tension of the heroine are so well written that it only gets 6 points? ? ? ? ! ! ! Crazy

It's beautiful. Although the writing is a bit green, it's not bad. The author (*≧ω≦) Come on, it didn't come out (｡ì _ í｡)

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking [Send Hearts][Love][Send Hearts][Send Hearts][Love][Send Hearts] The male protagonists are clean, their hearts and bodies are noble, their reputations are in their own world, one or two fiancées given by the family, no female rivalry, no female rivalry, no female rivalry, girls have their own charm development The plot is good-looking, good-looking, good-looking [send heart][love][love][send heart][send heart][love][send heart][send heart]

It looks good, but can we not let the heroine's baby punish the world? It's not the problem of the heroine's baby

Ok, ok

Sometimes plainness is an advantage and sometimes it is a disadvantage

The male protagonist and his supporting cast all inexplicably like the female protagonist... The key is that they can't see the charm of the female protagonist [crying with laughter]

I saw the second one and saw the author talking about the first forced love. Who said that? Is this also called coercion? Ah? So what's the name of the one I saw before? It's beautiful! Nice! Not too much description of appearance, not bad

Oh my god, it's really beautiful. I fell in love with the heroine before the hero. Her personality is really great. It's not a brainless Mary Sue's love at first sight. It's so well written. Why is it so beautiful [crying]

Come on, the author, come on!

Is there only one male protagonist in each world, the male protagonist of the original plot?

Boss, can you write another five hundred chapters without finishing it? [Sending my heart]

Come on, come on, come on, come on, come on

It's good to read, and it's about to tie for the title in a few chapters. Unfortunately, it's only the author's first book [crying]

They are all very good babies. I am about to fall in love with the heroine.

The heroine is cool and gentle, and has great personal charm. I like this kind of heroine [Sending my heart]