Love Game: Why Are You Also a Problem Girl?

Yes, children, this is the tsundere [crying], not the gorilla who is 80% arrogant, but the real tsundere who is 80% delicate.

Okay, the plot is interesting. I just personally think that I hope that the character of the male protagonist can be written in a more restrained way. I know that the author wants to portray a male protagonist with a unique personality, but I really feel that the current male protagonist is a bit like "Jiahao from the next class."

This is already the best novel with multiple female protagonists that I can find in Tomato. It's not that the others are bad, but this one is the one that suits me the most. I like multiple female protagonists, a slight Shura field, not yandere, and a relaxed fantasy urban campus. The male protagonist has IQ and EQ, the female protagonist is lively and not artificial, and the book has no poisonous points. The male protagonist is handsome and has a sense of death, which makes it easy for me to substitute. ♥, And the writing style is also very natural and the expression is perfect. Finally, please support our PG 1/60 Archangel Gundam, Gundam is the main palace

Support must be supported. According to my experience of reading the first two volumes of "Video Gamer", "Playing Relationship", "Sister Kiss", "Spare Tire X Friends", "Destroyed Dog", etc., It is very worth reading. This day is very light, and the male protagonist is very interesting. He has a smell of tsundere that is stronger than chestnuts. It is so delicious. The design of the male protagonist shows that he has put a lot of thought into it. This is a delicious food that can be tasted. Congratulations on reaching 9 points. Now we can see the old players from 6.7 Points.

Provincial version: This book is awesome Based on my five years of experience in light novels, I can vouch for it. The author has definitely read a lot of excellent light novels. The background is very profound. The emotional processing between the protagonists is very good. I think the storyline is okay. There are no big flaws and nothing particularly eye-catching. But this is also the advantage of this book. The author is very stable in writing books, so I don't think this book will be a big hit. The most worth-seeing thing about this book is the author's writing skills, which are very strong! ! Lin Ye, Qin Ke, and Xiaolu are all characters with distinctive personalities. The plot between these people feels like a perfect light novel to me. OK, now is the review I wrote after five minutes of reading the second volume, where I was like a sausage dog in bed. From the story of Qin Ke in the first volume, it can be seen that the author has very mature portrayal of this character, whether it is Qin Ke who was just kicked out of the house and went to a hotel with a bag of rice and dead fish eyes, or the Gundam model that dead fish eyes found in the apartment in the second volume (damn it, I really want it too) ), it can be seen that Qin Ke is by no means a standard female brat, she is more like a person of flesh and blood. When you see this, you can think about it, can the people around you be simply summarized with a label? This is the author's greatness. He will think from the perspective of this "person", and really brings into the character, knowing what this person will think and do at this time. This is one of the reasons why I like this book OK, now let's talk about the second volume, which I like very much. From the beginning of the first volume with Xiaolu and Dead Fish Eyes to the world's ugliest paper crane folded by Xiao Lu at the end of the second volume, the author knows how to influence the readers. Dead Fish Eyes has also gradually evolved into an adult, and is even willing to go to the shrine in heavy rain. This book is a story of the growth of various characters side by side. Xiao Lu's classmates are gentle but sinister, pretending to be strong but delicate, etc. It can't be explained in just a few sentences. If you haven't read this book yet, what are you waiting for?

Love it. I want to ask the author when the male protagonist was whitewashed [sending my heart] It's broken. I forgot to cut the trumpet.

，😋，，，，，，，，Cos，🙏 Ahem, let's be honest, this book is very well written. The male protagonist's temperament is a bit like that of a great teacher. To put it simply, he is insincere and has a sharp tongue. I saw some comments saying that he looks like Jiahao. Please don't think of others as Jiahao if you are Jiahao. The male protagonist uses venomous words to do the gentlest thing. Where is Jiahao? In the first volume, Li Zi Jing and Qin Ke are portrayed very well, and the arrogant charm is also reflected. Li Zi Jing is cute😋. The second volume portrays Xiaolu's classmate Su Qingge, and her gentle and gentle character is well written. However, Xiaolu's classmate still has some psychological problems and is waiting to become a yandere [laughing evilly]. I'm currently on the second volume, waiting for the next few volumes. In the end, this book is a breeze, with a relatively slow pace, so those who like a fast pace can leave it. I wish the boss's books will get better and better [sending heartfelt wishes]

A very novel subject matter, the tsundere rich lady will never fall in love with the funny guy with dead fish eyes, funny daily sweet love light novel + strange world, the tsundere of the first heroine is the best setting I have ever read in so many books. The descriptions of actions and emotions of the characters in the interaction are different from the rough and superficial descriptions of most novels. The writing is very delicate, giving people a real and immersive feeling. The arrogant daughter, the cute and quirky younger sister, the gentle and shy Xiaolu classmate, the convenience store senior who works together, the cold student council president, the girl forgotten by the world, and the idol who always calls me uncle. The interactions between the characters describe a god within a god, and the plot behind it is also thought-provoking. Each story is a person's life.

I have finished reading the first chapter. It should be said that she is indeed tsundere, and she is really tsundere. [Crying] I am addicted to the Kugimiya Gomoe series of light novels and lightly adapted anime. Familiar of Zero and Dragon and Tiger are animes that I can read and re-watch again and again. I am looking forward to the author's novels being able to bring me back to that "age of youth" after the novel is completed! [Blowing kiss] What's wrong with you, tsundere? No road race, no road race, no road race [laughing]

It's a potentially good book, but the details are a little lacking and could use a richer sense of absurdity. Also, I don't know how the male protagonist can face the illogical will of the world with his current abilities. I feel like there could be more foreshadowing.

Conclusion: Worth reading, Japanese light novel, no fighting, love, daily life, gal, sweetness, the world is fake, the villain has a strong mechanism, the male protagonist is even better, the disadvantage is that it only has mechanism. Thoughts: I have read so many fast-food novels, and I thought this time it was another fast-food novel, so I thought I would finish it quickly. Unexpectedly, I saw the heroine being manipulated by the world, and contrasted the hero's high actions and high emotional intelligence, and the heroine's secret efforts to reward others. With the underlying logic, the world is fictional, but the hero is real, and the shielding is also real. I think it is a good book with great potential. At least the author has seriously thought about how to write it. Plot analysis: I feel that the male protagonist must then join forces with other characters who realize that they are being manipulated, such as the female protagonists in the original book, to find the common ground of their awakening, and try to strengthen the shielding and permanently change like a sister, so I think the solution is to have a high close relationship with the male protagonist.

Keep the four stars for now, after all, Tomato grabs a lot of books in the early stage that can be picked up in the later stage. Judging from the current plot logic and outline, it seems to be very comfortable, and the writing style also stands out. Summary: It is worth watching (of course, it does not rule out violent death in a few weeks😢)

Novel setting, and really tsundere [Send heart] Come on, author, it's great. When will the new heroine appear?

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Most of the positive reviews for this book are for Li Zijing First of all, to be honest, if we insist on talking about the core of this book, it is actually very cliché. Tsundere, mildly sick, indifferent, and loli girl queen are all the same old stereotypes. Logically speaking, I will only give this book four stars, but there are two characters that I think are very well portrayed. Of course, the rest of the characters are not so impressive. This is the author who needs to add a sense of surprise to readers in order to achieve a higher rating. The first one is Li Zijing. It can be said that he has avoided all the pitfalls of tsundere. He is arrogant but not arrogant or the ups and downs between tsundere are too big. He almost focuses on using arrogance as the main body. I think those who write about tsundere can use him as a model. It can be said that there are relatively rare books. The second one is of course the male protagonist, no need to ask, he also has a tsundere element, but I think this is the finishing touch, so that as he said, there is no comfort of stomachache, only the sadness of comedy, a bit lighthearted. I personally think it is quite good, so that it will not appear that there is only a very small part of the content in most memes. I think this kind of writing is something that those who write Disney stories should pay great attention to. Although the pace of the plot is neither fast nor slow, I feel that it becomes a bit boring from the middle on, because it is too stable and there is less motivation to read the book (the first, middle and later stages are determined by feeling)

Ouriwang is too strong. The effect of playing home games in away games is currently not as good as the taillights of Ouriwang except for the lower sister and Xiaolu. Countdown to 20 seconds veil made of curtains Lin Ye's first kiss The first rescued troubled girl, lover, beloved, little follower Idiot, the dead fish eyes in your mouth are the most beautiful words of love Defeating Lin Ye's aesthetics with her absolute girlishness This is the tallest mountain and longest river among the troubled girls, the little princess of the Qin family, the villainous daughter, who has the privilege of being a queen, Qin Ke!

Let me talk about the conclusion first. This book has strong versatility and strong countermeasures. It is rated as a super hit. The advantages are obvious. First of all, the portrayal of the heroine is very good, especially the main palace Qin Ke, who can be regarded as a textbook for most tsundere heroines. She has truly grasped the balance between arrogance and coquettishness, making her incomparably lovable. The second is the portrayal of the male protagonist. Yes, although the male protagonist is proud, but later you will find that the male protagonist is also a character with distinctive characteristics (even a tsundere, locking up with Qin Ke), with his own hobbies, life, personality and even hobbies (I'm talking about you Lemon Candy). These two points are the core of the daily novel about party struggle and harem love. This work is a complete success. There are also some shortcomings. First of all, the first chapter is a bit discouraging. After all, not all readers know that the male protagonist is a tsundere from the beginning, so the obvious sense of pride and duplicity in the first chapter is discouraging. Secondly, although the background is still unfolding, the unfolding is a bit too slow... Finally, the plot context is not obvious, but this is not a shortcoming and does not affect the reading experience very much. You can read Chapter 20 to test the waters. I believe that most people who write for the love party will be able to stomach it.

The taste is too positive, really like Nikgaru. The disadvantage is that there are basically no major poisons but a lot of minor ones (and I actually don't like the male protagonist's otaku smell, but it doesn't matter). The advantage is that the setting is novel and the characterization is very good. Each female protagonist has her own personality and they all match my xp. The emotional line is also very delicate. It is not a free industrial saccharine. You can really understand how the female protagonist falls in love with the male protagonist (at least this is how I see Qin Ke so far). I would also like to talk about Qin Ke's portrayal. It's really good. This is the real tsundere. Two points of tsundere and eight points of tsundere. It's not the kind of disgusting stomachache plot. The strategy is very fast and the plot is very sweet. In short, the flaws are not concealed. I love to tell the truth😡I like classmate Xiaolu😋I like classmate Xiaolu😭😭😭

It is a very standard slow-paced Nikkei, and the description of daily life and the characterization of the characters are penetrating. The novel is a process of reading the radio waves. It is basically readable. It should be readable even if you read Nikkei's daily life on campus. However, there is a small suggestion that can still describe the psychology of the male protagonist in more detail. To be more detailed, the descriptions of the female characters are very good, but this kind of campus daily life actually tests the shaping of the male protagonist. Of course, the shaping of the male protagonist in this book is already quite good. Although it is not a big problem to continue to maintain it, I feel that several female characters are much more vivid than the male protagonist. Overall, it is still an excellent Japanese daily campus novel. I wish the author good health and update it every day [get it]

It's okay, there are many poisonous points, and the author sometimes fights with the left and right brains. The one who portrays the best right now is Qin Ke. To be honest, the author has burned out and doesn't know how to portray it, which makes it look weird. If 6 points is the passing line, 7.7 Points are okay. I personally think it is a very real evaluation. If there are less flaws later and the plot is more exciting, it should be around 8.5 [Eating melon]

It is a pure masterpiece and does not accept any refutation. The description of the heroine and the control of the plot are all divine. It is so sweet. It is not easy to see such a good novel on Tomato. There is no need to say any more, I highly recommend it! ! ! It would have been nice if Qin Ke was the female lead, but Su Qingge still almost didn't care.

It's quite similar to the third-rate human beings I watched in some aspects, but I can't see the growth line of the male protagonist, it's just pure redemption (no bad intentions). In this case, the connection between the male protagonist and other heroines depends on the degree to which the heroine cares about the hero (it may also depend on the character of the hero). In addition, when it comes to writing about party struggles, the other heroines have almost no chance of winning except for Qin Ke's early scenes. But Qin Ke is really good. This is the best novel about tsundere that I have ever read. Purely subjective opinions, corrections welcome Wow, it's not a partisan fight at all. I just finished the first volume. It's so sweet.

Beautiful, really beautiful. The subject matter is not too new. The setting of destiny tricking people appeared quite early, and there are really many people who can write it well. I have read at least three or four good books in this direction, but none of them can reach the level that everyone knows. Let's stop talking and analyze the characters first. The male protagonist, 3.8 (5) Points, has a certain venomous tongue and only loves money on the surface. In fact, he is actually a warm-hearted and talkative man with a high dual intelligence. This character is not a mysterious niche character, he fits the current anti-routine of online reading. As the main perspective of the article, the character that the author writes about the most, the male protagonist has certain memory points (fighting Gundam, eating candy), and you can really feel that the entire plot slowly advances as the male protagonist makes choices. This shows that the male protagonist is a qualified character with certain memory points. Overall, I think it is 3.8 Points. Chestnut Essence, 4.0 (5) Points, a very classic tsundere aristocratic lady who appears to be strong but is actually very weak. As the main character in the first volume and the current female lead, Li Zijing has more and profound memory points. It can be said that Li Zijing is currently a well-shaped character. Overall 4.0 Points Xiaolu, 4.3 (5) Points. She is a gentle and stupid girl on the surface, but in fact she is an invisible yandere whose psychology has collapsed into rubble, resulting in a lack of sense of security. She also has a morbid mother's feeling due to her past tragic experiences. The frequency of Xiaolu's image is on the same level as that of the male protagonist. It is common but not widespread. Overall evaluation 4.3 Points President, I haven't gone back to my private address yet, so there's a roadside Sister, there is less description and it is too facial makeup. The plot will be analyzed tomorrow

Because I watched it offline, the duration may seem shorter, but I have watched it for many, many days (I think I have watched more than half of it). To sum up, it is still very well written, but the setting of amnesia in Class F is a bit fragmented. At the same time, it is also doubtful how the character who was "activated" by the male protagonist will face his own experience. I haven't finished it yet, so I don't know how the author will make things right. But Tsundere's writing is very comfortable, and the story itself has a sense of refreshment. Come on, author [laughs]

After reading the first thirty chapters, let me make a brief review first. The author's writing skills are in place, the description is appropriate, and the rhythm is appropriate. It is considered a good work on this platform and can be rated as top-notch. It can be seen that it has a strong Japanese light novel style, and there are many shadows of light novels. The subject matter is a typical romantic comedy, with a few ingenious innovations, but not much. The male protagonist's shielding mechanism is mainly for the development of the plot, and I don't see anything particularly novel. But it makes sense and is considered superior among works of the same type. The male protagonist is a typical Japanese male protagonist, adapted to some Chinese characteristics. There are too many complaints and inner activities in the light novel, and it seems a bit draggy and out of character from the third-person perspective. In some places, he used too much force, and he said nothing to the heroine, which made him look a bit super-masculine. In some places, he acted like a hero. Although he is a classic light novel male protagonist, his portrayal is still a bit thin, and his image of being upright and verbal is not so novel and lovable now. You can think about how to shape it three-dimensionally later. There are currently three female protagonists, and Qin Ke, who has written the most, is the best portrayed. The description of the tsundere is very good. It is a return to the tsundere character and will continue to be maintained. But it is also because there is too much writing on Qin Ke, the other two heroines have relatively few scenes, and their descriptions are relatively stereotyped. At present, there are no major negative points. If you can't accept the Japanese light novel style, you can quit immediately. If you can't accept the male protagonist's poisonous tongue and gallant image, it is also recommended to quit immediately. Apart from this, there are no other major problems. The author's current direction is to continue to develop the plot, improve the world view, and save the image of the male protagonist.

Overall, it is a very good Japanese-style daily light novel. The first volume has a very profound portrayal of the young lady. The traditional tsundere and Jiaojiaojiao never retreat from the environment. After reading the first volume, you will really fall in love with the character of Qin Ke. But just like the setting of multiple female protagonists in the label, the pure love party will have a strong sense of fragmentation in the second volume. It is recommended to stop after the first volume (I really love Li Zijing). I have appreciated 1/4 of the second volume. Students who like pure love may feel more and more uncomfortable, so they are on the edge of abandoning the trap. The portrayal of Mr. Xiaolu is very good, but judging from Chapter 25 so far, the actions of the protagonist are all arranged by Mr. Xiaolu (it feels like being led by the nose. Although the protagonist gives himself a vest that is troublesome, he will still fall into the trap set by Mr. Xiaolu out of soft-heartedness, which will lead to the perception that Mr. Xiaolu is taking advantage of the protagonist's weakness), which may lead to a poor impression. Overall, it is a relatively delicious work.

When I almost couldn't read the "campus + love" part of Niqing, I was lucky enough to see this work from the recommendation on the homepage. I can only say that it was very interesting. Whether it's the world view, the several female protagonists who are full of personality, or the male protagonist who is arrogant and super powerful, they all made me regain the feeling I had watching Niqing a long time ago. The delicate and awkward emotions between the characters are really interesting. Old people often sigh when watching it: So young, so good. This is the harem! This is partisanship! This is the level of the character I want to see! Tie! Sex! So, please write novels for the rest of your life, other readers will do everything.

I have read the third volume. This book is indeed a masterpiece and deserves a 5-star rating. I recommend everyone who reads the review to try this book. But for the author, some advice may be needed. It may not be considered advice, but it may be regarded as taking a serious look at an ability again - the ability to control the plot. The rhythm of the first volume is actually quite comfortable. The author has laid out the main line, foreshadowing, introduction of the main characters and arranged the plot without any real long-term planning. The rhythm is very comfortable because the limited writing style can focus on these not many branches. However, from the middle of the second volume, various events and character incidents have exploded one after another. Too many events at the same time distract the reader's energy and easily make the author confused the focus of the writing. Events need to be foreshadowed, but there is no need to layer too many foreshadowings. Isn't it just to increase the meaning and particularity of something when unnecessary (the plot pushes the characters away)? When reading the second volume, of course everyone knows that the last part is based on the redemption of the first heroine, but too many events interspersed in the middle will weaken the main line. When the main line cannot be distinguished, the only thing left is to see what the protagonist will do as time approaches the plot. In the end, it may even become a maze where only the author knows the route. These events and foreshadowings need to be solved and hidden, but they are by no means simply suppressed by the number of words and descriptions. The plot can be slow, but the rhythm needs to be grasped. When are the daily flaws and foreshadowings, when are the climax of the plot, and when can the description of other events and similar plots be weakened. I think this is not a suggestion, it is a manifestation of ability. It is not achieved in one step, but is improved slowly by thinking about it slowly. Only when you have a good grasp of the rhythm of the plot can you write about the abnormal daily life you want to write about. You can bury the foreshadowing and explosive points in each stroke of thinking, and say something like - "I don't want the plot to push the characters, but the relationship between the characters to push the plot and keep the characters alive." I wish the author improves himself, becomes popular and becomes the king of daily novels.

I remember that originally, there was a girl with long chestnut hair on the cover. She was swayed by the will of the world, hated by her relatives, and everyone was against her. "Even if the whole world decides that you are guilty, as long as I am still on your side, it will be a war of two against seven billion." "I even have to control your breathing rate." This is an expression of love, two arrogant people liking each other. The end of Chapter 99 is the end of Qin Ke's chapter. It's not that I'm sentimental, it's just that... There is a trace of fantasy about pure love. Of course, if it was because of this, then I wouldn't click into this book with multiple female protagonists. If you want to blame it, the author's portrayal of emotions is too in-depth... So deep that when I saw her suppressed love and her vulnerability in "in the rain", I would think... Of a girl's love, a girl's shyness, a girl's attachment and that pain... I like pure love, I like lovers getting married, I like that exclusive love, I like that love that breaks through. It's just... There's nothing I want in this book. Of course, the author's portrayal of each heroine is very good, otherwise the arrogant Qin Ke would not make me so sentimental. There is no doubt that this is an excellent novel, and of course I hope... The author gets better and better. Chapter 99 is too short to express the love between the two of them, but Chapter 99 is so long that the chapter that belongs to Qin Ke alone comes to an end...

Oh Neikar, I have read all the more than 1 million words since I saw it yesterday. If the author can update it again, Wadasi... Overall, this is a very good love story. It reminded me of the story I read before called "When the Dead Tree Sprouts", which also had this kind of mutual rescue link. The difference is that this article has more sugar than knives. It makes people really want to read it again and again. There is no plot that falls to the bottom. If you want to read a Japanese romance novel, this book is highly recommended. The character of the protagonist is very similar to the great teacher, but the look and feel is much better. In addition, the heroine is not a monster, so it will progress faster. In short, in this battle, the advantage is mine (this book)