The male protagonist's name is Murata Roofumi. He has no CP for the time being. (No CP = casual knock-off). He is a doctor who came from time-to-time. He is a heartthrob. The system is a facial control who likes the male protagonist's face. If you are fascinated by the male protagonist, you will not want it.
As a new author, I hope you can point out the mistakes and I will correct them!
Reader comments
I've read Chapter 31 so far, and there's nothing interesting about it except the protagonist's mother's heart. If it is my first time to write an article, my current writing style is pretty good, at least there are no problems such as running accounts, illogical logic, or OOC. But in this chapter of the bomber's plot, I didn't get the clue that the male protagonist's brain circuit was true.
First, the protagonist is the sister who indirectly caused the death of a bomb fan. It is normal to feel guilty, and it is understandable for the brother to want to compensate the sister. But if you still have to compensate your brother (?) When you know he is a criminal, shouldn't you be compensating his parents? He was not forced by anyone. I think there was no reason for it. He committed the crime out of hatred, and his subjective will drove him to commit the crime. In this case, the protagonist still wanted to compensate him (?)
Second, the bomb was placed in a residential building and second-hand preparations were made (with remote control). I think bomb fans are those who clearly know that their actions are criminal, and the relatively heinous behavior of blowing up other people and buildings can be released as long as the protagonist signs a letter of understanding (?), Which I think is ridiculous. Don't the police think the bomber is committing a crime? Because his sister is dead and because his bomb did not explode, he can be acquitted as long as the protagonist signs (?). Shouldn't that be the signature of Hagimatsu's bomb disposal police? The one in the bomb range is not the protagonist.
In short, the plot of this chapter is rather far-fetched. Maybe it is just to highlight the protagonist's image, or to save Hagimatsu Bai Yueguang, but I don't understand what the protagonist is thinking.
However, this article still has its advantages. For example, the selection of materials is relatively novel. This is the first time I have seen an article from this perspective of a doctor joining a black organization. The writing style is also good, the coherence of the article is also good, and the connection between each chapter is very natural. I think the function of the system can be strengthened, otherwise it will appear useless. For example, the props provided by the system can add effects in a short time. I am still very optimistic about this article, so please give it a thumbs up to the author＾0＾~
It's really beautiful. Although there are sometimes small flaws, the author will explain it when you point it out. Da Da is very dedicated and gentle. I believe that Da Da, who wrote such a beautiful character, is also a sunny and cheerful beauty sister in life [laughs] The relationship between the protagonist and Gin is very touching, but the quality of the protagonist is more worthy of our exploration. It is a book with great potential, cheers Da Da!
Hee hee hee, it's really good-looking, the beauty of the protagonist stuns me to death (screams joj)
It's okay. Is Gin a private establishment? Blue eyes, the main character is okay later on, except for the crime of indirectly killing people inserted in the middle, other things are okay, and the friendship with the little boy is okay and pretty easy to relate to.
It's very interesting, and the catalog is very thoughtful. It's one of the few Conan fanfics I like. But why did something like that happen caused the author to be embarrassed [crying][crying][crying]
I think Chapter 81 is quite interesting so far.
She has a cold face but is delicate and gentle. Both the black and red cubes are delicious.
You're going to kill me
It's okay, you can take a look.
The author's writing is very beautiful, but the protagonist feels very distressed when there is a knife in the middle.
Like this book very much. The author writes so well [adoration][adoration][adoration]
Beautiful! I don't know how to praise it, but I think it's a pretty good book [laughing]
I've read Chapter 31 so far, and there's nothing interesting about it except the protagonist's mother's heart. If it is my first time to write an article, my current writing style is pretty good, at least there are no problems such as running accounts, illogical logic, or OOC. But in this chapter of the bomber's plot, I didn't get the clue that the male protagonist's brain circuit was true. First, the protagonist is the sister who indirectly caused the death of a bomb fan. It is normal to feel guilty, and it is understandable for the brother to want to compensate the sister. But if you still have to compensate your brother (?) When you know he is a criminal, shouldn't you be compensating his parents? He was not forced by anyone. I think there was no reason for it. He committed the crime out of hatred, and his subjective will drove him to commit the crime. In this case, the protagonist still wanted to compensate him (?) Second, the bomb was placed in a residential building and second-hand preparations were made (with remote control). I think bomb fans are those who clearly know that their actions are criminal, and the relatively heinous behavior of blowing up other people and buildings can be released as long as the protagonist signs a letter of understanding (?), Which I think is ridiculous. Don't the police think the bomber is committing a crime? Because his sister is dead and because his bomb did not explode, he can be acquitted as long as the protagonist signs (?). Shouldn't that be the signature of Hagimatsu's bomb disposal police? The one in the bomb range is not the protagonist. In short, the plot of this chapter is rather far-fetched. Maybe it is just to highlight the protagonist's image, or to save Hagimatsu Bai Yueguang, but I don't understand what the protagonist is thinking. However, this article still has its advantages. For example, the selection of materials is relatively novel. This is the first time I have seen an article from this perspective of a doctor joining a black organization. The writing style is also good, the coherence of the article is also good, and the connection between each chapter is very natural. I think the function of the system can be strengthened, otherwise it will appear useless. For example, the props provided by the system can add effects in a short time. I am still very optimistic about this article, so please give it a thumbs up to the author＾0＾~
It's really beautiful. Although there are sometimes small flaws, the author will explain it when you point it out. Da Da is very dedicated and gentle. I believe that Da Da, who wrote such a beautiful character, is also a sunny and cheerful beauty sister in life [laughs] The relationship between the protagonist and Gin is very touching, but the quality of the protagonist is more worthy of our exploration. It is a book with great potential, cheers Da Da!
Hee hee hee, it's really good-looking, the beauty of the protagonist stuns me to death (screams joj)
It's okay. Is Gin a private establishment? Blue eyes, the main character is okay later on, except for the crime of indirectly killing people inserted in the middle, other things are okay, and the friendship with the little boy is okay and pretty easy to relate to.
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It's very interesting, and the catalog is very thoughtful. It's one of the few Conan fanfics I like. But why did something like that happen caused the author to be embarrassed [crying][crying][crying]
I think Chapter 81 is quite interesting so far.
She has a cold face but is delicate and gentle. Both the black and red cubes are delicious.
You're going to kill me
It's okay, you can take a look.
The author's writing is very beautiful, but the protagonist feels very distressed when there is a knife in the middle.
Like this book very much. The author writes so well [adoration][adoration][adoration]
Beautiful! I don't know how to praise it, but I think it's a pretty good book [laughing]
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It's worth reading this novel