Coming Home from Work, I Happened to Take Down a Bandit Hideout

It's so awesome! Whether it's writing, plot, characters, logic, it's outstanding in every aspect! It will make anyone watching it excited. It's great!!! It's a pity that it's too short! Of course, this is not the author's fault, after all, it just started writing not long ago. It's my fault that I discovered this wonderful book so early... Blue Skinny Mushroom——

It's an okay AI article. Is the level of AI so high now?

The plot is not great, but it is smooth. The main reason is that the description of the fight is very eye-catching. I was not sleepy after watching it at 4 o'clock in the night. I just don't know how to develop it in the future. Is it a business or a martial arts route?

The plot is ups and downs and compact. In the early stage, the protagonist is too pretentious and unlikable. In the later stage, the character becomes more fleshed out and has a bit of a human face. Cheating is more appropriate and has not been used a few times in the whole story. Especially in the later stage, there is no cheating scene. Even if the protagonist is in danger, there is no more cheating. It is a bit obvious that you can rely on cheating but rely on the existing status to make a living. Hanging has lost its plot share. The plot direction is still in line with the character. It doesn't matter whether it is cheating or not. Maybe the protagonist is already powerful enough. In order to avoid the supernatural, fantasy, etc. That will lead to the collapse of the combat power, the author brakes in time to end the story, which is also a wise way to end the story. In short, it is a rare natural and experienced writer in Tomato. It is worth reading and recommending.

It's quite good-looking. Although there are some small details that are not rigorous enough, the overall logic is fine. The fighting and scene descriptions are also good. It doesn't look like a novice writer. The number of words is a bit short and not enough to read. I will add bookshelves and other updates.

What did I see? Humanoid robot? Or a humanoid killer? The moon is dark and the wind is high, and the stars are flying like shooting stars. You can kill someone with a snap of your fingers, but leave no trace behind when you travel a thousand miles. It ended very casually, which made me even more satisfied! !

The content is constantly exciting and the plot is thrilling. It is a good book worth reading.

It's a very attractive story. The plot on the train is thrilling yet logical. I was completely immersed in it while watching it! There are no superfluous and cumbersome descriptions, there is no passionate passion for the second grade, although it is fantasy, it is not overly exaggerated, and the characters are very three-dimensional. It is a rare good article! ! ! Highly recommended! ! !

The author is great, not a novice, full of skills and in line with my reading taste

I haven't seen such a cool article in a long time! I didn't stop until I saw the shit yellow button. The rhythm started very tense. From catching thieves to earn points to facing the robbers in a head-on fight later, it was very eye-catching. Some of the plots are a bit cliche but the flaws are not concealed. The author's writing style is very good and he has a good grasp of the rhythm. The train copy ends at the end of the paragraph and I look forward to the plot that follows. If you continue to maintain this level of 8.5 Or above, there will be no problem. It will be a small masterpiece.