Star Railroad: the Dark Warrior's Journey

Yes, there are some language problems in some parts, but the plot is generally fine. It's good to have your own understanding of the characters. Tregear is a character before he was blackened, and swearing is acceptable. Some works from the Showa period have a lot of swearing. What's more, Beria is older than Ultraman from the Showa period, just because he appeared in the Heisei period.

Oye, they are the Dark Sisters. The combination of these two is really great, but are they the only ones who came to the Bentie Universe, Beria, Tregear, and Jagura?

Overall, the book is pretty good. I read a little bit of it. But if you are Honkai Impact Iron Chef, well, there may be a plot where the characters are beaten (Ultraman fights Galaxy Hunter). If you can't watch it, don't watch it. The combat power in it is very clear. Ultraman has great fighting power, so during the battle, you can see that most of the damage is done by Ultraman. If you mind, don't watch it. It's not said that the protagonist group has no output. Most of them are indeed Ultraman's main output. I feel that Xing is a bit marginalized, but there are not many (referring to fighting). Although the character of Beria is in line with her character, and then he will scold other characters in the article. I don't mean to say scolding, just plain lack of quality, but this is very consistent with his character. If you mind, read it, this book is quite good.

No one, I am number one

It's good-looking, really good-looking, and these two dark fallen souls are extremely righteous after being bleached and joining the train. They are worthy of being a train crew, and they know how to raise children (bushi) [sneaky laugh][sneaky laugh][sneaky laugh]

The plot is smooth and the writing is natural. It's great.

A very good Ultra fanfic, much better than that outrageous one. Come on and update it, author!

It's very interesting. I wonder if Bengtie people will be allowed to see Beria and their legendary past in the future.

What other villains will follow? The old road, Mitsuhiko Ishihori?

Quite in line with the character

It looks good, I love reading it, cheers for the author

Ultraman and Bentie

Very interesting, to my liking

The writing is solid and easy to read.

Very good and rare theme

The writing is great and the author is even better [smile][smile][smile]

Indeed, from Ultraman's moral perspective, it is easy to do.

It's very good at this stage, there are no problems, keep going!

Very nice😋The characters are not OOC

Add more more more more more more more more more more more more

Congratulations to Jizi for becoming the most powerful oral light maker in the universe

The personal experience is well written.

It feels very good and I hope I can keep writing.

I especially like to see Beria and Xiao Lu living together.

It feels pretty good, especially the part with Teacher K [Adoration] Just because of the old K part, I can give you a five-star [send heart]

It's so addictive. I just watched it and I watched it all in one go.

Great idea and good writing, keep it up!

As usual, I'll give you five stars [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly]

I just don't know if there is CP in it. I can't accept that they have CP. But if there is, it is still barely watchable.