Honkai: Star Rail: The Xianzhou General Won’t Fall for a Yandere

The writing is okay, I think it can be called fine chaff. The writing is entertaining yet rigorous. The plot is also unique and clever. Using the fairy boat as a carrier is more interesting in Bengtie fan fiction than those with Wu Nao and the protagonist [Thoughts] But the fly in the ointment is that it feels a bit deliberate to "give away girls" (the following is a personal opinion). For example, Ka Ma, the plot needs to be understandable, but the behavior does not feel consistent with Ka Ma in Bengtie. There are also other heroines who always feel that their behavior is a bit deliberate. I think the emotional scene between Lingsha and the protagonist is very good and not deliberate, it is natural and comes naturally [like] I hope the author can polish the emotional lines between the protagonist and the heroines. And I heard that this book belongs to the harem, I also hope that the author can use this as a keynote to write a new chapter for the regrettable endings in Iron Collapse. In the end, the blood book flows. Ying, please leave a place for Ying Bao [I understand] This book is suitable for readers who like to put themselves into the role (protagonist), and at the same time uphold the concept of "you can't have your cake and eat it too". Silver Wolf and Fu Xuan... Chu [face covering] Just click to the end before reading. And for readers who like to read in the third person [laughing awkwardly], this novel is a bit "interesting". In a sense, although this type of novel satisfies regrets, the emotional lines between the characters can refer to Mendel's pea hybridization experiment. The comrades in front of the screen all have their own opinions. If you want to complain about the protagonist, why not think about our "cute" Lu Mingfei? (Specifically refers to a person)

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First of all, the book written by the author is very beautiful and is an excellent fan fiction. There are many places worth learning from, but what I don't understand is that the character of the protagonist seems to... How should I put it, gives me the feeling of 'obeying orders but not obeying orders', giving people a feeling that they may rebel at any time. Of course, this is just my personal feeling, and I am not dissatisfied with the author's novel. I hope the author does not misunderstand. I give it a five-star review and wish the author good luck. [Laugh]

It's a remarkable fanfic. To be honest, the characters are a bit OOC, but it's still okay as a cool fanfic. Also, the recent chapters didn't mention the Fairy Boat Alliance's countermeasures against the Fengrao people, which makes the Fairy Boat's prestige lose value.

A good book, written very logically. It does not develop according to the plot of the game. The author created a route of his own after fully understanding the background of the game. The protagonist Xuan Ge has a distinctive personality and loves Da Lei. Who is the world's sowing king? Xuan Ge! Xuan Ge! Xuan Ge! Who has wives and concubines in this world? Xuan Ge! Xuan Ge! Xuan Ge! If you want to know what happened next, please watch the mighty general Xuan Ge interpret the story of the world for you [Love]

Overall, I felt good watching it, and the plot was also very interesting. The writing style is much better than some fanfics. I just hope that the author can better connect the subsequent plots. Friends who have plenty of time can take a look

This is supposed to be a rising star, but it is a new work by an old friend.

It's a very enjoyable novel, but I really want the yandere bird [send my heart] [send my heart] [send my heart]

Although the early writing was terrible and a bit embarrassing -_-||. But the prison work feels like a natural talent. The more you write, the better. The palace battles are also very good. Hope it can continue. Support Lao Zuo! ! ! [Blowing kiss] This book by Lao Da writes the male protagonist's changes in mood very well, and every detail in the book is traceable. But I feel like collecting pearls has the same problem as collecting Kafka. Although it is all an exchange of interests, the change of mood in the later period is a bit random, which I personally feel is a poisonous point. But Lao Zuo's conception of the framework of the whole book is really perfect and well organized. When reading, it can leave a profound impression on people. The protagonist is portrayed in great detail, especially the aspect of "dying on a woman's belly" is really good. I think we can arrange some chapters to focus on the little people from the Milky Way, and depict the relationship between Emperor Xuan and the people in more detail. At the end, I would like to apologize to the author. I was arbitrary in questioning your life before. I'm sorry! [Crying][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates]

It looks good, keep writing.