There Is a Ghost************

I would like to give myself a good review, it seems very smooth and there is progress, Oli, keep up the good work [send heart], readers, I hope you will be merciful.

Author, you can learn from the novel by the author of "Time Backtracking with the help of classmates". He is also a retrospective type, but he adds the past, present, and future. It may be more brain-burning, but it can leave a foreshadowing for infinite rebirth. For example, if the protagonist is killed by a ghost and he goes back in time, is it possible to understand that the protagonist of the parallel line is gone and now he is only the protagonist with subjective consciousness? I think the author you The writing style can be improved, but the protagonist can be improved, because the protagonist's infinite retracement is already buggy. You can describe the minor characters more, so that the minor characters can have some color. At least it is not the protagonist's world alone. The author wrote very well in the early stage, and don't mess with it in the later stage. If you continue writing now, it will definitely become popular. I give the author 4 stars here. The author keeps working hard [Cool] [Cool]

Your pen and ink have a natural charm. The narrative has ups and downs, opening and closing in a coherent manner; The layout is exquisite, the grass and snakes are gray lines, and the pulse is thousands of miles away. When writing about people, they have both form and spirit, and are ready to come out; The artistic conception of imitating scenery is far-reaching, as if you are actually there. The diction is clear but not frivolous, the plot is tortuous but not confusing. It's both emotional and logical, and gripping. With a roll in hand, I forget about food and sleep, Covering the book and meditating, the aftertaste is endless. It's really a wonderful pen that brings flowers to life, and a masterpiece is made by nature!

Invincible flow rules and strange stories, the plot is okay, and the most important thing is that there are a lot of updates I'll go and kiss my aunt later. She won't be the heroine. It can be considered a surprise.

I have read Chapter 121. There are no bad points so far. The plot is smooth and compact. However, the title of the book is not very good. The author can change it later. Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

It's okay, it's not poisonous at the moment

From my personal point of view, this is quite well written. The details are a bit sketchy and not brainless. I hope to keep it up for more updates [Like][Like]

Very beautiful, very beautiful, worth watching, needless to say, very beautiful. Polite submission, I would like to see Wang Yanfa and Chen Yu [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]

It's a really good book. It's not an AI text. The author is very normal, um, very serious about writing books. Usually high scores are fake, but this is true. [Laugh]

Very interesting, great Nightmare Village is too long and drags out. I'm not even interested in reading the rest of it. As a result, it's too compact to start the next instance right after it ends. As expected, it's cool. With the slow update speed, it's better to write a simpler copy [face covering]. The whole twenty or thirty chapters are almost enough, and then use real-life plots to supplement it. Otherwise, it's just a copy. It looks very boring, especially with such a big hook for the protagonist. It's such a loss for such a long and protracted copy.

Good looking, suitable for leisure time

A rare decent protagonist

I feel pretty good

Looks good, has good settings

Sorry author, I've been addicted to Supernatural 4 recently. I forgot to give you a five-star rating. I'll make it up. Please update it soon.

It's okay, but it feels a bit weird. The background of the world is not introduced or drawn out. Although it is still watchable, it should be about 7.6 Points if I keep it.

Goldfinger is very strong, but it's a pity that I don't know how to play it. I guess it doesn't have an outline, and the characters are fine but not many [Chigua]

It looks good, but it's just starting out and there are not many people [please update]

Don't give up. You can write it now.

After raising it for so long, the rating still hasn't gone up! Give me some encouragement, it's pretty good among tomatoes.