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It is very well written, with delicate emotions. It can be seen that the author's writing style is very good. The protagonist's parents divorced, his father died unexpectedly to pay for expenses, and his mother reestablished a family and neglected the protagonist. In such an unfortunate family environment, the protagonist developed a gloomy, loveless, and indifferent character. In an accident, the protagonist awakened S-level powers and joined the Special Administration Bureau. Under the guidance and teachings of others, and fighting side by side with his partners, the protagonist gradually grew and became stronger, reconciled with his past self, and embarked on his bright road...

Advantages: The plot is non-toxic, the protagonist's abilities are interesting, the world view setting is very good, the author updates a lot and is relatively active, the plot is slow and looks very enjoyable, the protagonist's growth line is clear, and the number of appearances of the supporting characters is reasonable (it will not confuse people/cannot remember their names) Disadvantages: The writing style is biased towards men, but it is still acceptable (especially the description of women's appearance, please feel free to enter), the author has a little too many paragraphs (the phenomenon of 'a row of words' often appears), and the same sentence/word is used repeatedly (for example, 'and then' he laughed' appeared several times in the second volume, and this sentence is used every time the protagonist is injured and dying. It can be changed to other synonymous descriptions, otherwise it will look awkward and dramatic). Overall, one star deducted. Summary: This book as a whole belongs to the middle and upper reaches of the same type of writing. The author is very good. I wish Xiaohua will become happier ٩(๑^o^๑)۶ "He laughed" appeared three times in the latest chapter (some book friends also discovered it)... I am like that incompetent husband who reads books every day. The only way to highlight each character in the book is to add a new paragraph followed by the three words "He laughed". These three words appear quite frequently in the book, which shows the author's poor expression and description... There are obviously other ways to pretend to be fake. There are more than just these three words "He laughed" to describe the protagonist's crazy smile in a desperate situation. Did the author involve himself too much? I was too immersed in it. It was all about laughter... I am exhausted, but I like Xiaohua so much that I will continue to read the book. Volume 2, Chapter 65, "He laughed" twice, I am so powerless

If you want to read urban martial arts, you can read this book. The main character starts with an S-level power. He is not a loser who counterattacks. It has more emotional delicacy than a brainless novel. The battle plot is also written very smoothly. It should be said that the female protagonist is delicious. The protagonist can also be cheated in this book. Who can not love it? Speaking of which, the author is a man and a woman, so I'm a little curious.

The setting is particularly novel and the plot is quite interesting. However, the word count is too few, so I decided to focus more on it. TT Why do you always use AI to write articles with such a good setting? It is tasteless to eat and a pity to throw away.

I didn't win. It's the first time I've seen a non-CP novel that suits my taste. It's so good. I don't write long book reviews, but this novel is so good. The shaping of the protagonist, the ups and downs of the plot, development, etc. Are all very good, with moments of excitement and tears. My lack of pronunciation is not enough to express my love for this novel. Only you can understand whether this novel is good or not after reading it. ᴖᗜᴖ

The protagonist's characterization is well developed. To be honest, this is the first time I have seen such a romantic butterfly awakening like this. It is more novel and beautiful. I hope the author will continue to update it. Come on. [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

Nice! ! ! He is a growth-oriented protagonist that I like. The description of his powers is also very beautiful and strong, and the description of psychological transformation is also good. At first, I thought Qing Wuyan was a close friend who would fight side by side. After watching it for a while, I realized that there was a conspiracy. I originally thought that Aoki's consciousness was disguised as a psychiatrist from the beginning. However, when the "psychiatrist" died, Qing Wuyan's consciousness was suddenly described. I really cried to death [I almost cried] The New Year's Eve easter eggs are a bit sweet... As soon as Qing Wuyan came out, my heart ached. Memories will kill me [punch out]

It is my fate to fall in love with beauty and beauty. PS butterflies are simply the best evil sculptures [laughs] The seemingly harmless insect is actually a ruthless meat grinder. The contrast is really refreshing. The protagonist is very cute () To be precise, the protagonist is a normal person with high quality, high moral character, emotions, not killing indiscriminately, but not a virgin. It is rare to see a protagonist in this type of male video. [Laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh]

Who knows? There are very few protagonists that fit my XP so well. The author's description is also very good. The plot is logical and the scenes are well depicted. So can you update 100,000 words! ! ! ! I shouldn't follow the serial [cry][cry][cry][cry]

Come and read this article for me! The setting is very novel, I especially like the part where Huayin can turn into a butterfly! I also dream of living in the water like a jellyfish, living without a brain and heart, floating in the sea and dying, turning into water and blending into the water.

It's so comfortable to watch. . If I can write it to the end, it will definitely become popular. I have always had a high eye for reading. The part about Qing Wuyan really touched people's hearts. It is a very simple language and easy to understand plot, but I still couldn't help but choke up (ToT). I am looking forward to the next development. Great support for the author💪

It's okay, but it doesn't match the label. It's a slow growth story. Invincible and cool stories have to be General Ye and Tai Sui. The label of this book should be changed. The inner growth and changes of the protagonist are described throughout the whole process. There are too many changes in Invincible and Shuang. I don't see where Invincible and Shuang are. The seemingly awesome natural disaster White Butterfly will still be scared when encountering high-level characters. In other words, the actual strength of White Butterfly is still linked to the protagonist's level. It is set so that when encountering high-level characters, White Butterfly will be even crazier and ready to move, which is more in line with Shuang's story, even if it cannot be defeated. The sense of natural disaster and madness also stood up.

It's been a long time since I've read this kind of orthodox story about upgrading and becoming stronger. Although it was a bit depressing, I finished it without realizing it.

It's very interesting. The author writes the main character's growth line clearly and the text is distinctive. Except it's a little awkward sometimes (in my opinion). There is also a plot line. Sometimes the plot of the story is beyond my imagination, but it is revealed later in the story to be reasonable. For example, when I think the protagonists can form a team, but then break them up, and the reasons given are acceptable, I feel very satisfied. The protagonist is a very good person, and the plot will be doubtful at the beginning, laying down the foreshadowing, and will give certain clues later. The protagonist is super cute and handsome.

This book gave me a very beautiful feeling. Just like the misty rain in the south of the Yangtze River. It is undeniable that in the early stage, there were too many scenes with Qingqiu to the point where I already doubted whether she was the heroine. But overall it's still acceptable. It's rare to see beautiful writing styles on this platform. I really ate up my brothers and sisters with this character! The character is the kind of person who has built a high wall in his heart due to his mother's neglect, abuse and neglect since he was a child, fearing that others will get in and hurt him again. Hua Xi is a Hua Xi who is accustomed to being alone, caring and protective of others! People are indifferent but don't ignore everything. Highly recommended!

It's so good. I haven't encountered a novel that appeals to me in a long time! ! [Sending Hearts] Little 🌸 is also so cool and cute, so handsome! Also, there is no heroine... Oh my God, every one of them is to my liking! Author, don't be too good at writingo After reading it for a while, I feel that it is not as good as it was at the beginning. The author seems to particularly like to describe smiles and how the tea is getting cold later. He also always likes to say "It's not... But..." This type of words appears too frequently.

Judging from the existing chapter list, urban magic and fantasy countries are not hidden. The pace is fast but not procrastinating. The key points are also written down. The writing is smooth and logical. I personally think it is worth reading. Then there is the private evaluation: ①Some people may think that the plot line of the squad leader is too long and not exciting, but to be fair, it may be more like the desire and self-growth of an ordinary person facing a former classmate and now a big boss. It is not deeply portrayed, but it can be understood, including her previous love for the male protagonist (in a budding state), which has also been transformed into a kind of self-encouragement and self-growth of "being down-to-earth and becoming a better self". It is different from ordinary slap-in-the-face plots. It is not stereotyped, which is good. ② If there are readers who are looking for something more exciting, you can pay attention to the family lines and fighting plots. At least there are some chapters that can make readers feel the extraordinaryness of the protagonist. ③The image of the male protagonist is gloomy and longs for redemption (friendship!), But he has a great sense of righteousness in his heart. And, isn't it beautiful that the weapon is a butterfly? ! ! ④Finally, it may be because the traffic was not high when it first came out. The author has few paragraphs in the article and the rating is low. But if you have time or are in a period of book shortage, it is also worth appreciating. And judging from the existing updates, the author should not be cheating, so... Jump on it! !

It's very interesting. The protagonist is not invincible. He is getting stronger little by little. The characters are eye-catching🎄◟(˶> ᎑ <˶)◞🎄 I can't help but follow the update. Today is the second one to update. I read it as soon as the author posted it ദ്ദി˶ｰ̀֊ｰ́ )✧

Come and see, come and see, you can! But remember, if you want to see group portraits, you can go. The protagonist of this book is still alone at the moment. He is alone and lonely, which makes people feel distressed... List the advantages of this book: The logic is reasonable, the IQ is online, the conflicts are in place, the character image and psychological shaping are three-dimensional and reasonable, and there is nothing very annoying at the moment. Personally, I think the growth journey of Xiaohua (the protagonist) is a very good point to watch - whether it is the transformation and growth of psychology or strength. There is no heroine, but there are family and friends who care about him and love her, but Xiaohua goes too far forward and too far, so there is often no one around him. So far, it's a pretty good book. But sir, some of my sentences really need to be polished up... It's not that the writing is bad. Well, you will know after reading it.

It's really good to read. I've seen many books with similar labels to this one. Book. But this is the most beautiful book I've ever read among urban martial arts. It looks like a group portrait but not like a group portrait. The characterization aspect is also very good. The protagonist's growth is a bit miserable, but that doesn't stop it from being enjoyable. I gave up after seeing the end, what can I say? It looked great in the early stages, but fell apart in the later stages.

This is really good-looking, the plot is sweet and sad, the plot is compact, nothing is too embarrassing or too exaggerated, everyone has their own character and story, recommended reading! ! Author, don't give up! ! !

Very beautiful! Every storyline touched my heart, just in line with my expectations. Make me scream ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh..." The dark crawling and dancing. How can I feel so good? I feel so good. Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh

The moment I saw the latest update, I knew this was my favorite genre. I couldn't tell what was good about it. I saw some movies that were said to be made by AI. I originally believed them. I didn't watch anything about movies made by AI because I thought they were brainless. But I don't know why I continued to watch it. Only I know if it's good or not. The companions are flesh and blood. The protagonist does his best to help his friends and people who are good to him. He seems to be cold-blooded and ruthless, and his eyes have no emotion. He doesn't know how to express in words. The expression in actions is more touching. He is a good protagonist. I feel like I can't take other people's opinions anymore.

In fact, my real rating is only three points, but this is also a book I once liked, so I give it four stars as a way of remembering it😌. For me, the main point is that it is torture for the sake of torture. It focuses on a beautiful, strong and miserable protagonist, but many plots are very deliberate to torture the protagonist. I can't stand it anymore if I keep abusing the protagonist. . I read about 200 chapters. The first 150 or so chapters were non-jumping, but I started to jump after I continued to abuse the main character. I originally planned to stock up and read it later, but when I thought about the protagonist being tortured to death, I felt sorry for the protagonist, and then I didn't dare to open it and read it. () I was busy with the present life and didn't read the novel for a long time. I recently started reading the novel again and found that this book is finished. I will write a review.

I originally had the attitude of giving it a try and didn't care that the book was a serial. Then I read it and read it all at once [I almost cried]. I would have saved it to read it again. Generally speaking, the author's character image is well constructed [heartfelt]. I would like to urge you to update it! ! !

The writing is very good, really very good. Although I have never liked this kind of depressing, cramped and tense novels, I feel that this one is really good-looking. It is a pity that it is a little less interesting. Author, please write more.

Super super pretty! The content is novel, the storyline develops smoothly, and the pictures are beautiful. It's really beautiful. Why don't so many people watch it? Why is the rating only 7 points? In my mind, he should be around 9 o'clock. The author should do a lot to update it. The author should do a lot! ! ! ! ! !

It's been a long time since I've seen such a good-looking novel. The characters and plot are very novel, and it shows different group portraits. It's very, very beautiful. The reason why it is not very popular is that the title and cover of the book are too old-fashioned and not novel enough. You can collect the title from readers, and there is no rush to change the cover when it is available. It's really good. It's really uncommon to see male-directed novels without a female protagonist and no ambiguity [Chigua]

Very good! ! I've read so many books that I'm actually quite bored, but this one is really super good! ! Reading one chapter makes you think about the next chapter. The protagonist is always growing, and geniuses have guardians. This book truly describes the meaning of a guardian. Unlike other books, it is all up to the protagonist to cheat. The protagonist is growing slowly, not only with the increase in ability, but also with changes in his state of mind. Just when everyone thought he would choose When choosing the slow and humane path of growth, he chose the cruelest and most tiring path to heaven, which is quite shocking. The biggest difference between this book and others is that the protagonist has his own clear growth path, rather than relying solely on his own particularly awesome talents. There are really heart-warming gains, and there is also growth that is really admirable. This is the real reality. How can there be so many wishful things? Some are just choices that suit you best. The path he wants to take has always been the result of his own choice. Every one of his growth and choices respects himself.

Personally, I think it's well written. The butterfly setting seems pretty cool, but it doesn't feel like there's anything big and exciting about it. I hope there can be a female protagonist in the back, or other emm more attractive plots.