Shooting Condor: My Majestic Golden Sword Consort Has Become Ronger

It's not bad. The exchange between Xiao Ronger and the protagonist is very interesting. The couple started a business together. The martial arts flavor of the main plot is just right, and the emotional line is written very naturally. The relationship between the two heroines Hua Zheng and Huang Rong is handled well. What surprised me is that I didn't expect Xiao Ronger to be the one who wants to eat meat every time. Sure enough, women have nothing to do with men when they are seductive. Don't lie to me. The author of Mu Nianci just said that she would not accept it. I have caught up with the latest update and have not yet written how to arrange her in the end. I hope that I can give Sister Mu a good ending and stop letting Yang Kang make trouble. If not, I can set a red line with Guo Jing. Although an honest man is dull, he will be kind to her.

The writing is actually okay. The main problem is the identity of the protagonist. King of Song Dynasty in Mongolia, I really can't complain. Even if the protagonist succeeds in the future, his reputation in history will probably not be very good [laughing] Although Genghis Khan was a genius of his generation, it was not a good thing for the Han people. Those who are not of my race must have different minds. The protagonist will not lead the Mongolian army to attack cities and plunder lands in the future, and then call it national integration, right? That's really fun [laughing]

It's a rare piece of writing by a Jin Yong fan. The ideas are clear, step-by-step, and not toxic at the moment. I hope to start the ruler's route later. The essence of martial arts literature should still be in the martial arts. Also, don't overestimate your martial arts. Many Jin Yong's protagonists are completely at the level of one person destroying an entire country. I really can't read it.

The overall feeling is okay. I like to read this series of martial arts fans recently. This one is relatively interesting, at least I can read it. I just feel that the relationship between the protagonist and Huang Rong develops a little too quickly. The protagonist reveals the secrets he knows too easily and is not careful enough? Also, there is a slight mistake in the plot where the protagonist and Huang Rong write letters to each other to tell each other what they have done. I hope the author goes back and corrects it, otherwise it will feel weird. Huang Rong knows what he wrote without changing back. It is really a bit weird.

It's really good to watch, I like the harem. Many authors can't write about the harem because their writing skills are too weak and the plot connection is too bad. Some people don't like to see the harem, for fear that the subsequent plot will collapse. But I think the author's current ideas are very good, and the story development is also very reasonable. There is no need to limit the two heroines, right [Like]

This article is really good. In fact, in the original work of The Condor Shooting, Hua Zheng is really difficult to defeat. In order to restore history, Li Ping was sacrificed, and Hua Zheng and Li Ping were linked to death. To be honest, it is really difficult for Guo Jing, who was created by Jin Yong, to vote for the Song Dynasty based on his status. As one of the original major shareholders, the life and death brother of Tuo Lei, the Golden Sword Prince Consort, and the God of War, with his status and ability, he is really likely to complete the unification of Mongolia and Song Dynasty.

"In this book, the author has constructed a grand allegory/metaphor system. The surface of the text is the advancement of the plot, but the core is a precise anatomy of the dilemma of modernity. The narrative rhythm is relaxed and moderate, and the character arcs are clear and complete. It is not only a literary enjoyment, but also a critical attack on the mind. It is worth reading repeatedly."

It's very interesting to watch, and the emotional scenes are beyond the average level of Tomato Martial Arts fandoms. However, I may have read too many of this type of fanfics, and I still hope that there will be some female characters that interact with each other and have some scenes. It depends on the author's writing skills. Generally speaking, if there are no more than four or five, it won't be a big problem.

The book is indeed good, with plot and logic. It looks like it was written by an experienced hand, and I have written it with all my heart. Since I have read the book before the update, I don't know if it will be as good as before. Only later will I know, so I will give it four stars. This is one of the few positive reviews I have made on Tomato Novels. Com.

After reading it for a while, the writing was very interesting and fascinating. It attracted the reader's interest in just a few chapters and made me want to continue to read the wonderful story of the protagonist. The plot development between Guo Jing, Huang Rong and Wan Yankang, and the disputes between Mongolia, Song and Jin were also extremely interesting.

The body change earlier was interesting, the emotional scenes were well written, and Rong'er's temperament was very touching. This is Xiao Dongxie. It can be said that I couldn't stop watching it before the protagonist returned to Mongolia. But after I returned, I kept fighting until the end, and there were many things I wanted to read but didn't write down. For example, as the author said before, Huang Ronggong changed his body once and did not write [pinch], nor did their children. If the children were written, maybe a few people from the Divine Eagle could appear. I feel that there are a lot of extensions. I hope there will be extra chapters.

It's okay, the ejaculation version of your name It's a pity that the follow-up ended hastily

It's rare to find a movie that has good plot and emotional development. I kept it because it didn't score well, but I didn't expect it to be surprisingly good. The ending is very bland, and the later period is all about war and government affairs. To be honest, it is boring to watch. The essence of this book is the interaction with Huang Rong's body change, but this kind of plot disappeared soon after the relationship was established. I thought I would proclaim myself emperor in the end, but I didn't expect that I was overwhelmed by Kublai Khan and was forced to proclaim himself emperor. When I was able to proclaim most of the southern land as emperor, I became foolishly loyal. At this time, I forgot that the purpose of helping Mongolia was to unify? In the end, the situation returned to the beginning, and history did not change after the death of the protagonist. To be honest, I don't understand the meaning of the protagonist's existence. Later on, it was like the author didn't want to write the ending with ai

I really like Rong'er and Hua Zheng. I hope Yang Ning won't let them down [Sending my heart] Please have two female protagonists. If there are too many, it will collapse.

666, One person can experience two kinds of happiness [laughing evilly]

Each chapter has something to watch, and the author describes it in detail.

It's a pity, it would be better if Huang Rongqi was changed

So far, there are no big flaws, but it's time to strengthen the male protagonist's martial arts. After all, he is the biggest supporter.

Help him train and fight, and even help him bathe his body [laughing and crying] One person is used as a three-person rhythm. Love it, love it

Looking at it now, there are no big flaws, it is still quite interesting. I hope the author will stick to it in the future.

The subject matter is quite good, but it's a pity that it's really difficult to write. The author's writing skills are really stretched. 4 Stars is a bit too much, 3 and a half.

That's right. I didn't just follow the plot and wrote my own thing.

Once you watch it, you can't stop watching it. It's so beautiful and the main character is well set up.

The writing is delicate and smooth, and the plot progresses layer by layer. The more you read, the more you read.

The author's writing style is outstanding and the plot is compact. It is a very readable novel.

Very beautiful, the writing is very good and vivid

The subject matter is novel, the plot is compact, and the plot development is natural.

The rhythm is compact and not procrastinating, the reversals are natural and not deliberate, and the overall look is very comfortable.

The details are well controlled, the plot has ups and downs, and the rhythm is relaxed and relaxed.

The logic is relatively clear and the characters are relatively restored. It's a good book. I hope I can keep writing it.