[Alternative History] + [Hot-Blooded War] + [Early Escape] + [Battle of Wisdom and Courage] + [Through Books] + [Cannon Fodder Counterattack]
When I opened my eyes, I became Xiao Jin, the good-for-nothing prince who died the worst in the original novel.
The script told me: My father died tragically, I was hunted, and in the end I would be beheaded by the original male protagonist.
I decided to change my destiny against fate, and the first step was to avoid all the "important characters in the original work".
As a result, he turned around and picked up a seriously injured beautiful woman. She said her name was Su Xiao and she was homeless.
I relented and thought it would be nice to have more than one person keeping warm.
I taught her to survive and she helped me to rise. We walked from the ruined temple to the throne.
On the eve of my ascension to the throne, I learned from the roar of my old enemy:
The "original heroine" that I carefully avoided was the person who helped me build my life from scratch.
Li Qianjue: "You stole my favorite woman!"
I hugged the queen tightly and smiled: "I'm sorry, even your family is named Xiao now."
Reader comments
It's okay. The plot is good and written in detail, but there are too many repetitions and too much unnecessary information that makes it very verbose. Some settings in the book are out of date. The protagonist originally knew herbal medicine but didn't recognize it after meeting the heroine. At the beginning, the protagonist knew the name of the villain Bai Yueguang but later couldn't remember it after meeting the heroine. I suggest the author revise it carefully. First, he should check the settings to avoid inconsistencies. Second, he should delete repetitive and redundant content. I know the author wants to write a slow pace, but slow pace does not mean that one thing should be mentioned over and over again. Many mistakes are often caused by forgetting to mix up the correct ones due to a lot of repetition. The third thing is to re-examine the character creation. Although the protagonist is a waste at the beginning, persistence and self-improvement are important. On the contrary, after meeting the heroine, he is not so hardworking. The previous training and persistence are not mentioned. He is just rushing and being suspicious of each other with the heroine. This does not give people a good impression. All in all it's okay, but there's still a lot of room for improvement, so I give it four stars.
Lots of support! Grateful!
Isn't it embarrassing to poop when you're on the run?
I cried after falling in love with the other person
Why don't the contents of chapters 26 and 27 match [what] [what]
I don't understand. Can the author explain it a bit [face covering]
It's okay. The plot is good and written in detail, but there are too many repetitions and too much unnecessary information that makes it very verbose. Some settings in the book are out of date. The protagonist originally knew herbal medicine but didn't recognize it after meeting the heroine. At the beginning, the protagonist knew the name of the villain Bai Yueguang but later couldn't remember it after meeting the heroine. I suggest the author revise it carefully. First, he should check the settings to avoid inconsistencies. Second, he should delete repetitive and redundant content. I know the author wants to write a slow pace, but slow pace does not mean that one thing should be mentioned over and over again. Many mistakes are often caused by forgetting to mix up the correct ones due to a lot of repetition. The third thing is to re-examine the character creation. Although the protagonist is a waste at the beginning, persistence and self-improvement are important. On the contrary, after meeting the heroine, he is not so hardworking. The previous training and persistence are not mentioned. He is just rushing and being suspicious of each other with the heroine. This does not give people a good impression. All in all it's okay, but there's still a lot of room for improvement, so I give it four stars.
Lots of support! Grateful!
Isn't it embarrassing to poop when you're on the run?
I cried after falling in love with the other person
Why don't the contents of chapters 26 and 27 match [what] [what] I don't understand. Can the author explain it a bit [face covering]