Traveled into a world of mysterious resurrection. I controlled the game ghost at the beginning, but why did the game ghost crash? It turns out that it is my new fingers that are exerting force. After this world where ghosts cannot be killed, I must live as long as possible.
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Bad news: purely artificial
You can put double quotes around what the characters say, otherwise it will be inconvenient to read.
I hope the punctuation is better.
It looks good, the plot is good, but the author's punctuation is a bit difficult to read. Can you add some punctuation? Then please speed up the update, it's not enough [please update]
Not bad, I feel like it's a very good fanfic, [blowing kiss][like][like][like]
It's more or less good, but it needs to be read more slowly, so I still hope to add a dialog box.
I just left Xiaojiang City and established the club, and now I have disbanded the club and returned to Xiaojiang City. I really feel melancholy because the story has ended and returned to peace. Often when the beginning and the end echo, this melancholy will be deeper. Although this book has many problems, the story is told. Also, this is the first book that I listened to the whole book. This book is really not suitable for reading, only suitable for listening, and it feels good to listen.
Please do a better job with the punctuation.
Add some punctuation marks
It would be nice if you could add some symbols to the dialogue.
Mark the punctuation mark╔╗╔╝╚╝╚╗
Well, very good, very good
Very cool, good plot
Average, but excellent
Take a look at the ghost mirror, don't resurrect the dead and bring out A or S-level ghosts, quietly: I'm going to die, I want to play
It's okay, it's almost finished, I'll give it four stars.
If possible, I hope the author will publish some new books.
No, because it would be nice to cancel the update midway.
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You can put double quotes around what the characters say, otherwise it will be inconvenient to read.
I hope the punctuation is better.
It looks good, the plot is good, but the author's punctuation is a bit difficult to read. Can you add some punctuation? Then please speed up the update, it's not enough [please update]
Not bad, I feel like it's a very good fanfic, [blowing kiss][like][like][like]
It's more or less good, but it needs to be read more slowly, so I still hope to add a dialog box.
I just left Xiaojiang City and established the club, and now I have disbanded the club and returned to Xiaojiang City. I really feel melancholy because the story has ended and returned to peace. Often when the beginning and the end echo, this melancholy will be deeper. Although this book has many problems, the story is told. Also, this is the first book that I listened to the whole book. This book is really not suitable for reading, only suitable for listening, and it feels good to listen.
Please do a better job with the punctuation.
Add some punctuation marks
It would be nice if you could add some symbols to the dialogue.
Mark the punctuation mark╔╗╔╝╚╝╚╗
Well, very good, very good
Very cool, good plot
Average, but excellent
Take a look at the ghost mirror, don't resurrect the dead and bring out A or S-level ghosts, quietly: I'm going to die, I want to play
It's okay, it's almost finished, I'll give it four stars. If possible, I hope the author will publish some new books. No, because it would be nice to cancel the update midway.
Personally I think it looks good