(I know this is my embarrassing old work, but please, I can’t delete it.) (I’ll abbreviate some plot points and find ways to skip parts I don’t like. I’m a total beginner and my writing isn’t great, so please be kind. This is a romance. My situation is a little unusual, and I’m the author of Chapter 51. Ideally, I want the protagonist’s relationships to be 1v1, 1v1, and 1v2, so I apologize to everyone who came expecting no harem. I guess this might count as a harem, even though 1v2 is only a possibility for now. I can’t help the slow pacing. For most of the early chapters, the story will follow the main plot. Later, once the plot involving Ellen and Ya gets underway, I’ll weave in more everyday scenes. Until then, I can only write a few. I’m afraid I’ll mess things up if I write too much. This isn’t a harem, and the protagonist’s relationship with his sisters will develop as pure friendship later on.) There will be some original details that don’t match the source material. Please just treat them as my own additions. Don’t make me beg, qwq. I have some confidence in writing fight scenes, but the everyday parts may be lacking. There might not be many battles, either, and they may not be written well. (Sigh.) Dear readers, please don’t rush me. I’m a new author and still not very good at handling the plot, so when I say it’s slow-paced, I really mean I haven’t quite figured out where to focus, qwq.
Ellen: Do you really like biting my tail that much? (Angry)
Blue shark: Mmm, mmm.
Poof! A little bump appeared.
Ya: Would you like to train with me?
Red, exhausted shark: Sure. What kind of training did you have in mind?
Hey, wait! That’s not what training is supposed to be!
Yellow fish-cat: Hold on, hold on, you two! ...Mmm...
Ling: Now that’s exciting!
Not bad, it's hard to find anything about Ailian! I was actually a little confused while reading the first few chapters (maybe I read too fast), but I found the later chapters pretty good. At the moment, the plot is more of a daily slow pace, and I feel like it's a million miles away from the main plot (it's a new book). If you can accept the progress, I recommend watching it. (I feel like my writing has improved, which is okay for me. After all, it's not easy to find a copy. I almost want to write it myself_(:з∠)_) By the way, is this book a light one or a heavy one? Do you have a pair? (If possible, I still want to see some CP spreading sugar) Finally, the author will update soon (whipping) 🤭
Suddenly found out that chapter 61 was gone? I haven't seen it yet though But still because of this, I gave it 4 points But overall it looks good, I still don't know why it's gone Because I haven't seen it yet But I still want to say it's a pity
See what I found? OMG, this is a wild gura novel. I must appreciate Yifanna (՞ټ՞) carefully.
According to Penguin's taste, this book is okay. From Penguin's personal point of view, Penguin can still accept this book, but sometimes the plot is a bit boring... When I was reading the book, I almost didn't want to read it halfway, but after Penguin forced himself to read the whole book, he found that the plot is actually okay. From the current point of view, at least it is not very interesting. I look forward to the follow-up ^ω^ (still old foodie) [Chigua]
A bit too boring but overall good
It's okay so far, I like it quite a bit, but it's just not enough to watch😭
Although the writing style cannot be said to be exquisite, it is generally good, and the content is not laggy. This is top quality, and Lily Saigao, hahahaha