Before the Server Started, I Was in Charge of Tidal Prison

This book is really good to read, especially when it describes how slimes transformed into Lu Bu and fought hundreds of rounds in the Demon God War for Diao Chan and Sun Wukong. However, Xue Baochai is really too strong. If it weren't for Nuo Shou's outer ring + Noxus guillotine, this wave of M4 six times strafing would have been inevitable. It shows Zhuge Liang's indignation at the monkey knocking him to death with three sticks. But I am more concerned about what Horus said to the 108 monkeys in Huaguo Mountain: "Young man, you are all made of bones. Don't show off in front of your Brother Lu. Do you know how Archangel Sauce is made? All in all, this book has an interesting plot, a clear system, and many foreshadowings. The fighting scenes feel like you are on the scene, and the character descriptions are also in place!"

Not bad, good, check out these warden fanfics. The setting of this article is very good. It will teach NPC how to become stronger. It is much more interesting than some wardens who upgrade alone.

Throughout the whole process, the characters were not stepping on each other, the writing was smooth, and there was no sense of speechlessness like in some fanfics where the protagonist opens his golden finger and then the tiger body shakes, and the supporting characters are instantly refined. Neither the protagonist nor the supporting characters are stereotypes. I always believe that in a good article, both the protagonist and supporting characters should have their own thoughts and goals. Different personalities and behaviors influence each other and collide and intertwine in the same space. That kind of compromise and persistence is a beautiful performance. At present, there are many mysteries to be solved: what is the connection between Hafk's senior management and the player world, the strange state of the lost players, Ashara's position (is Said also replaced by a time traveler?), The source of the souls of NPCs such as prison guards... I hope the author can maintain the current rhythm and writing style, and also look forward to the follow-up collaboration between Dou Sprout (Raven) and the warden. There is an original ambiguous "female protagonist". In Chapter 221, the male protagonist even dreams that the original female character Xiaobai becomes his wife. It is said that there is no CP. It does not mean that it is unacceptable to write a female protagonist, but that it is deceiving the readers to have an ambiguous relationship without CP. And after opening the Player World, he has been wandering around the Player World. He even wrote "The sunshine in the Player World should be softer, the air should be fresher, and the sky should be higher and farther" (original text of Chapter 220). Since he likes the Player World so much, why does our hero continue to be the warden? Is it because he can't bear the high-quality panel data of the Warden? Now the computer is no longer checking, the raven is no longer concerned, Said has become an atmosphere group, no matter whether that noob knows that he is the map BOSS, he will not even go back to prison for her. I refuse to admit that such a person is qualified to be a ghroth.

A very good book, the warden takes the soldiers to upgrade together, and the raven is another time traveler together. I can't help but want to see them recognize each other and then act gti.

After reading so many Warden fanfics, this book is really top-notch. At least it can help the machine brother to level up, and can also go to the player world, and even other fellow travelers who have traveled through time. I hope there will be more time-travelers in the later plots, and we will kill Reis and the mysterious asthmatic brother with their elbows. It's too weird😋

It's nice to watch. Although I haven't played Delta, I think the plot is good and the characters are well created. I'm a little tempted. What should I do? If there is anything else, why are there so few? Damn it, why are they even tied? There are no books to read [crying] [crying]

I love watching it, but the updates are too slow. Update the role of Raven, and also combine the plot of the season: for example, last season, Raven, Rause, and Leith jointly asked Lao Sai to blow up the dam, Leith burned the long-term workers, and let Raven launch a riot in the prison. There is also Hudson who temporarily takes over the aerospace industry. The old lady is kicked out, so the old lady can come here to support first. Cooperate with the warden to drive Hudson out of his seat and help the old lady sit back down. One last thing to add: The stars will surely return to their orbit! The new world cannot live without the Iron Order! ——Warden Gherroth [angry][angry][angry]

It's a very novel setting, other boss stories are almost boring. It's not that invincible, it's a little better than those traditional system texts. It feels like the plot is getting dragged out.

The rhythm is tight, the writing is delicate, there is a certain degree of suspense, and the character portrayal is also very nice. You can't see the end of this work at a glance. It is one of the few masterpieces. If he writes original articles, I believe he can write works that reach 1 million readers.

The plot has ups and downs, the characters are deeply portrayed, and the emotions are delicate and sincere. Every foreshadowing is hidden with surprises, and the aftertaste is long after reading, making people unable to put it down for a long time. The writing is calm and powerful, and the story rhythm is relaxed and moderate. It has both passionate highlights and heart-piercing tenderness. It is a work that can truly enter your heart. The world view is complete, the characters are vivid and three-dimensional, and the plot logic is online. The writing is not exaggerated but very contagious. The more you read, the more you read. It is worth pondering over and over again. The story has a broad layout and deep and real emotions. It is not deliberately sensational but is moving everywhere. Every character has flesh and blood, and I was shocked and moved after watching it. It makes people read to the end without wanting to stop. [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

I can't do it anymore. I have been following this book since it was updated [code]. The author's language is simple, the plot is rich and interesting, and it is a masterpiece of Delta fan fiction! ! The characters are full-bodied and the fighting scenes are full of texture! All I can say is, the author is awesome! Update soon! ! ! ! —— What's going on! Doesn't the author have a heroine? Let me make it clear that many novels and fanfics have female protagonists. I entered by looking at the tags. "No female protagonist" is clear and clear. The male protagonist started to have a slight love brain around 220 years old. I hope there is no female protagonist😫

Overall, it's pretty good. The battle plot is not stiff, and the protagonist's emotional line is well drawn. Have fun when you should have fun, and be serious when you should be serious. If you come back every day, you will look forward to these two bites of food. The character creation is also relatively three-dimensional, and it is a good article. But author, I remember you labeled it as having no female protagonist, right? If you are writing an ambiguous plot, find someone to mess with you~•ᴗ⁃͈ ✧ And if a female protagonist is added later, I will delete your book from my bookshelf with Thomas's invincible thunderbolt movement from an angle that Newton cannot understand ^_^

It's one of the better-looking Warden fanfics, and it's not a mindless way to become stronger.

I finished binge-watching it in one day and it was not enough. The protagonist's strategy is clear and his interactions with his subordinates are well portrayed. The only flaw is that it is not enough. The author should update me quickly. Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

I think it's not bad. If you put aside the warden's strength in the game and look at the growth-oriented protagonist, then he is a relatively slow-burning novel, and the world view has not yet been expanded. But the author's updates are too slow. I see shit yellow buttons every day. The plot is obviously good, and it feels like it's about to reach its climax. But because there is no update, it's like taking out a Dadu and pulling the bolt to shoot out, but it gets stuck and can't shoot out. This is too uncomfortable [Petrochemical] [Petrochemical] All in all, I am giving you a four-star rating at this stage so that you can update faster. This book has great potential, but it is best to end the volume before the 100th chapter, so as not to stay in that prison for too long. If you can, you can also write a little plot about the raven, including the plot about the dragon kingdom, which has not yet started. There is still a lot more that can be written [Like][Like][Like]

This book is really well written. The content structure is not only rich and interesting, but the author's writing style is also online. It must be given five stars. I haven't been this satisfied for a long time. Very good delta article, I recommend everyone to give it a try.

It looks good, very good-looking, like historical chocolate, highly recommended [like][like][like]

The plot is exciting, the rhythm is tight, and the blood is surging. The wonderful fighting scenes are detailed and shocking, and the move showdown is full of tension. The protagonist is resolute and unyielding, the growth line is clear and moving, the plot has ups and downs, and the foreshadowing is progressive. The confrontation between the camps and the life-and-death battles are exciting, with both passionate fighting and side-by-side friendship. The world view is full, the combat logic is smooth, and it is a hearty read.

The writing is online, the plot is novel and unexpected, and the author can also use a knife to highlight the protagonist's self-awakening. It's really awesome.

Generally speaking, it is a very good book among fandoms. The details in the front are very delicate and there is not too much procrastination. The sense of pressure is also written. However, the music is missing in the later part. The various settings are also very complete. It seems that there are no loopholes. There are still some poisonous points, but they are not big. The label of the book should not be changed now. , If it can be changed, it would be best to change it to a single female protagonist. The female protagonist does not seem to have a big impact on the plot at the moment. At most, the author can improve the word count. Xiaobai does not feel annoying when watching it. It is okay. Although the player world is described too much, if the plot line is added later, it should be to ensure that the plot structure is complete. If you don't fill in the holes, just think I didn't say it.

Overall, it's okay. The battle scenes and daily life are well described. However, there is one thing. His introduction mentioned that there is no female protagonist. So far, there have been novices suspected of being the female protagonist. I advise everyone to watch with caution (

It's a very good Delta fanfic. The characters of Gherroth and Raven are pretty good, but doesn't it mean there is no female protagonist? How did it happen next? This is very exciting (=ェ=)

This book writes about me very well and shows my unique charm [Like]

It's pretty good. It's one of the better ones I've seen in Delta. Come on, author😄

The author's writing style is good, and there are many more new things than other fanfics. It is the same as before my eyes. The characters are also very well drawn and the characters are vivid. The only shortcoming is that the number of chapters is too few, not even 100 chapters. More updates! More updates! The author should write more, it's not enough [angry][angry][angry]

The first few chapters are a bit boring, but then it's okay. The emotional line is the highest point of this fanfic (it's just that it came a little late). It's not particularly brainless. The logic setting is quite clear. He can even complete the setting of the origin of the super hero. I can only say that 8 points is not the limit for this work, probably about 9.1 Points.

First of all, the protagonist is a human being. He is not invincible, but he is very smart and thoughtful. Yes, and then he uses the technique of narration to make the article more graceful ( Also, the protagonist is very busy. After finishing the affairs in Tidal Prison, he will go to the player world. In addition, the author also writes very well in terms of fighting scenes, and is so detailed that you can imagine the scenes. One problem is that the author can't tell the difference. If it doesn't work, you can just write "the" in all. The ambush pen and the Riddler are also good. For example, the reasons for the changes in the map and the dreams of the protagonist are all foreshadowing and hints, which are very immersive and not abrupt. Although there are some interactions between Xiaobai and the protagonist, it is acceptable and it does not say that Xiaobai is the heroine. Some plots are also quite interesting, such as Han Che (the protagonist) fighting Gherros (also the protagonist) Summary: It looks good, even people who have never played Delta can understand it👍👍👍 Let's talk about something that some people can't accept: It contains the interaction between Xiaobai (probably Mai Xiaowen later) and the protagonist Han Che, but the author labeled it as having no female protagonist, which actually doesn't have much impact. Don't worry if Han Che is a martial arts fanatic. Later, the number of times the protagonist left Tidal Prison in the player world increased, but the current chapter shows that Han Che is actually more inclined to Tidal Prison. The plot development of the novel is relatively slow, but it is still delicious. I will follow up first😋😋😋

The best Delta State fanfic I've ever seen

Very nice! The protagonist and human beings are both online. He grows up quickly, has rigorous logic, and sometimes has a cold sense of humor. I finished reading it in one day. Come on, author! Not enough! Looking forward to receiving orders from Gheros Raven for escort! It's really good... The author writes well. I really want to see the two guardians of the devil recognize each other. I want to see the raven and Han Che's daily bickering. It's very heartwarming. I'm tired every day just to read the novel to warm up. If I suddenly stop writing, it will be really uncomfortable. Regardless of whether it will be good or not, I want to see the day it ends. Author, keep writing [laughs] From March to now, I don't want to fight Shi Ding [I'm about to cry] If Shi Ding has to leave like Da Zhuang, then I will take Lao Han to the tree of imaginary numbers [crazy]

It's pretty good. Although there was a section in the middle that made me feel like there was a female protagonist after reading it, but after reading it, I realized that it was not the case. However, I was still shocked and deducted a star from you. After all, I have been following this book for so long. Can the author update it more? It's not enough...