Quick Transmigration: The Plain Jane, the Male Lead, and the Wrong Bed

Oh my God, I finally read another book about female dog training. The plot is so cool! It's so hard. The ones I found before were basically all about love at first sight. It's so hard to find non-love at first sight stories. Thank you to the author! Don't stop updating! Love you love you! The first story is great! The second story, well... Hard to comment. The heroine's character is a bit useless, and she may grow up in the future, but when I can't stand it and see her change, I feel very sad. There is a big gap between the character of the heroine in the first story. It feels like a scam, using the first story to trick people into it, and then repeatedly torturing them in the second story. One of the settings of the second story is that the heroine is a crying little rabbit. I can't stand it. It's so uncomfortable! But the first story is still good! I loved the first story!

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There is uncleanness, so read carefully (of course I am not sure, because no one has pointed it out, and there is a description of the male protagonist's kiss to the original female protagonist in the article)

Teacher!!! You wrote it beautifully. 😢 The heroine is the kind of person with a very tough character. She will not always go into trouble, but will also be very determined to do what she wants to do. I really like reading unit novels like this! 💕 Come on, teacher It's weird that the back part doesn't connect with the front part. I saw someone in the comment section said they used AI. Let's see if it can be finished. Alas, the front part looks great.

In fact, the author is pretty good at writing, especially the third-person perspective, which is really cool. But in fact, in the first world, I felt that the subsequent development and ending were explained a bit too quickly. And it can be seen that the author wants to shape the character of the original heroine in an unconventional way. Of course, the author also describes various behavioral patterns and logic that reflect the personality characteristics of the original heroine, but maybe the length of the quick time travel cannot make the character three-dimensional enough, so when the two heroines and the original heroine confront each other later, I did have a sense of drama, or a sense of statement, rather than a sense of presentation. You tell me what kind of person she is, rather than you letting me feel what kind of person she is. There is also the confrontation and transformation between the male protagonists, which in my opinion is not enough. I don't know whether the author thinks this part is difficult to write or what, but it does make me feel that there is less of a sense of persuasion and too peaceful a peaceful coexistence. Well, if after the heroine's car accident, they suddenly realize that they want to live in peace, at least it will be more convincing to me. The smell of gunpowder in the front is too weak. Although I probably know that it is related to the confrontation between the heroine and the original heroine, but this kind of blank space without clear logic is a bit confusing. It's too big, and the psychological description of the two male protagonists Chen and Ji's sudden concern for the female protagonist is actually not particularly clear. I can't really feel the fact that the heroine is the only one. It feels like the outline is laid out because it needs to be conquered, so that's why. In addition, there are some passages at the end of Chen that are indeed a bit full of DS flavor. But there are many details that are resonant and refreshing, and the pulling and foreshadowing with Xin is completely enough. Although I feel that I still feel a little breathless later on, the overall shaping is very good, especially the part about the man's self-analysis of his changing views on the female protagonist. In addition, starting from the second world, the heroine is equivalent to the original one. I am quite satisfied with the immersive setting. The less drama, the better. I still have certain expectations for the author's new world and new story ^ω^ The above are some of my feelings. I hope the author can describe it more carefully. There is also my personal opinion. Maybe this point needs to be debated, but for me, if it is a forced happy ending, it is not as good as everyone taking what they need. I think if the character shaping guides the behavior, it will be more memorable than forcing a happy ending. For example, if there is a male protagonist who doesn't accept a relationship with multiple people, then he won't accept it, but the energy has been earned, and it doesn't matter if he doesn't care. It doesn't have to be that everyone gets along peacefully, and they will be with each other until they are seventy or eighty years old. It is too happy and easy for people to forget. If there is a kind-hearted reader who has sympathy for the work and it is popular, give him an if line and let him have a dream, or write a fanfic yourself, which can also enrich the discussion of the work. Anyway, I think the author's strength lies in character creation, so he can make this point to the extreme, especially the different description points between the third perspective and the first perspective. It makes me happy to watch it. It's really enjoyable, but I don't think it's enough. It can be seen that the author is good at shaping, but it is not fully developed and some have a hasty ending. These points can obviously be used more to write all the key protagonists in an impressive and unique way. As for whether I am happy or not. Ending, do you want everything to turn into a healthy relationship and a sound personality in the end? I don't think it matters. This is reading a novel and not participating in a transformation program.

If you want to read about bad evil girls, you can just quit! But in fact, this article is well written, and the author is very attentive, but I am really afraid of the feeling of poisonous and harmful gases in sugar! The heroine should be able to do it with ease, but in fact, it is quite distressing to be in the lower position all the time. The dense needle pokes make me feel distressed, but I also hate the iron. I haven't finished the first story and I can't help but comment. Really, it's been a long time since I saw a heroine who made me feel distressed, but!! It hurts but it doesn't hurt at all!! I don't know how to describe it, it's just that everything is barely interesting, the pain and pleasure are not enough, and the pulling is not enough, so I'm just a picky reader here. !! Can't go up or go down, feels uncomfortable 😢😢😢

It's good-looking, very good-looking. The heroine needs to conquer those Tianlong people for the mission, and then after completing the mission, she also steps on them to achieve her own success. I think the most attractive thing about this book is that I fall in love with the heroine while reading it. She does not have a perfect appearance or a rich family, but she is super strong inside. At first, I hated the heroine to death when she was wronged. I was very angry when I knew that the heroine would still be with those male protagonists (without getting married). I felt that they should not get it and regret it. But when I saw what the female protagonist said to another female internet celebrity in the second story, my reaction was similar to that of the other female internet celebrity. I thought that was the right thing to do, but in fact, it seemed that the situation was too small to deny the other person, just like the female protagonist lost everything but the male protagonist lost his love. But in this heroine, she was not limited to making the male protagonist sad and regretful. What is very amazing is that I admire the female characters in it, whether they are good or bad. They have distinct personalities. No matter what the heroine does or who she forgives, I will never think of her as a holy mother like someone in the article. Holy mother is not a derogatory term. She is kind, but she is also stubborn, and she will never give in when it comes to certain conveniences.

It's great. The first story is amazing! It's very touching. The heroine is very, very charming. She always knows what her goal is and has a very strong sense of subjectivity. I feel like these male protagonists are a bit unworthy of her. And, to be honest, I really envy these male protagonists. They also had money, and when they needed it emotionally, the heroine appeared again. Damn Tianlong! The second world was a bit confusing, and she didn't explain clearly why her boss changed. Moreover, I like to use the heroine's own character to live in the world, and I don't like to seal up the memory, and use the original character to complete tasks. And the second world is very annoying in the early stage, really.

The progress of the guide is quite natural. I feel a little sad that the heroine is always being belittled. I hope to torture a few more men in the future. I look forward to the follow-up (quietly, I asked you how many chapters of a world you plan to write)

The heroine is very attractive, and the most important thing is that she has a high sense of deservingness and will not put down her bottom line to conquer the male protagonist. The author's writing style is also very good, and the plot rhythm is very good. I can feel that she wants to express what the male and female protagonists are like. It is not thin and flat, and it is worth watching.