Transform into a Beautiful Girl, First Seek Help from My Elder Sister at the Beginning

It's rare to see such an excellent book on Tomato. It's very appetizing. The emotional description is very delicate, especially the episode about depression (I originally thought it was just an ordinary daily change, but the advantage is that the plot is well controlled and the emotional development is very real, without the feeling of being too sweet and industrial saccharine) (I personally feel that this plot really takes this book to a higher level). It very vividly shows Xiao Yiyi's inner struggle and self-perception crisis. I also experienced similar feelings during the low period. The feeling of loneliness and helplessness is uncomfortable. I can sympathize with this episode. The subsequent plot of taking turns to take care of you is very heart-warming. There are many people who care about you by your side. It is very healing [heartfelt] and makes my heart warm after watching it. The first person is also a good selling point. To be honest, it was difficult to write, but the author's writing style is online. The conflicts in Xiao Yiyi's inner world and the interweaving of various emotions are very good. The supporting characters are also fully portrayed through the first perspective, such as Lin Luoxue, Su Qian, etc. The process of Xiao Yiyi getting to know them is very natural and smooth, without the feeling of being caught off guard halfway. Xiao Yiyi is not a perfect person, but her portrayal is very good. She vividly shows the image of a lively and lovely girl with some minor flaws (although she may not think so [laughing]). She does not have a tall and complete character, nor is she a completely emotionless machine to advance the plot. Instead, she is an ordinary person with strong self-esteem and a bit stubbornness. The first person really shortens the distance between the reader and the protagonist. It feels like a Japanese light novel () In short, this book is definitely worth reading. The writing is smooth, the plot is not draggy, and the characterization is excellent. If you are the kind of person who has had similar experiences or has a strong ability to empathize, then it will impress you more [shy]

Although this novel is written from the first point of view, the plot is okay I think this novel is OK. The author writes it from a first-person perspective. Although those of us who are accustomed to the third-person perspective may not be used to it at first, but you will be attracted by the plot later. The author's first-person perspective better reflects the physical and psychological discomfort "I" feel as a male after my sudden sexual transition, and the emotions I have to act out when facing my family and friends (I personally find it a bit difficult to express if I want to write in the third or second person). Overall, it is a good novel in my opinion ps: Why do you think I gave it 4 stars? Of course it's not because there are too few words.

Just give me a 100-star review and it'll make me happy, okay? I'm not bragging.

At present, when I read the chapter about the bad guy, the author clearly wrote that he has been frantically rubbing against the reader's bottom line. The various previous plots, Su's warmth, Lin's love, sister's Rou, Xu's training hahahaha, the ending of the two peach blossoms without delay, various accidents and plots, as well as the shining points of the protagonist himself, They are all very attractive and very good, but the part about seeing this rotten good guy is a bit unsatisfying. I need to slow down before continuing. I hope I can deal with this plot later. It is very well written (the corner of my mouth keeps turning up. I am watching it hahaha). When I calm down, I hope this part of the plot is good. I will give it another 5 stars, [laughs]

Everyone here, I believe that this novel is absolutely beautiful. This author's writing style is very good. Although some are a little stiff, I dare to say that this is definitely the best and most delicate novel I have ever read \(//∇//)\. It is definitely one of the best. The emotions are portrayed very well. It's super, super. I feel like I'm reading a Chinese text. In short, I believe that it is definitely worth reading this novel.

It's been a long time since I've seen such a good-looking text about sex. The author's writing style is really contagious [crying], especially the part about depression. As a reader, I was really moved. The author really wrote the emotions very delicately [almost crying]

Good! Good! The plot is pretty well written! It's just that the first person is not very good.

Love to read, the writing style is very delicate

The author's writing is very good, and it can be seen that the writing is very powerful. Today is May 2nd, and the author has stopped updating for 11 days, and his soul is back!

It's beautiful and the descriptions are very detailed. Come on, please do more! [Laughing]

So what is the main direction of this book?

A quite interesting confession.

This book is, honestly, very good.

The article is good, but the first point of view is uncomfortable

It's really nice, but if something happens, can you please stop jumping too fast in time and write more about daily life and interaction?

It's different from the traditional male-to-female transformation. It's very novel.

Although love is not perfect without flaws, it is still a fine product and worth watching.

Why is it okay? Why hasn't he called his parents for so long? And his parents still don't know that he has turned into a girl.

So pretty, so pretty

Okay, okay, very good😏

You must write it down [crying]

It's quite beautiful. Author Bie Ge

Very nice little sweet article

Maybe I'm only suitable for watching the beginning, and I don't feel much about the rest, especially the middle section, where so many people care about her, and I feel so uncomfortable that I can't even cry.

I can reduce the number of first person pronouns in the book. I just listen to the book.

Hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee

It's a nice book, but I don't know why it's lukewarm.

The writing is quite good, I hope you will continue to work hard.

It's great, the plot is detailed, I think it can be put on the bookshelf.

The writing is quite good, a little immature, but from the perspective of everyday writing, it is quite good. The author still needs to pay close attention to coding.