HP: I Open a Wishing Shop in Diagon Alley

After chasing for a long time, I finally caught up with the main force. This book is naturally very interesting, but I don't know why it took a tie to reach the passing mark. As for the current plot of this book, I have a little opinion, so don't criticize me if you don't like it: The protagonist's personality is actually very consistent with most people. After all, normal people don't have the temperament of "fearing that the world will not be chaotic." The protagonist is very consistent with the image of most people in the world today. Although ordinary, he also has his own brilliance in this wizarding world - after all, who has nothing to eat and takes the initiative to cause trouble. The personalities of others are also very good. Both the wizarding world and the Muggle world belong to humans, but they are divided into two groups because of the difference in magic. Luna, Rabbi, and Muggles try to use modern methods to study wizards. These are all manifestations of this difference. At present, I don't feel that there are any poisonous points, so why is the score so low? After reading a round of book reviews, I feel that what other readers mainly say is that the details are still lacking. At the same time, some other side descriptions can be more, and at the same time, some linkages and jokes can be added to earn more book reviews to increase traffic, and more eye-catching links should not be too lengthy, so that it can be very attractive. That's all. It's my first time to write a long review. Please forgive me if I don't like the part. This is my current opinion. This book is indeed very good. I recommend other people to read it. That's it.

Look! ! ! Good early redemption! My already cold body suddenly started to emit a warm light when I saw it [I almost cried] [I almost cried] As for the later plot, I haven't watched it, so I don't know what it is like, but it shouldn't be broken anyway. The current evaluation is full score

There are a lot of personal details, and I wrote down the facts that I once feared, thought about, and didn't want to face. When magic and Muggles confront each other, 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭 I don't want to see wizards fighting each other, I want to see them fighting in unison with the outside world, oh no, this is a rare good book for me. Not only does it not have an AI flavor, but it also has a novel concept. In line with the choice of the times. But why do I want to cry more and more😭 Four stars fair review. In the early stage, the daily life in Diagon Alley was warm and delicate. In the later stage, the battle line between wizards and Muggles was full of emotions, tragic and tearful. The characters broke through the classics, the positions were written very realistically, and the sense of substitution was strong. However, the worldview is too Western-centered, and the description of Eastern magical forces such as China is too thin, weakening the rationality of reality for dramatic conflicts. It is overall good-looking, but the logic of the pattern is flawed, and it is worth reading. 🙄 Say important things three times, The Chinese Ministry of Magic will never interfere, and ordinary people will not act so greedy if they know about it. The Chinese Ministry of Magic will never interfere, and ordinary people will not act so greedy if they know about it. The Chinese Ministry of Magic will never interfere, and ordinary people will not act so greedy if they know about it.

A super nice book. It doesn't revolve around the protagonist group like other fanfics. It has its own adventure [laughs]

Nora's story is really amazing This book really has great potential. I hope GGAD will get back together It's a really nice book If it's in my bookcase, it means it's really good. I've browsed hundreds of HP's books, not to mention thousands.

It's good-looking. Except for the early part of Lin Yue's book, all the ones I've seen so far are good-looking. The plot is exciting and deviates from the original story line. It's a bit like a whole new world, but it's not completely separated, and the rhythm of the story is well grasped. It's not too invincible and can't be pushed straight away, nor is it like the kind that's so weak that it can't change anything. It's the kind that gradually gets more exciting as you go to the back, and it's very interesting to watch.

I was very attracted by the setting of the wishing shop! The daily life of the heroine opening a store in Diagon Alley is so interesting. She purchases goods, receives customers, and fulfills her wishes, which brings the fireworks of the magical world to life. The interaction with Draco and the mutual quarrels were so funny, and it was so cute to see the tsundere lady being tough-mouthed and soft-hearted!

Overall, it's okay. If you look closely, the author has obvious signs of cheating (although the author doesn't admit it, and I haven't seen it acknowledged so far), the combat power system is slightly broken, the characters' personalities change suddenly, and it feels like there is no outline or the outline is unclear.

I have always had high requirements for novels, but this one, I feel the characters are very well created. I highly recommend everyone to read it. You will definitely not regret it. The friendship between Luna and the house elf is also very touching. The protagonist is also very gentle, capable and powerful. I like this kind of subject very much. In HP novels, this kind of thing is very rare. I will always support it.

When I saw Chapter 47, there was a slight discrepancy with the label in the introduction. I haven't seen yet that the heroine fits the characteristics of Ravenclaw besides having good grades. I thought it was to make up for the regrets of the plot, but it turned out to be a supporting role. The succubus hasn't seen it yet, maybe it will develop later.

I've finished chasing it, and it looks good so far. The protagonist is neutral and kind-hearted, right? In my opinion, there are only two places that are a little bit poisonous. One is that the train seemed to be injured for the development of the plot (at that time, it seemed that the protagonist was Dumbledore with 2/3 of the magic power). One is in the black market where the protagonist's best friend asks the protagonist to protect a strange little boy (although it is explained later that it is caused by fate). Yeah, yeah, let's change it to 4 stars.

This is really good-looking. The heroine is wise and courageous. The plot is something I really didn't expect and brought me a sense of freshness. It's very interesting.

This article is quite well written and is a pretty good HP fanfic. I can't go into some details, but it's a cool article. It's really novel with the addition of futuristic elements. The descriptions of some of the characters getting along with each other in the article are very delicious hehe. The author is really good at foreshadowing. Some members of the Pioneers did escape in 1991, so they later defected to the United States and besieged Nora in 1996. The logic is very consistent and worth reading. I just have a question, why didn't Nora summon the ancient giant in 1996? Which is more powerful, ancient giants or nuclear bombs?

It's super good-looking. It doesn't follow the main plot line of Harry Potter, but develops a new plot line centered on the heroine. The story setting is very novel. I look forward to the author's next update [Chigua]

This HP fanfic directly makes you a god! The setting of the wishing shop is novel and fits the magical world. The heroine is not a cheating devil, but a gentle listener who uses wishes to resolve every little regret. The scenes with Snape and Dumbledore are very interesting, and the characters are solid!

Treasure HP fic that I have refreshed twice! The wishing shop in Diagon Alley is like a small magical utopia. The customers include young wizards and old wizards, and everyone's wishes are true. The plot is relaxing and relaxing, and there are no bloody plots. It is suitable for reading slowly in your spare time. It is super stress-relieving!

The first time I read this type of story, it was quite novel, and I had a strong sense of immersion. I was easily immersed in it. I don't know if the follow-up will follow the route of the original work. I have to say that the author's writing style and control are still good. He wrote another story that is completely separate from the main line, and it is also interspersed with legendary stories. Jack the Pea Giant is really a typical legendary story that I read when I was a child. I didn't expect to see it here.

The content is exciting and innovative, and the characters are very three-dimensional and plump, natural and not artificial. Unlike other Harry Potter HPs, the characters are not too powerful and transcend the rules. It is highly recommended to watch it.

Very unique perspective! ! ! Compared with the fanfics I read before that followed the original story line, the angle of this novel is very unique and rare. I read it happily in one go. In the end, I was sad to find out that it is a serialization [cry] [cry] [cry] I beg the author for more updates. The child is hungry and begging for food [cry] [cry] [cry]

Wow, it's so beautiful. It's a type I've never seen before. The language is very vivid and the descriptions are very detailed. The most important thing is that the character of the protagonist really impressed me [Adoration]

Everyone has a self-consistent logical chain. Although the author will use it according to his own wishes. Focus on expressing and revealing, and enjoy a certain part of the logical chain. But the fact that the logic is self-consistent and influences each other surpasses all books. Just in terms of style. If compared to other styles. It's just a matter of style preference

The author will update it soon! Now she is my new favorite and has been named a noble concubine. Go and fight for my favor!

This book is really a treasure among HP fans! The setting of the wishing shop is full of ingenuity, and there is a small story behind each wish, which is warm and healing. The heroine has a lovable personality, a good business acumen, and her interaction with Cedric is so sweet. The daily life in Diagon Alley is so magical!

It's actually quite interesting, and the setting is very novel. It's my personal problem to abandon the article, I haven't seen Weibai's lightning protection) I really liked the sentences in it. I took notes and even cried when I was moved.) Sisters who can accept Weibai can really write it.

Looks good^ω^, now it's my new favorite (I'm not good at expressing myself)

At present, it seems that the plot is very novel and different from the usual fan stories, and it does not stick to the main plot. Love to watch.

I think it's pretty good, but I don't know why there are so few people urging updates and the scores are so low.

This book is great and satisfies my curiosity about the world! ! ! ! 🌹🌹🌹🌹

Does anyone know how many chapters ago Dumbledore and Snape came to the wishing shop? Thank you [love] [love] [love]

A masterpiece, with complete content and good foreshadowing. It doesn't mention Hogwarts, but completely writes its own story. Full marks for creativity. I have read about 200 books on my bookshelf, and this should be my first review.