Qiqiao: the Noble Lady Must Marry Me!

The writing is very good, although there are some logic problems, but what does it matter? As long as the emotions are in place, as long as it is not deviant, explodes the worldview, or violates the character, it can let readers know what story the author wants to express. I think it is a good book! May the author live long!

I wish all my fellow riders a long life. This is my first time trying to write an online article about riding and slashing. If it's good or bad, everyone can comment at will. I will accept it humbly. Thank you ~ I wish you a long life~

How should I put it? It seems that some book friends read this book as an imaginary novel about war and history, and feel that there are many embarrassing and poisonous points in the book. My suggestion is that you don't have to read it, but don't show off your "knowledge and insight". As a reader, I want to see a story in which a protagonist with destiny, system and conscience saves the world and becomes the light and sun for ordinary people. The author actually writes it very well, especially as a newcomer to this kind of subject.

(Update me quickly, bastard [angry]) This is the best mount-and-blade article I have ever seen on Tomato. I am an experienced mount-and-blade player, but unfortunately I am playing mount-and-blade 2, and it contains the timeline of the mount-and-blade battle group 1, so some of the content is not very understandable. (Such as names of people, places, plots, etc.) The second is the operation. I think it's really impossible to kill 30 soldiers without armor without bugs. Author, I think the title of this book can be changed, The Noble Lady Must Marry Me. This looks like a stallion story at first glance, and makes people want to write it off immediately. After all, it is too classic, and it also feels a bit sugary [laughs awkwardly], but your book clearly does not follow this route [facepalm]

It is well integrated with the game. When you get older, you should read some interesting system articles, gkd. Just to catch a bug, in Chapter 37, Emil's real name was revealed after he joined. Later, it was said that only by remembering the name can one become an NPC. Should this setting be improved?

I have never played mounted slashing, but the author cleverly integrated the mounted slashing system into the storyline so that it doesn't feel abrupt and has a good look and feel. The progression of the plot is kept very smooth, and the characterization of the characters is also very delicate. Compared with the protagonist's superb martial arts and modeling, his personal charm is more attractive. At the same time, I also like the writing style of the novel. I use "medieval flavor" metaphors when describing it, and the same goes for the dialogues, which invisibly increases the sense of immersion. Sometimes I also use appropriate line drawings. The combination of the two gives people a very comfortable look and feel, and will not make people feel boring and procrastinating. After reading it all night, I rated it highly.

To be honest, the writing is very top-notch. The current chapter on the benevolence of doctors is so well written. It feels like being there, like a movie. The protagonist has a lovable personality and the supporting characters are very vivid and three-dimensional. The author of the sacred book, I love you.

You may need to add panels and points to the protagonist. Otherwise, the protagonist cannot be called invincible now. It does not match your invincible expression. Some of the qualities of the protagonist should be strengthened and modified, such as the appearance of the ancient god, and his combat power should be improved. Otherwise, you can remove the invincible label from me.

Very top notch, this is the first time I have said this in a long time. Maybe I'm wearing a filter, but I thought the book was perfect until I finished it. Even though it may be unfinished or something like that, I think the first half of it, which is more than 50 chapters in my opinion, is qualified.

On Tomato novels, being able to get rid of toilet paper is already worthy of this 5-star rating. The author has his own ingenuity, especially the protagonist's reaction when he thinks it is a game is also very similar to a PlayStation player. Although it is a very typical and thorough multi-girl routine, the description of the Middle Ages makes up for this. Maybe it is because there are too few novels of the same type. Anyway, I think this five-star rating is correct.

This is a love letter to knight-and-blade players😭😭😭The description of another world is very good😋

I give it five stars, it's a very novel fanfic, and the writing is definitely top notch on Tomato, but it's just lacking a bit. Don't stop updating, may you live a long life

Suddenly something came to mind. The protagonist's name is Wang Wen. If the protagonist becomes the king, will he be called King Wang Wen? [Cover face]

I generally give good reviews to San Guanzheng's novels, first I give them first, and I will make changes when the time comes. In fact, it is recommended that the author add some psychological changes to the protagonist's acceptance of time travel. Normal people cannot quit the game without any reaction at all.

@ Will the protagonist open the data panel later to add attributes to himself? After all, after upgrading, the attributes will not take effect, right? Will he also use the data panel to get plastic surgery? The face of the ancient god is really amazing if he travels through the past, which affects the sense of substitution. This is the problem. I looked here to see if there is a chapter like that, but I can't find it.

A love letter to the mount-and-blade players, but even a non-mountain-blade player like me can understand it. The narrative is smooth, the background is vivid, and the characters are well-drawn. However, the appearance of the protagonist Ancient God is a bit difficult to express.

It's so cool. There is a heraldry game where all the characters are heavy armored soldiers, but the enemies are like archers.

Even if it doesn't combine horse-racing and slashing with online games, it is still an excellent fictional medieval novel in itself, and at least it can be ranked at the top among Western readers. Brother, I only ask you one thing, please don't stop updating. It's so good, but there are too few updates. I'm afraid you'll stop updating. If you really don't want to update, just update less @Your top priority is

It can be said that in Tomato, there are so many rewrites, and you made me feel very comfortable, thoughtful, and satisfied with regrets after reading it in one sitting. All elements are maintained.

It's awesome, but the description is too detailed. Can you go to the front line before Chapter 200?

It's a very interesting horse-and-blade fanfic, but I don't know why so few people read it.

I rarely review books, but the writing in this book is quite good.

It's great for me, a knight-and-blade player.

The descriptions in this book are relatively old-school, but many paragraphs of writing are already comparable to classics.

It's a pretty good story about riding and slashing, but it's a pity that it doesn't sit well with my stomach. Four stars.

In addition to the fact that the character's favorability grows too quickly, the writing is delicate and interesting. It's a great novel.

Very good mounted slash, makes my broadsword spin, love from the 4th Scourge

Okay, there are too few Tomato riding and slashing articles, this one is considered to be a hit here.

Based on what I've seen so far, I think it's pretty good.

This topic and content must be given a thumbs up