From the Trial ***************

Very well written. I hope the author will work harder.

It has a darker world view, which is quite nice.

After reading the previous point, it was okay. I just wanted to ask the author if the protagonist is a gradient?

The protagonist's mentality changes too quickly. One page is 5,000 or 6,000 words long. I suggest splitting it into two chapters.

It's all dark, unexpectedly, there is no purification or redemption

It's a very good original light novel. It should be a light novel. Anyway, I really like it. It's quite suitable for adaptation into a series.