The System Grants Longevity, and Forbidden Arts Burn Lifespan? Unlimited Uses!

It's not bad. The author's writing style is very good. It's not the kind of raw, hard and smelly AI writing. Moreover, this young author works hard. He updates five chapters a day and the writing is not procrastinating. The time concept of the novel is also good. It is suitable for long-term follow-up. I will give it four stars.

Excellent, the emotional scenes are not toxic, and the protagonist is not overly suppressed. It's just that Li Fei's villain line is too long. It's time to update the character. The forced map switching during the refining period is too big and too cumbersome. I want to watch the emotional drama between the protagonist and the master, so why not bring this to me? I want to read a refreshing novel instead of this kind of frustrating thing. Do you know how excited and angry I was when I saw the protagonist and the master separated in the middle of the night? In the middle of the night, I felt angry and my blood was surging. Review again on June 7. The latest update is pretty good, please wait for more updates.

The writing is very smooth and there are no problems. The author doesn't need to worry about those malicious comments. Originally, the longevity novel corresponds to a slow pace, and I feel that the protagonist's combat power is not very low, and there are so many education and training. This kind of longevity + single female protagonist theme is very interesting. Come on, the current word count is still too few [shy]

Overall, it's pretty good. The author updates 5 chapters every day. The most annoying thing is that the two Lianxu forced to change the map. It's not bad and doesn't make you feel bad all the time. Let's get back to the topic. Pure love is invincible.

I can only say that it was a fun journey. Although it is not like a pure novel that reaches a state of mind every day, the steady improvement of the male protagonist's strength and the good use of the mechanism of unlimited longevity are the highlights of this novel. The male protagonist is decisive in killing, and the female protagonist is also full of charm. As a female protagonist, she can be independent without the male protagonist.

The male and female protagonists are very good, there is only one female protagonist, there is no ambiguity, and the two develop very quickly, which is good [laughs][laughs][laughs][laughs]

So classic. Rescued by a beautiful master, who fell into a trap and had sex with her

It's a very good refreshing article. It's refreshing enough, and the writing style is decent. The wheels will roll into the readers' faces at every turn [laughing evilly]. In today's fast-paced era, this writing style is enough. The most important thing is that he can actually write five chapters stably! Who needs a bicycle if you start with 10,000 words? The most abstract thing is that there are still people who can't read his fifth update, and deliberately write reviews about him too quickly, causing the quality to drop. Brother, if the quality doesn't drop, we readers know best [Thinking]

The protagonist's online IQ is a highlight of the story, and he shows his wisdom in resolving difficulties. The refreshing and decisive plot is enjoyable, and the rhythm is compact and non-protracted, allowing readers to be immersed in it and enjoy reading along the way.

I see that the emotional drama between the male and female protagonists is okay at the moment, but I feel that the progress is a bit slow. With more than 500,000 words, I haven't experienced the big effect of longevity. It's just a secret method for improving one's realm. It's useless, but overall it's okay. It's worth watching. I retreated to the back and dragged further and further, whoever wanted to watch it?