The System Bestows Immortality, and Burns the Life-Burning Forbidden Technique? Unlimited Opening!

It's not bad. The author's writing style is very good. It's not the kind of raw, hard and smelly AI writing. Moreover, this young author works hard. He updates five chapters a day and the writing is not procrastinating. The time concept of the novel is also good. It is suitable for long-term follow-up. I will give it four stars.

Excellent, the emotional scenes are not toxic, and the protagonist is not overly suppressed. It's just that Li Fei's villain line is too long. It's time to update the character. The forced map switching during the refining period is too big and too cumbersome. I want to watch the emotional drama between the protagonist and the master, so why not bring this to me? I want to read a refreshing novel instead of this kind of frustrating thing. Do you know how excited and angry I was when I saw the protagonist and the master separated in the middle of the night? In the middle of the night, I felt angry and my blood was surging. Review again on June 7. The latest update is pretty good, please wait for more updates.

The writing is very smooth and there are no problems. The author doesn't need to worry about those malicious comments. Originally, the longevity novel corresponds to a slow pace, and I feel that the protagonist's combat power is not very low, and there are so many education and training. This kind of longevity + single female protagonist theme is very interesting. Come on, the current word count is still too few [shy]

Overall, it's pretty good. The author updates 5 chapters every day. The most annoying thing is that the two Lianxu forced to change the map. It's not bad and doesn't make you feel bad all the time. Let's get back to the topic. Pure love is invincible.

I can only say that it was a fun journey. Although it is not like a pure novel that reaches a state of mind every day, the steady improvement of the male protagonist's strength and the good use of the mechanism of unlimited longevity are the highlights of this novel. The male protagonist is decisive in killing, and the female protagonist is also full of charm. As a female protagonist, she can be independent without the male protagonist.

The male and female protagonists are very good, there is only one female protagonist, there is no ambiguity, and the two develop very quickly, which is good [laughs][laughs][laughs][laughs]

I see that the emotional drama between the male and female protagonists is okay at the moment, but I feel that the progress is a bit slow. With more than 500,000 words, I haven't experienced the big effect of longevity. It's just a secret method for improving one's realm. It's useless, but overall it's okay. It's worth watching. I retreated to the back and dragged further and further, whoever wanted to watch it?

The protagonist's online IQ is a highlight of the story, and he shows his wisdom in resolving difficulties. The refreshing and decisive plot is enjoyable, and the rhythm is compact and non-protracted, allowing readers to be immersed in it and enjoy reading along the way.

It feels okay. The male protagonist is almost invincible in the same realm, but his opponents are all one or two realms higher than the protagonist [face-palming]. I would like to reinforce that the male protagonist at least doesn't have to be separated from the female protagonist in the future. After we separated, there was nothing to see.

The protagonist is magnanimous, connotative, neither pretentious nor pretentious, and lovable! Like it!

So classic. Rescued by a beautiful master, who fell into a trap and had sex with her

It's a very good refreshing article. It's refreshing enough, and the writing style is decent. The wheels will roll into the readers' faces at every turn [laughing evilly]. In today's fast-paced era, this writing style is enough. The most important thing is that he can actually write five chapters stably! Who needs a bicycle if you start with 10,000 words? The most abstract thing is that there are still people who can't read his fifth update, and deliberately write reviews about him too quickly, causing the quality to drop. Brother, if the quality doesn't drop, we readers know best [Thinking]

The writing is very good. Although it is a book with a single female protagonist, the emotional line is well written! ! There are the tribulations of living and dying together, and there is also the lingering lust that will last forever! Whether it is a book with a single heroine or multiple heroines, as long as the emotional line is well written and the foreshadowing is logical, it is a good book. . Both male and female protagonists are very good! ! !

The public opinion of the sect gives me a feeling that it favors female videos. Others are okay. It is considered good on Tomato. The main ones are ccb [shy]

For my own book, four stars is not too much, right? [Think]

This is a sweet drama, the male and female protagonists are annoying, so I skipped it directly, but it is really a fun drama. In the drama, the author explained the talismans, formations, relationships, and distinctions in detail and very thoroughly. It made me understand at a glance. The protagonist's talismans, Burning it into the body corresponds to the title of the book. The most difficult thing about the talismans lies in the later development due to the scarcity of materials. If it is burned into the body, it means burning the talisman as a carrier. This is the correct explanation of the Tao of Talisman.

I must praise it with five stars. The author wrote it so well. In Chapter 74, the male protagonist met the female protagonist's senior brother. I thought there was going to be another bloody plot about misunderstandings. However, the female protagonist directly confessed to the male protagonist. The male and female protagonists were honest with each other. The male protagonist was not too careful or not a stud. It was like a breath of fresh air in a tomato.

Yes, the daily writing of cultivating immortals, which focuses on cultivation, is okay with emotions and battles, but what about the later stage? One is a saint from the ancient times, and the other is from a traditional orientation, Taoist ancestor or emperor. However, I still prefer to have some emotions in cultivation. Now that I am an immortal, I can go to the stars and explore other worlds, such as technology, magic and so on.

The writing is very good and smooth, and the protagonist's character is comfortable to look at. It can be seen that the author is serious about writing this book.

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This book is so close to my heart! ! ! The single heroine who cultivates immortality is well received! The relationship between the male and female protagonists develops quickly and neither of them is shy! The relationship between the two is so good that they are praised! The plot development is commendable! I have just read Chapter 400, and the system of cultivating immortals has been well received by the tradition! Good reviews! ! ! Tied, exactly 770 chapters. I was scratching my head when I couldn't see the male and female protagonists. They were so sweet, and I felt as if I was falling out of love. I can't even read other novels, ahhhhhhhhh! !

I feel that the biggest obstacle to immortality is a Taoist companion. If you have immortality, you can wait until you are invincible before finding one. What kind of woman doesn't have one? Finding a Taoist companion now is an obstacle on the road to immortality. If I hadn't been the protagonist, I would have died countless times.

Okay, okay, the plot is well written, and there are little easter eggs [shy], that's good

It's good-looking, but some unimportant descriptions could be a little less detailed, and the important ones should be written more carefully to make it look more comfortable. This is just my personal suggestion. I still support the author. There are not many good-looking books. The author I read before couldn't persist. I hope the author can work hard! Ollie give it!

Five updates every day, the author keeps working hard [asking for explosive updates] [asking for explosive updates] [asking for explosive updates] [asking for explosive updates] [asking for explosive updates] [asking for explosive updates] [asking for explosive updates] [asking for explosive updates] [asking for explosive updates] [asking for explosive updates] [asking for explosive updates]

I'm reading a book on Tomato Novels and I don't know how to send free gifts. Come on, update, come on, update. I can only give you a five-star review. There are no free gifts in Tomato, and I can't find you.

As a hardcore fan of cultivating immortals, this book really made me happy! There is no clichéd plot about the start of the story. The protagonist starts from a humble disciple, steps on the traps of the sect, breaks through the secret realm of narrow escape, and even tries to build the foundation with a narrow escape. I clutched my phone tightly the whole time.

A great novel, the author updates it every day, it's a pleasure to read [laughs] Super pretty! ! ! The author is constantly updating! !

Alas, even though Chapter 5 is already a lot, it's still not enough.

It's okay, at least in my opinion, there is a high probability that it is hand-typed and not AI, because there will be problems with the logic of AI novels but it is basically unlikely that there will be typos. This book has very few traces of hand-typed typos, which is a breath of fresh air among the tomatoes that are everywhere in AI novels today.