[Scheming, brooding, shamelessly flirtatious gong X sharp-tongued, haughty little firecracker shou who blows up at the slightest provocation and is always plotting something]
(Switch-at-birth story + two male leads + a little dog training + slightly unhinged early on + both virgins + a little forced romance midway through)
Little scene
Shou: (rolls his eyes, provokes him, and raises his middle finger)
Gong: (slips a ring onto the shou's middle finger)
Shou: ? Are you nuts? Is your brain full of shit?
Gong: Baby, I love you too.
Shou: ? ...
They were switched at birth. After the shou finishes racing, he checks his phone and sees 99+ notifications. Only when he gets home does he learn he's the fake young master.
But the real young master turns out to be an ex-boyfriend he'd once humiliated!
“Train a dog? Just crook a finger and he'll come running.”
“Baby, you know what? When you threw red wine on me, I got off on it.”
“Screw you. Fine, kiss me, but why are you biting my tongue piercing!”
Little scene two
Gong: What did you put in the milk? I feel so hot.
Shou: My spit.
Gong: ...?
(Heads up! The pacing is fast! There's a little angst midway through [baring teeth]. Sweet moments early on, a little sweetness in the middle, and pure sugar at the end! I'm still writing pretty boys, so please follow and leave comments [baring teeth]. The shou isn't feminine; he just likes dressing up.)
The plot is good, but I can't understand it. It feels like the chapters go one way and another, and they don't feel connected together.
He was so handsome. Well, I was also blown to death directly.
Ou Kun, the author is very NB, I'm already addicted
I'll go, it's nice to watch [admiration] and cool 🤭
The plot is okay, but some parts are not very coherent and look a bit messy. I think it would be better to write less about the supporting characters. The most important thing is the characterization. Too many people may not remember it.