Tomorrow***********

The writing is quite good, but sometimes the rhythm is not grasped well, which makes it uncomfortable to watch. For example, after the protagonist finished the duel in Casimir, a group of people made fun of the knight name filled in by the protagonist. After writing several chapters, the impression was not very good. I hope the writing will get better and better in the future. This book is worth reading in the Tomato Ark fan fiction [eating melon]

In my opinion, there are no big poisonous points for the time being, or if there are original supporting characters in the fanfic, which can be considered poisonous points, then it is indeed a bit poisonous. Except for the white-haired dog, it feels like it should be the best Ark novel in my heart.

It looks good, keep at it, I must, but can we get to the plot quickly? I want to watch the plot

It looks good but it hasn't been updated for several days [crying] [crying]

There are too few words, but the current content is good as long as it doesn't collapse in the later stages.

It's a good write-up, I hope I can keep it up

It looks pretty good so far. There should be many people still looking for it. I'll give it a five-star rating first.

The subject matter is novel and the plot is witty. I wonder if it has multiple female protagonists. Please update it [Like]

It was fun to watch and the plot was okay

How many heroines are there?

It looks good, cheers for the author [sending heartfelt wishes]

Super big cup said, I think the number of readers is pretty good, the author keeps it up I have to tie up the author and code words, but I still want to read it, boss [crying]

It's still relatively comfortable to watch at the moment, but the three chapters of the knight match keep repeating the daily routine of gods and men. It seems that the author likes this joke very much [smile]

Good-looking[Like][Like][Like] Worth watching

The writing is really good.

It's still pretty 😋

As it stands now, it's basically either multiple heroines or no heroines. If the author doesn't write it down even though it has a single female protagonist, then... The author is awesome! ! !

I think the author should enter the international market immediately [Thinking]

It's okay, but I want to see Amiya's part😋

Not bad, not bad. I hope my teeth will get better and better.

I have little talent and only think it looks good (♥∀♥)

It looks good. As long as you work hard to update it, I will do anything [shy]

It's pretty good to read, and the daily writing is pretty good too.

It looks great. By the way, will you create your own heroine?

It's very interesting. There's a lot of foreshadowing in the front. Now the content has reached the main line. I must write it down.

It looks very good so far, and I am an author who likes to pet cats. I hope I don't have a knife to avoid being petted to death by cats.

It's still interesting, and it's good to read when you're bored.

It's pretty good, but there are not many people watching it.

The writing is very good, but the author should pay attention to some details that belong to the world of Terra.

It's possible. The dialogue between the protagonist and Tallulah is very interesting. It's a potential masterpiece.