Arknights: Talulah Took Me In from the Start

The writing is quite good, but sometimes the rhythm is not grasped well, which makes it uncomfortable to watch. For example, after the protagonist finished the duel in Casimir, a group of people made fun of the knight name filled in by the protagonist. After writing several chapters, the impression was not very good. I hope the writing will get better and better in the future. This book is worth reading in the Tomato Ark fan fiction [eating melon]

In my opinion, there are no big poisonous points for the time being, or if there are original supporting characters in the fanfic, which can be considered poisonous points, then it is indeed a bit poisonous. Except for the white-haired dog, it feels like it should be the best Ark novel in my heart.

It looks good, keep at it, I must, but can we get to the plot quickly? I want to watch the plot

It looks good but it hasn't been updated for several days [crying] [crying]

The subject matter is novel and the plot is witty. I wonder if it has multiple female protagonists. Please update it [Like]

How many heroines are there?

It was fun to watch and the plot was okay

It looks pretty good so far. There should be many people still looking for it. I'll give it a five-star rating first.

It's a good write-up, I hope I can keep it up

There are too few words, but the current content is good as long as it doesn't collapse in the later stages.