Dragon Clan************

Good. It's rare to have Nono. Xia Mi's multi-female novel. Give some encouragement. It's just that the male protagonist's entry into Kassel is a bit abrupt. I feel like it wasn't explained clearly. It's good not to go to the Bronze Gate at the beginning. It would also be nice to have more psychological descriptions of how Nono likes the male protagonist. I also hope to write about the hero's extraordinary bloodshed in a different world. (Come on, this is super cool) It would be best if Nono said it through profiling. It feels very touching. Come on, author. Very well written.

I have an idea that when I first went to the Three Gorges and met the authority of the Dragon King, I could write that I felt a chance to go home, and then directly possessed the Demon Lord. When I finally gathered all the authority, I realized that I couldn't go back, and then I fell into confusion. Suddenly an idea flashed in his mind, and there was a World Tree. Just take a gamble and hit the World Tree. [Sneaky laugh] Then the last paragraph was Zhuang Zhou dreaming of a butterfly or a butterfly dream. Zhuang Zhou couldn't tell. With the consciousness that was no longer clear, he directly started the script of the Heaven Thief Demon Lord and used his strength to open a hole. Then Lu Mingfei, not bound by the friendship they yelled about, rushed directly. Finally, he suddenly woke up to the ending of the Heaven Stealing Demon Lord, using his little power to open a peaceful and beautiful new world. (End)

You can write well. Come on, author. Don't be proud when you see good book reviews. Accept and correct low-scoring book reviews if they are reasonable. I hope the author can stick to it. Emmm. The readers of Dragon Clan must have their own understanding of Dragon Clan, and so does the author. There is no need to change some of your understanding and outline to cater too much. Seeing as the author is still a student, I would like to encourage you with the five-star praise. I hope to keep writing until the end. After all, I feel that there are not many good Dragon Clan fanfics, and there are only so many that I can read [facepalm]

I have read more than seventy chapters. It is a very good fanfic. I hope the quality can be maintained in the follow-up. Please grasp the plot of Bronze and Fire carefully and keep it as short as possible. After reading so many fan stories, I always want to skip it.

Five stars, no need to say more. Not a bulldozer, the author promises to include many girls. Without being invincible at the start, the protagonist has a growth path. The emotional description is gradual and has its own worldview construction. Gou Cao's Jiangnan himself felt sick after eating the book, but it didn't stop his fans from making up for it. All in all, a great book. If you feel that the harem is difficult to write, you can write the protagonist's mental journey as accepting the changes brought about by his own time travel after seeing this world of trenches and the memory of his own time travel (from the current point of view, the protagonist's time traveling is far earlier than the beginning of the Dragon Clan plot, and has changed many things), and is willing to take on his own responsibilities and raise his middle finger to his destiny. Finally, he roared, just to live for all the people he loves and those who love him, you are all my wings, good ending.

The king, whose blood is flowing with politics, does not feel that strong, and lacks that energy.

I have never read the original text of Dragon Clan and have only read fanfics written by others. Based on my superficial understanding, I feel that it is a bit different from the main storyline of Dragon Clan that I know from other fans. I feel that the setting is a bit different from others. It is a bit complicated for me to understand, but it is still very interesting.

I feel that the author has changed a lot of details and it is a bit disconnected from the original work. It feels weird to start with Cassel and the narrative is a bit bland. I hope the author will continue to work hard and get better and better. I will give the author a five-star support [blowing kiss]

If you can read it, keep it for now and wait for two to three hundred chapters to be finished in one go

I read the beginning and it was pretty good. I added a bookshelf to support it. Come on, brother!

I still feel it's not good enough, but I give it five stars to give it some encouragement.

I have been following it for many days. As an old bookworm, I highly recommend this book.

It's a very interesting new book with potential, but it's a little short and I read it in one day [Thoughts]

It's not bad, at least it's good from a bunch of history. This doesn't mean that the author is not good. It's just that there are only a few dragon fanfics on Tomato. The slow pace is still acceptable. Let's read it first.

I give it five stars. It's pretty good. I feel like the heroine could be joined by a nanny team. As for Lao Lu, I feel that his character is actually more suitable for people in normal society, such as Su Xiaoqiang and so on.

It's a bit bland for me, and Lu Mingfei's role is a bit too much.

Is there Mai Shutoku?

Very good, the plot is okay

Niu Fu, especially Niu Fu

Vivid content Lots of foreshadowing

No, why was it removed from the shelves [crying] [crying]

It looks okay

It's okay, why is the score so low?

The fanfic is so cool

Very good, well written

Can Shutoku Aki be accepted [Adoration][Adoration]

The author must insist on writing more [cry][cry][cry]

Why is the score so low? It seems that the publication time is too short

I hope the protagonist is more of a strong character

Hum hum hum, I give you five stars, and if you dare to mess up this book, just wait.