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It's good-looking and publishable, and the author's writing style is very good, like the kind that would be collected in a library based on his words and stories. Lin Langyao and Wen Chaoxuan were probably just two little bitter gourds, depending on their backgrounds. But not when the two of them meet. Lin Langyao is a clingy and handsome little sweetheart who belongs exclusively to Master Wen in the world of cultivation [laughing evilly], and the Big Devil ᕙ(`▿´)ᕗ (the kind who can save the world) in the world of cultivation. Wen Chaoxuan, the "suppressor" (the kind that can save the world) of Big Demon King in the world of cultivation. The best master in the world. I don't know how to describe the rest about him and Lin Langyao. I'm out of words, I'm out of words, not because they don't have more advantages, but because I'm not good at it. Next, let me talk about my feelings. For me, I really like the relationship and bond between the two of them. Lin is Wen's hand-picked disciple and Taoist companion, and Wen is Lin's eternal support. They are each other's destination and harbor.

The ending is a very peaceful one. The characters in the book are all fully described, as if it is not just a book, but a living person with flesh and blood. Lin Langyao was raised by Wen Chaoxuan since he was a child. In fact, they were only supposed to be masters and apprentices, but because of a "little accident", their hearts met. One of the two is selfless and fearless, and the other is selfish but also has a righteous heart. In fact, both of them are very selfish and have each other in their hearts. The emotional description The writing is very delicate. Wen Chaoxuan longs for Lin Langyao to grow up, and hopes that he will rely on himself. Lin Langyao's growth also stems from Wen Chaoxuan's death. In the end, the young lovers are together sweetly. There is no real "villain" in the book, and there are too many involuntaries. In short, it is a very good book. The author's writing is very good, and the blank space in the final story is also very good. It allows me to imagine that they will have countless futures, laughing and playing, joy and sorrow!

Actually, I don't really like to read sour stories, but I couldn't put this one down. I think the author's writing style is very good, the emotions are delicate and brilliant, and the plot is interlocking and fascinating. It is a very good book. But the relationship between the two protagonists made me feel astringent for no reason. Although the two people are so closely related, they can't avoid the occasional small grievances between them. I don't know who to feel sorry for. I seem to have predicted the ending in advance, but I still watch them move forward step by step. Of course, I have only read less than a third of the book, but the words between the lines gave me a feeling of a storm coming, a little worried and scared, and a little confused about the unknown. It's been a long time since I've written so many words, so please forgive me for the bad writing.

It's very interesting. It's really the most master-disciple-like novel I've ever read. It's a rare real pair of strong characters. The setting of the secondary CP is also very touching. It's the kind of story that can be read with your mind, whether it's Wen Chaoxuan's deep love for Lin Langyao (Mengzu praised it) or Lin Langyao's attachment to him, or Lu Zhuo's love for Qi Zifeng. I still chose to let go of my obsession in the end, and it was all delicious. Although Mengzu's ending was a little bit disappointing, it allowed him to get what he wanted. It can only be said that the final ending can only be achieved by the interlocking of everything. I look forward to the new book and hope there will be more extras｡:.ﾟヽ(*´∀`)ﾉﾟ.:｡ @ Purple smoke sink

The real strict father has come. "The immortal caressed my head and tied my hair to receive immortality." "Ghosts and gods are above, and all spirits can be seen. If you don't change your mind, if you violate your oath, your body will die and your path will disappear." "Master is as fierce as a scourge..." "It wasn't until we met that I realized that not only was he not like Zhong Kui, but he was actually very handsome and handsome." "What is death?" "... Looking back, there is nothingness before and after, and the world returns to darkness." "Home is here, it won't change, and I am here too. I will wait for you to come back in the mountains." "Do you know how much effort it takes to raise a child? If you want to blame a person who raised you for not having a heart, that is really inappropriate." "If you are truly the one you care about, if you care about him, he will also care about you. From now on, he will be there in every gust of wind you experience, and in every rain you fall in, there will be him. The sun and the moon will shine on you, and the mountains, rivers, and land will all be his support for you. In the spring, the flowers are noisy, in the autumn, the leaves are quiet, the geese come and go, and the carps dive. He knows every step you take in the world."

I enjoyed watching the unabridged version [Blowing Kiss] The first part is quite sweet, but I haven't watched the second part yet. The foreshadowing in the first part made me feel a bit sadistic. I still cried after watching it, but it was so sweet, and the extras were also quite sweet [blowing kisses]

I'll go, take a good look... The writing is very comfortable, the plot doesn't have any major flaws, and the emotional lines are also very well written! I like this pair of master and apprentice so much, I want to be together happily forever TAT

No! Such a good article, why does it have such a low score? ? ? The author begs you to write a new book! It's really beautiful! Dear babies, please read this book! It's really worth it! The plot is compact and the writing is smooth! The protagonists in the book each have their own shining points! Wen Chaoxuan cares about the common people, but he will always leave a safe escape route for Ayao. He never talks about love, nor can he talk about love, but his love is silent and deep. Although Lin Langyao is a magic pill, he has never killed anyone he shouldn't have killed. Everyone has their own righteousness, and everyone is right, but all the innocent people in the world are trying to force him, but in Ayao's world there is only Master Wen Chaoxuan.

Good reviews, master and apprentice year, Shuangjie 1V1, He It's quite sweet. I didn't notice any character collapse.

I met another magical author. A very beautiful fairy book. If you haven't read it, you must read it. Very, very beautiful, the master is a strict master. The apprentice is a naughty disciple, and as a Taoist companion, he is also his favorite Taoist companion. If you haven't watched it, you must watch it

This is the kind of unswerving love that develops over time. From the reader's point of view, the setting at the beginning is very impressive and difficult to get out of later. I secretly took my mobile phone to school in order to read the novel. This novel is really good. This aspect of Shizun is really good. Both protagonists are portrayed with flesh and blood. The only shortcoming is that the supporting characters are relatively less portrayed, but the characters of the main supporting characters are still relatively solid. The love line seems a bit nonsensical in the early stage, but as the foreshadowing is recycled in the later chapters, it becomes very reasonable. The world story line is also very tight. The only flaw is that the writing of the Lu family is not detailed enough. If it were written more delicately, the characters of Master Lu and Master Qi could be better enriched. This is my first time writing a long review for a novel, so please forgive me if there are any shortcomings. I'm looking forward to the author's next novel. Family members, we'll see you in the next novel about cultivating immortals. My reading time has no reference value. I smuggled my mobile phone into school to read it offline, and many systems did not calculate it. It actually took about ten hours to finish watching.

Everyone is normal people with normal plots and normal relationships. I haven't seen such a normal novel in a long time. Don't understand why the rating is low. Teachers and students are like teachers and students, and friends are like friends. People who are dedicated to the common people are always giving, and people who are skinny are really stupid. 555 I'm so touched. I haven't seen such a normal novel in a long time. The extra story is also very good, with a master-student and Big-flavor feel. Both masters and apprentices are not normal people and have social difficulties [laughing] Big's only depression is actually due to the pressure of study. Master still misses the common people so much.

To be honest, I feel that the 7.0 Rating is low. The master who cares about the world and is righteous has taught a mischievous apprentice with the attributes of a devil boy. Because of the demonic blood in his body, the master will inevitably be devoured by the demonic god in his emotions and memories, and will eventually destroy the world. In the end, our lovely apprentice Pipixia must follow the guidance of fate and kill the possessed master to save the world. The process is a bit cruel, it feels like two bitter melons extracting the insignificant sweetness from each other. The ending, I almost thought it was going to be over. Fortunately, fortunately, the author's writing style is very nice and the characters are full-bodied. It is not to use color to promote the plot, but as the plot progresses, the characters' emotions are also gradually improved. The writing is really great. In addition to the protagonist, the behavioral motivations, speech and behavior of the supporting characters are also very vivid and vivid. Everyone loves it.

Overall, it looks good Although at the beginning, the master abolished the disciple's cultivation, which always made people feel unfair to the disciple, Lin Langyao was heartless and didn't think there was anything wrong, so as a reader, I can only wish him well. Finally, the writing and plot are so excellent that I can guarantee that I will not lose money if I invest in this low-scoring article.

It's very interesting. I'm quite interested in it now. The characters of the two protagonists are very interesting. However, I think sometimes important things are not that important in the eyes of the two protagonists. The protagonist's brain circuit is quite strange, and I feel that I shouldn't be able to abuse it (no)

It's so good. The first 20 chapters are a bit boring, but it's still better than many books and the writing is better. The author's writing gets better and better later on. The plot is not an ordinary upgrade flow and is very innovative. The plot is very smooth and the emotional scenes are very interesting. It's probably because the author published one book a day that the score is so low. It's better than 9.7. I recommend it!

(Note ⚠️ It may involve minor spoilers ⚠️ I don't know if it is considered a spoiler ⚠️ It is acceptable to read below, mainly based on personal feelings ⚠️ ) Personally, I feel that it is really good to read, and it is difficult for me to calm down and read the novel. This is the only novel that I have read in full in this period. In fact, I doubted whether this novel is really a he in the middle. I repeatedly clicked in the comment area to verify, because there are too many twists and turns in the book and later, and the two little bitter gourds have been suffering. They have too many choices to face and too heavy responsibilities to shoulder. I feel sorry for them, and I am afraid that lovers will not be able to get married in the end, so I feel sad and distressed along the way, especially every time Wen Chaoxuan leaves Lin Langyao, Lin's reluctance and sadness for Wen, and everything Wen silently does for Lin, cleaning up the mess for his apprentice, and Lin's mood after seeing Wen apologizing to others and Lin Langyao's later growth. Watching it makes my heart sour, like eating a big lemon. Wen and Lin are both strong. Wen is very stable and full of youthfulness, while Lin is very out-of-the-box, sharp-edged and youthful. Both of them have IQs and are not the brainless type. Personally, I think the first ten or twenty chapters are indeed a bit difficult to read. It doesn't mean that the writing is bad, but it is a bit boring. However, the subsequent articles are getting better and better, and they are very attractive. The foreshadowing is also revealed one by one in the later stages. The cause and effect cycle, the young couple is sweet in the end, I highly recommend everyone to read it.

Write their emotional bond well, nurturing, redemption, upbringing, love, and companionship. We have long been irreplaceable for each other, and have had an unforgettable relationship. It is just as it should be, and their relationship is as it should be. They cannot live without each other. But fate is like this. From cause to effect, their bond is doomed to be entangled in love and hate in the future. Watching master and disciple is to see this kind of bond [crazy] [crazy]

The author's writing is very good, and it's really beautiful. But doctor, why does the tumor on my chest keep jumping when I read the article? Oh, I picked it now. Hey, doctor, why is the bug on my wrist still moving? OK, let him chop it down. By the way, doctor, why am I always blushing and my heart is pounding? Is it a heart attack? Oh, it's red temperature, then it's okay. I don't think Alan Kaneki Ken saw my despair in the middle. I thought it was relaxing and warm after reading the first dozens of chapters, but why did I see the blue sea and blue sky realm automatically unlocked later? It's not me who's wrong, it's the world, but no matter how you say it, it's fine

(Contains spoilers) The master is gone, so the world of immortality is in a state of restlessness and resentment. However, there are also people who are afraid of those who are arrogant, such as the master who came back from the dead... I learned to read while hanging upside down, and rebuilt my cultivation. When I met the master when he was a child, he killed the master. More than 160 years have passed, and the world has changed. It is that person, but it seems that he is not. All in all, the article can be written

Isn't it because such a good book has such a low rating because it has just been opened? The role creation of the master and apprentice is also very successful. At first glance, it is clear that the author has a solid foundation and depth of thought in it. He is not writing about emotions for the sake of emotion, nor is he using routines for the sake of torture or sweetness. There is no common time-travel story in the world, which is what I think is great. (Stacking buildings, I don't mean to say that time-travel stories are bad) After all, it is actually easier to write about time-travel. A system and a task can create the protagonist's emotional sustenance, and a novel beginning can attract the reader's attention. I used to like reading this kind of article, but after reading too much, I can see the routine from the first two chapters. (There is no need to dislike time-travel novels. Every good book has the author and reader's heart in it💝).

A very good master-disciple story, the relationship is gradual, and the protagonist's growth and struggle are touching.

The character development is really good! It's been a long time since I've seen such a majestic master. The words he said were really refreshing. The disciple's personality is also very good. This is simply a fairy tale.

Connected from beginning to end, I wrote a story about a pair of masters and apprentices. I don't know where the love started, but it goes deeper and deeper. I like it very much, and all the foreshadowings are solved one by one. The ending is very good, the master and apprentice live an ordinary life. The two protagonists of this novel do not have a particularly unique relationship, only each other. It is also very romantic. The way to prevent the destruction of the world is to fall in love. The relationship between the master and the disciple goes beyond the superficial description.

Damn, this book makes me cry. The master and disciple have suffered so much. After reading the book for so many years, I think this book is really worthy of being published. I think this book is really much better than many popular novels. The 7:00 rating is not worthy of this book. I hope to see the author's next new book.

I watched it for him in one day and I felt so happy. Oh my god, I didn't expect this plot. It was so cool. It was so cool. Anyway, I can sum it up in one word. It was so cool. Especially the moment when Wan Jian returned to the clan, my God, I was so happy. Even though I was really reluctant to part with the sauce, I kept crying. But it's really beautiful. I don't know why the rating is so low. Come on, come on.

It can't work anymore, it can't work anymore, it's so cruel! Ah, I'm going to cry to death. The gentle and gentle strokes make me pee. I can't do it anymore. I really can't do it. Woooooooooooo. It's so painful. They are both little bitter gourds. I really can't do it. Woooooooo

What was he thinking at the moment he fell. Maybe he remembered that when he was a teenager, he was learning swordsmanship under a tree. The spring breeze warmed him. Wen Chaoxuan hugged him from behind and taught him step by step to stab the heaven and earth with a stunning and magnificent sword. Lin Langyao turned back to look at his master with joy, but Wen Chaoxuan only focused on looking at his sword seriously, without any distractions. At that time, he actually knew in his heart that the place where his apprentice's sword of the future would eventually land was his own chest. Falling suddenly.

Ahhhhh! I must give a serious comment. OK, after watching it, I was so excited that I spun, thundered, and danced to express my love. It's so beautiful that I couldn't pass up the opportunity to comment. I love this master-disciple pair so much. Can't miss a chapter

After reading it, I really felt a sense of loss, and there was a little sourness in the middle. Fortunately, the two people firmly chose each other, and there was a happy ending. Lin Langyao's bravery and Wen Chaoxuan's greatness are both very good people.