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Looking for Mecha Novels That Are Engaging to Read
I prefer mechas and the like. There has been a shortage of books recently. Do you have any recommendations for good books on mechas? It would be better if they are long-lasting.
I'm Tired of Books, so I'm Looking for Books That Really Make People's Eyes Shine.
Everyone can only recommend the top one in their mind, and don't recommend some that have falsely high ratings. I have read most of the famous books, and I want something new
Wow, Catch a Little Loli
Lolita heroine
Western Fantasy, with Empires, Elves, Dragons, Knights, and Magic
Is There a Protagonist with Long Silver-White Hair, Heterochromatic Eyes, Noble, Elegant, Lazy and Carefree Character?
It's better to be a little cold and indifferent without any desire or desire! Or a madman falling into the darkness of the endless abyss! Emotionally indifferent!
Gender Change (Male to Female). Show Off. Very Cool and Handsome. One Cannot Be Missing.
I want to see content similar to "Boys who dream of becoming magical girls will turn into witches". It needs to be changed directly from the first few chapters, and it needs to be 8.0 Or above.
Transformation Literature Has Declined. If You Don't Agree, Come and Argue (Don't Be the One Who Gets Bored Easily)
Two Heroines, I Feel a Bit Awkward Now Π_π
I want to read a book like "The True Daughter Suffers from Serious Dependence on This Cannon Fodder".
Are There Two Female Protagonists in Tomato? Beg!
When two surnames are united in marriage, a contract is made together, a good relationship will last forever, and the couple will have the same name.
Let's Order a Masterpiece with a Single Heroine. the Heroine Must Have More Roles, so It's a Double-Strength One.
I want to watch content similar to "The Fortune Teller in the Shadow".
With All Due Respect, I Can Count More Than 9.5 Transformations on One Hand.
I don't think any transformation story has a score above 9.5. I've never seen it.
Western Fantasy! Western Fantasy~western Fantasy! the Heroine Is Super Awesome!
I want to read a book like "After becoming a vampire cub, she was forced to carry a knife and go into battle". It doesn't matter if you have CP or not! Thank you everyone❤ (ɔˆз(ˆ⌣ˆc)
The Transformation Story Should Be at Least 9.0, Please.
Two Heroines! !
I want to read a book like "The True Daughter Suffers from Serious Dependence on This Cannon Fodder". I've been wanting to watch a double heroine drama lately. I'm looking for a campus novel. It's sweet (a little bit sadistic is fine) and the plot is not embarrassing. The writing is better. It's best not to travel through time.•ᴗ•Best
You Want to Be Barefoot, You Want to Be a Lolita, and Preferably Someone with Some Fighting Ability.
Have You Ever Transformed into a Lolita and Revealed Your Identity at the Beginning?
There is a shortage of books! ! ! !
Here's Some New Transformation Stories, I've Read Them All
Are there any new transformation stories? Have you read all the recommended books in Shuhuang?
I've Read All of Tomato's Transformation Stories, but I Don't Believe There Are Others I Haven't Read.
If you have the ability, do something (transform, loli, don't be systematic)
Marry the King! ! !
I want to watch content similar to "We've all transformed, so let's become female." Brothers, come and get married.
Are There Any Books About the Rebirth of Germany in World War II?
I remember reading one about the rebirth of the German war, but I can't find it now. Does anyone know where I can read it?
I Have Recently Fallen in Love with Transformation Writing, Please Recommend It to Everyone.
Two Heroines Hehe
Please Beg for a Charming Heroine
I want to watch content similar to "A woman dressed as a man and I was surrounded by the heroine". It's a cool novel with multiple heroines or two heroines. After reading the book where a man dressed as a woman and was surrounded by the heroine, I couldn't read anything else. I was completely exhausted and wanted to cry.


































































































To be honest, when I read Chapter 1, I felt a little confused for no reason, and I felt like I couldn't stand it anymore. But after reading Chapter 1, and the background of the story slowly unfolded, the plot gradually became better. The more I read, the better it gets. I finished reading it in one go. It's really interesting. The world view is well developed. There is plenty of writing direction at the end. It feels good. Next, I will feel the personality characteristics of each main character from my reading memory. Eleanor (Erin's sister): I feel a bit like a close sister. She has a very strong personality and very good fighting skills. She shows concern and distress for the protagonist when she is injured, but also has a funny way of teasing the protagonist. Currently, the concern can only be reflected in the sister and the protagonist, but the teasing is only towards the protagonist. Victoria (Cecilia's sister): The first living treasure that appears in the article. The plots in which she appears are usually very funny, which can be seen from her daily letters. Cecilia: Judging from the plot in the article, she should be a relatively quiet girl. She should not be cold or unsociable. She often accompanies her sister to find the protagonist, and she is very protective of others. Erin: The second living treasure can be seen from taking the protagonist to go shopping. Unlike Victoria, she prefers mechas and is more interested in the war front. She may have the strength and persistence of her sister. She is currently in college, and the plot has not yet unfolded. Pavela (protagonist): There are two states: daily and human-machine. In daily life, I feel that my personality is quite cute [laughs], I do things cleanly, and I live by any means necessary in the context of war, but my status in life and after death is free and easy, and I look down on life and death. Faced with Eleanor's teasing in a strange environment, he only dares to tease but not catch her. When attending a party, I endured being played with like a rag doll by many girls [laughs] In the human-machine state, if a friend is injured or you are attacked, you will enter a combat state. The anger when your friend is injured will be infinitely amplified. If you fight for a long time, you will lose part of your sanity. If the protagonist cannot hold on, he will enter an AI managed state. This may be related to the realm of the protagonist. This is my impression of the main characters. Any additions are welcome, and any corrections are welcome. Don't raise books, just let me raise them alone. If you raise too many people, you will die [laughs]
I didn't want to stay up all night, so I had to work all night. It's like a god. I really like the author's portrayal of characters, which are real but not false, like living people. Each character has its own unique image, description of inner impulses, emotional explosiveness, clear contradictions and oppositions, and vivid and delicate writing. The subject matter is very novel, and the story development also has hidden revelations. The foreshadowing is deep and shallow, which can arouse thinking about the subsequent plot. The narrative of events can also be distinguished. There are no overly emphasized clues. The connection is very smooth and does not create a sense of fragmentation. Basically, every sentence serves the entire book. There is currently no serious water injection and the logic is self-consistent. The following is a personal epilepsy: Xiaopa's tension, vitality, and pure humanity in order to survive but was forced to die due to reality. This image has come alive in my mind. I haven't seen such a vivid and pure person in a long time [crying] As you all know, I'm just for rating, so leave me alone.
The best of the best, the first chapter looks very messy, but if you continue to read the second chapter, it is really amazing, there are no routines, the environment is described very cleverly, the pace is not draggy at all, it is a masterpiece, highly recommended. (Minor spoilers below) Let's talk about three points that I particularly like. One, first of all, the depiction of the battlefield is very profound. There are no twists and turns on the battlefield. It is just a group of people living for their own obsessions, and all the principles of the battlefield are beautifully depicted. Second, the fighting scenes are very powerful. Each move changes rapidly, and at the same time, the success or failure of the character's fighting is clearly described, which is very enjoyable to watch. Third, the characters are described just right. Everyone's hobbies, preferences, personalities, and behaviors are not popular, and there will be no common clones. Although new characters continue to appear in Chapter 20, because the characters are described very cleverly, you will not feel dizzy when there are too many people, nor will you get bored easily because of too many descriptions. This is the best among gods. (Finally, I want to make a digression. Don't support the book. At least read ten chapters. I'm really afraid that everyone will die because of this book.)
A very top-notch work, with the appearance of a god, it is a true work of art. The [Mecha + Sequence] alone is enough to attract people. According to this momentum, the score will be at least 9.7 Or above. The plot is online, there is suspense, and the writing is excellent. It has the feel of a classic Western fantasy epic. It can be seen that the author wants to depict a magnificent epic world, but in fact [hundred] limits this book. If it were not for this circle, it would be read by millions. I look forward to the author's subsequent ideas. [Learned]
To be honest, I don't like to read Bianbai and Sequence novels, but the characterization here does not affect my perception. To be honest, this is the truly good Bianbai and Sequence novels. The defenses I watched before gave me PTSD. Very well written😋, really very good👍🏻. The plot after being adopted cannot continue the beautiful and strong characters in the early stage. A lot of words are used in the description of daily life, which is not interesting. The reveal of the power system is a bit abrupt. In the blink of an eye, the protagonist changed from a warrior who struggled to survive on the battlefield but was clear and independent to a state of being completely passive in the face of unknown forces without any understanding (my feeling). The charm of his original behavior of being able to handle the harsh environment was gone, and instead he entered the power system link that the author wanted to talk about, which made me confused. But I've already read Tomato, and it's unrealistic for me to have such high demands. 4⭐️, The first 30 chapters are worth reading. PS: If it were me, I would probably change the post-adoption plot to the protagonist being admitted to the military academy as a noble lady who has never been on the battlefield, and then she would be better off performing than her classmates. At the same time, I think the common people and the nobles should not be so flat, and there should not be such prominent conflicts between them. PS: After reading it carefully again, the emotional lines and descriptions are good, and the development of the plot is beyond my usual thinking. New. So it's still 5⭐️. PS again: it's still too long at the end, it's really high and low. The more I write, the more uncomfortable I feel, 3⭐️.
So red😋 Updated twice a day, each chapter is 2,000~3,000 words in length. It is updated more stably around 7 a. M., And there is no sign of explosive updates. The white-haired heroine has a hundred transformations (introduction), has extraordinary elements and is organized into a system. She has a system but is suppressed by the protagonist (lung mist system). Her writing is smooth and her skills can be seen. Regarding combat power, the heroine is very strong, but difficult to control. She can absorb the waste of dead souls in the body (my understanding). She has high growth potential and her combat power is not compromised (the criteria for not being compromised are: reasonable, logical, and not causing discomfort) Regarding the CP line, it seems that it is probably the protagonist's adopted sister (what is this? Does it have a scientific name?), No plot twists, no self-righteousness, no disgusting remarks, Pa 0 Ai 1 (I'm serious) Not many comments for fear of affecting reading Regarding the characters, they look like two people before and after adoption. Of course, this is not a criticism. The plot design is like this. In the front, I looked at the humor of hell, the wandering ghosts on the battlefield, and the indifference of life and death (?). The feeling of inhumanity is slightly heavier (my understanding, I like it very much😋). I am cruel to others and cruel to myself. Ye is ruthless, a noble daughter after adoption, a cute kitten, a succubus physique, quiet and dignified (in human words, it is humane), but flowers have sharp thorns (dddd), and she immediately goes crazy after losing control (like the contrast); I hope that later readers will not see the character change too quickly and leave. Regarding the author, you can see that there are some book reviews that are difficult to review. I wanted to eat and get a hundred, but because the author wrote about changing marriage, he ran away without reading the book. He was worried that there was something private about changing marriage (the original review could not be found). I have read 52 chapters so far, and I have not found such a situation. Don't worry. To sum up, Hao Chi loves Chi, long live Duo Geng (if there is one) Come on, author, recommendation notification
It's good-looking, really good-looking, whether it's lily stickers or war descriptions, it's very strong, but This world view is excellent, and the sequence system is also very good, but it is very, very suitable for putting knives, and there is currently no solution. I feel so good about eating sugar. Really, so the author, promise me, HE, okay? Later on, I know that a lot of psychological descriptions and detailed descriptions are interesting, but three chapters of a random fish struggling before death are really not interesting. The progress of the main plot is as creepy as a novel. Follow up again I still like this novel very much, but the waste of a lot of pen and ink in some irrelevant places really affects the viewing experience. I saved dozens of chapters this time and still can't finish this plot, and judging from the trend, I will have to finish at least five or six more chapters. Again, um, there's so much nonsense like AI
It's super good-looking, the characters are well created, there are no surprises, and there is no vulgar plot. The character of the protagonist has not collapsed. She has not become the same as the aristocratic lady of the same age because she was adopted. The priorities are clear. I mean the character has not collapsed. The main plot is kept on the battle and related advancement plot. It is very interesting to watch.
This book is really good, especially when it describes how Lu Bu fights Sun Wukong for hundreds of rounds for Diao Chan, but Xue Baochai is really too strong. If it weren't for Nuo Shou's outer ring + Noxian guillotine, this wave of m4s would have died if they hit A1 and strafed. Apart from that, I prefer Zhuge Liang's battle with flowers. A sentence said by 108 Monkeys in Guoshan, "Young man, don't show off your pride in front of your brother Liang" shows Zhuge Liang's indignation at the monkey beating him to death with three sticks. All in all, this book has an interesting plot, a clear system, many foreshadowing fighting scenes that make you feel like you are actually there, and the character description is very good! The writing of this book is excellent, the plot is touching, the ending is unexpected, the content is resonant and thought-provoking, the plot is interesting, the characters are vivid, the system is clear, there are many foreshadowings, the fighting scenes are like immersive, the author's depiction of people's hearts is meticulous, especially when describing Calabash 9Q to save Transformers Q, Sun Wukong's inner excitement and fear are vividly expressed. I am the only one who thinks Wu Song is right to kill Qiao Feng Q? If Jia Baoyu hadn't stopped Zhang Wuji from asking, how could Yang Guo's hand be chopped off by Guan Yu? Zhuge Liang will not go up Si Guo Cliff to fight a hot battle with Linghu Chong Q, etc. All in all, the plot of this book is interesting. Guguquagga[please update]
One sentence review: I think this book can be on the top list. I can get the laughs, tears, and knives. Read it carefully and you will find that this is a person's road to salvation. It is also a person's path to growth, It is a person who has fallen into the abyss and walks towards the light. It is a person struggling in the mud, surviving in despair, and rebuilding the road of faith on the ruins. From the initial confusion to the firm persistence; From walking alone, to suddenly looking back, there are thousands of lights behind me. Those seemingly inadvertent foreshadowings are all gifts already written by fate. All the wanderings eventually turned into stars that illuminated the way forward. This is an excellent piece of writing, An extremely excellent piece of writing.
The writing is very good, except that the first chapter may be a bit confusing. It is unclear about the situation and the identity of the protagonist. "I almost thought that the protagonist is a kind of beast-like man." It becomes clear from the second chapter, and there are no clichés.
This book is really good, especially when it describes Lu Bu's hundreds of rounds of battle with Sun Wukong for Dong Zhuo, but Xue Baochai is really too strong, if it weren't for Nuo Shou, an outside ring + Noxus
It looks good, but you can definitely feel the traces of AI polishing, but you can't deny that this is a good work, and the plot is well connected. Although there are flaws, as the saying goes, no one is perfect. In the end, I am most dissatisfied with it! There are too few updates. It would be better to lock the author in a small dark room and punish him severely so that he will not be able to sleep until he writes a hundred and eighty articles in a day! [Angry][angry]
It's beautiful. I haven't seen such a well-written book in a long time. In the past six years, there are only a handful of books that can give me such feelings. It's very worth reading. The visuals are super strong, like my favorite movie, with rich details and enough information; the world view is clear and there is a lot of white space; the character creation is okay, although it lacks some depth, is not subtle enough in some places, and has certain flaws in its inner performance, but I can only find fault with it. In a gold-mining environment like Tomato Novels, this is a rare masterpiece. The future is promising. Worth a long review. But the subject matter is relatively cold in Tomato, so I'm more worried about the heat.
Looking at it so far, there is nothing wrong with it. The plot is really attractive to me and makes me want to watch it in one breath. The characters are well portrayed, but does the protagonist's psychological defense loosen a little too quickly? It would be better to stay together for a longer time, or to do some foreshadowing. It's also rare that the protagonist's iron will can defeat the system. I've read that few novels have such an awesome will. They are basically immune to pain, but the sense of presence behind them is not strong. The instincts developed on the battlefield are more attractive to me. The cunning and other characters of the protagonist have been downplayed. The protagonist's spirit has been destroyed for so long, but he still behaves so normal. I also admire it. In summary, continue to read more. It's good to read if you like it. The style has changed again, it's been a long time since I watched it on Tomato so much, nb
Are there traces of AI in the dialogue? This conversational style is a little too familiar to me. Start by "receiving the text" then write something like "chew this sentence in your mouth" and finally write the character's reaction. Including some places: "You said... You said it." (Eyes burning), "Do you know what I was thinking at that time? I was thinking...", "You said... But..." Well, the plot and everything are great, but I'm more sensitive to this AI style. I can't say I hate it, I just want to "regenerate" [Explore]
It is truly one of the best mecha or war-themed novels I have ever read. At first, I thought the author's writing habits were polished with AI, but the more I read, the more I realized that it was such a delicate writing technique and understanding of the characters. The shaping of character traits is really something that cannot be learned by AI in a lifetime. In other words, even if this work is really polished by AI, I will admit it - if he can train AI so well, then the author himself must be one of the best writers. All in all, this excellent work is worth reading.
Shennong was so greedy that the author——! Go to the little black room to update! The plot has ups and downs but is reasonable The characters are flesh-and-blood and have distinct personalities It can be so refreshing in the dark and bright that it can fly up Various atmospheres, environments, psychology and character backgrounds are depicted with sophisticated and profound Evaluation: Fairy——Grass——! Update soon!
Brief description: Beautiful, a divine book! First of all, the most praiseworthy thing is the author's writing style. The author's writing style is very mature and has its own characteristics. Secondly, the writing style is a black humorous style. The setting at the beginning of the story takes place in a world in the steam age, and the protagonist is a disciplinary soldier of one of the countries at war between the two armies. The protagonist is a girl of fourteen or fifteen years old. She was relatively cold in the early stage, but she got a little better in the later stage. It roughly tells the story of a soldier who escaped from the front line and went to a hostile empire to transform into the daughter of a nobleman (of course, the school plot that follows is also a must-have part). It is very interesting and can be regarded as one of the more interesting stories in this genre. The protagonist may be a little bit crazy (?), But most of the time he is still normal and cute (although he has a lot of fighting skills and military common sense that climbed out of a blood cave) I would like to add that the characters in this book are pretty good, and the author's writing style is online.
Super good article, medieval + wasteland, mecha + girl, or Lily. A niche within a niche, although Baihe has not written at all at the moment, I just like to read this kind of crazy articles. The hard work and so on are so interesting, and there are many foreshadowings. Jie Jie Jie. Although I don't seem to have given negative reviews to books. I will just ignore the books that have negative reviews and will not give negative reviews, but Most of the books I give positive reviews are ones that I think are really good. They are really good. Abba, Abba, Abba. The author updated them at seven o'clock. I woke up at seven o'clock as well. It's so weird to read them when I get up... Hahahahaha. I'm already talking nonsense just to make up the word count. Don't do it. Anyway, as long as it's really good, why should I read book reviews? If I didn't read enough, I wouldn't review it. . .
The author's writing style is very good, and it is considered top-notch writing style in Tomato. It is beautiful but not verbose and not literate. The emotional description is also very delicate, the psychological changes of the two people are very well described, and the relationship is extremely delicious. The progress is still relatively fast. At the same time, the world view has also been spread out, and the spread is relatively complete. At present, I don't see the characteristics of infinite flow, it is a slowly unfolding fixed world type. Similarly, I haven't seen such a natural world view in Tomato. In summary, I wouldn't say it's perfect, but it's definitely an excellent work worth watching. The only problem is that if you look at the title, you should note that this book is not a war record, but more about supernatural powers. By the way, I would like to recommend to you a somewhat similar Niqing, ts The Rise of Miss Health Soldier. If you like that one, there is a high probability that you will also like this one, and vice versa.
Overall, the book is good, and it is well divided into sections. From the detailed descriptions of many places, such as the environment, action scenes, etc., It can be seen that the author has a certain writing skills, but it is not as exaggerated as some reviews, saying that Tomato has the best writing skills. For those who are bragging, I can only say that you eat too much sometimes, and when you eat something good, you think it is top-notch food. In terms of essay pen alone, this book can only be ranked in the t1 category, which is still far behind the t0 category. However, it is still undeniable that this is indeed a good book, so I give it five stars.
I was attracted by the name of this book at first, and I thought it was just some mindless cool article like the others. But after reading it for so long, I realized that it was actually different from what I thought. The author's writing style is extremely beautiful, not as warm and bright as the sun, nor as cold and cold as the wind and snow. It is like a cup of hot tea. The first thing you may experience when you take it into your mouth is a little bitterness, but then you will feel the warmth of the tea itself, the fragrance of the tea, and the aftertaste and sweetness after savoring the original taste. The wording in the article makes me feel very comfortable when reading it. It does not blindly use gorgeous and exaggerated words, but is concise and appropriate, not obtrusive or exaggerated, as if those words were born there. The sun should be high in the sky during the day, and the moon should be shining brightly at night. After reading the whole book, I was surprised. This book is not like an online article, but more like a memoir of a character after a certain world war, like a traditional literary work mistaken for a tomato novel. If I were to point out any shortcomings, I would say it is the title of the book. There is a slight sense of separation between the title and the text, as if a naturally beautiful lady next to her dressed herself up to be ordinary in order to blend in with the surrounding environment. However, it cannot be regarded as a shortcoming. After all, only those who calm down and read this book carefully will discover its excellence. Steel and Roses is a good name
The writing is close to perfect. It can be seen that the author's writing style has an upper limit, but after all, it is impossible to polish all the online serializations perfectly, so I will not give full marks. Full marks for character design. I won't accept refutation, I just like it, I really love Xiaopa to death. Collapsed yet transparent, alienated yet tender, and also has a kind of romantic black humor. I'm not used to evaluating the plot alone. I don't care about the plot alone, I only care about how well the characters are written. The plot serves the characters, and the plot and characters cannot be separated. I hate plots that are subtle and out of character. There are basically no points deducted for the plot of this book, and that's enough. There may be some "flaws" in the opening plot. From a rational point of view as a web novel, the design of the opening part where the two heroines first meet is misguided. Some people may feel a little discouraged. But human reason will not sink into the battlefield. Human souls will always be diverse. This is the story of two "heresies". Human beings will always be irrational.
A good sex article, [hundred] although it can attract this circle, it also makes readers who like to read less read (mainly I still like singles). I was attracted by Pavel's personality charm at first, and then the background and battle. It can be said to be a rare good book, but it is one thing that the update is too slow. Try to sit down for 2~3 updates, and try to let more people see it. Let Xiaopa work hard to survive.
The quality is so high. The description of the pain is very detailed. The portrayal of Xiao Pa is also very good. I like this kind of indifferent and cute character the most. There is also the bond between Xiao Pa and Eleanor. I was really excited when Eleanor rushed towards Xiao Pa🥹🥹🥹The world official and setting described later are also very exciting! It's a particularly novel setting that I won't spoil. It's really worth watching!
Under the hard shell of the universe lies the unique delicacy and tenderness of women Reading this mecha novel gives you a strange experience - as if through a prism, the cold steel and the burning blood are refracted to reveal the unique splendid spectrum of women. The author's writing style is extremely delicate. The mecha is no longer a cold war machine. The rotation of every joint and the texture of every piece of armor are given a life-like texture. Those battle scenes, under a strict logical framework, flow with the rhythm of poetry. You can clearly feel the gravity distortion of the mecha when it turns in space, and you can also capture the subtle trembling of the pilot's fingertips in the roar of the engine. What is even more rare is the rigor of language. Every term and every technical description can withstand scrutiny without making people feel boring. In such a hard-core science fiction world, the author skillfully weaves in subtle inner dramas about responsibility, faith, protection and growth. Those seemingly casual details, such as a touch of mist on the driver's mask and an inconspicuous wear and tear on the console, have become the most accurate footnotes of emotion. When the grand cosmic war is intertwined with the detailed psychological portrayal, and when soft flowers bloom in the torrent of steel, you will find that even under the hardest shell, there is a heart that knows how to cry and smile. This is what real mecha text should look like.
I've struck gold, there are definitely some flaws, but I don't see any flaws in the logic and plot. The main characters are described very delicately, with many small details. It's a bit cool, but it's not a cool story where the protagonist goes around pretending to be cool. The protagonist has his own ideas and knows what he is doing and what he should do. This is also my favorite point. The protagonist's boldness is not shown by going wherever she kills, nor by being arbitrarily tyrannical towards the outside world. Her warmth is not revealed by sticking with girls. Many books mix them up in order to show the protagonist being cruel to the outside and gentle to the inside, and to appear "chicken and unrestrained", and it is very clichéd, but this book does not. For example, when writing about the protagonist who has no desire to live (where he almost died at the border), the author did not bluntly write about the subjective thoughts of the protagonist such as "wanting to die, despair, and indifference", but wrote about the protagonist's indifference to the mecha when Eleanor (who wasn't there at the time) looked back. The summary is that it is not boring or cliche, and it is just right in terms of plot processing and character description. It has the logic that a novel should have and is also very realistic.
The subject matter of this book is novel. The hellish beginning of the punishment camp attracts readers' interest in reading. The combination of mecha and girls makes people want to stop. The protagonist Pavella leaves us with a unique impression. If this book persists, it will eventually achieve something, so I stay tuned to see how the author will submit a satisfactory answer to us [Chigua] In general, the author has the appearance of a great emperor and has unlimited potential [Chigua] The author should know that a mature author should know that five or six hundred chapters of a novel is just the starting point [dog] means can it be longer [crying]
8 Points and above, I have read countless books, please believe me, I am a super Shen Nong, the kind who brings Yuneng explosive energy to strengthen the whole hardware, which is quite good. The current overall score is 8/10 The first is character creation The creation of the protagonist Pa, in the first chapter, he plays Kira Yoshikage and the protagonist sets fire. The first impression is that he is a veteran with rich battlefield experience and a cold action style. However, because of Kira Yoshikage, it also shows that the protagonist's personality is not cold, which reflects the first level of contrast. , At the same time, the armor was removed later, and the sadistic master + image description was the first reversal of character and image. At the same time, the protagonist was almost taken away, and it also reflected the protagonist's toughness and character, physical fragility + character strength, and the arc of the character matched the plot behind it, and it worked very well. Then there are the supporting roles. Supporting roles are currently labeled, but there is no big problem with this label. The one who plays treasures + writes posts (brainless), and the one who saves the situation (unhappy) does not have much writing, in other words, does not have much shaping, has no merit, and is just a plot tool. Finally, there is the second heroine. Except for the first 30 chapters, the second heroine is actually very marginalized later on. Although she basically appears all the time, to be honest, it has no effect. Moreover, the emotional line is actually not that good now, and the bond is not that deep. You can not rush to write about the relationship between the two heroines. We can advance the plot more and let the second heroine appear more in the core plot (referring to fighting together with the heroine). The emotional line is more gradual. Overall, it is in vain. It is a little more important than the supporting role, but only a little. Then the world view, a little bit of the Lord of Mystery, the combat power view (level setting) is slow, but it has no impact, because with this mecha setting, the level setting will not make people feel boring or cumbersome when the level setting is slowly introduced, and the appearance of each organization is also very rhythmic, which will not make people feel so tired. The current world view is very good, and it all follows the plot. Then there is the plot. The experience of the plot is very different from person to person. What I say does not represent other people. How should I put it? It's confusing enough. The distribution of leisure and combat is reasonable and unreasonable. This is mainly because the author will have a scene after each fight where the heroine is injured and the second heroine. Although in retrospect, you will find that the heroine has never been stable. In the plot, I also complained that I have never left the ward since going to school. This is indeed a bit difficult, but because of what I just mentioned after the battle. It's a literary drama, so there are obviously many battle scenes, but they are not so tiring to watch. Moreover, the reason for the current battles is actually to expand the world view. For example, the first one is for the protagonist to go to the empire, the second one is for the protagonist to go to school, etc. The plot advancement is a bit too dependent on fighting. Of course, it is the same reason. Because there are literary dramas, this problem is not that serious... Overall, the plot is also very good, but it lacks some big crises, so just keep it up. Then there's the writing aspect. Let's not talk about rhetoric and the like. There are some places where it's a little off-kilter. The writing style of the whole book is very smooth. The descriptions of the environment and scenes that appear so far also match the plot very well. However, I don't really know much about writing. I can only talk about the look and feel. The writing is good. So to sum up, the performance of the first 300,000 words is absolutely no problem in scoring 8 points on the 10-point Tomato scale, or 9 points. It is no exaggeration. The recent Tomato 100 score should be the best one. I actually wrote such a long list of frog fun, and probably no one will read it. The white-haired lolita is so cute😋The abused lolita is so cute, 🥰The crying one is so cute🥰The white-haired lolita is so cute when she is made shy🥰Who can resist a white-haired lolita who looks strong but is actually shy and emotionally vulnerable🥰 I just like cute beautiful girls, meow😭Don't call me meow😭