Transmigrating to Another World as a Maid Captain Who Can Stop Time

It is a very good Western fantasy novel, and the internal fighting between families is also very well written. The only point that may be criticized is that in the early stage, I forgave a person who wanted to assassinate me for money. I thought the protagonist was the Virgin. How should I put it? I personally feel that as a 21st century young man who has just traveled through time, this is normal. Moreover, the fate of the maid was also left open, and she might have been directly hunted. The whole novel is still very good, but it is a bit too short at the moment. The story is not complete yet, so I will give it four stars first.

First of all, I like the rare main content of Eastern literature. Secondly, it is not the old-fashioned kind of traveling to Gensokyo and then having a leisurely harem. I like it even more. The author's writing style is not bad. Although the content is a bit complicated, it is still logical.

Everyone just does it online. In real life, I would definitely use it to sleep. Others sleep for 8 hours, but I sometimes sleep for 16 hours.

It's really beautiful. Men see menstruation and women see psychosis. This is the nemesis of depression. It is a disease that must be treated, just like the five-guarantee household in the village misses and loves the widow. It is so good that tears flow from the mouth and fill the Pacific Ocean. It made me realize why life sleeps and why birds fly into the sky. When I took off from the balcony on the 20th floor, it made me feel like a fish in the deep sea, finding the most urgently needed toilet.

Let me respond to the most controversial issue in chapters 15 and 16, which is the issue of the protagonist, the Virgin. Let me first talk about why I wrote these two chapters. What is the core purpose? 1. The purpose of revealing the current status of the adventure group at the bottom of the world is to pave the way for later content, and this status will be mentioned later. 2. Maid No. 5 I'm going to stay behind as an introduction. 3. It implies that the Cresan Adventure Group is not all aboveboard adventurers. Is there anything wrong with what the protagonist is doing here? There must be something wrong! I really didn't think much about this issue when I was writing it, because the core of what I wrote was for the above three points. This plot has already been written. If it is changed, it will definitely destroy the subsequent development. I can make small changes, such as reducing the emotional color, but the general plot will not change. Therefore, if you leave a negative review, I will not delete your review. If you have any mistakes, please feel free to point them out. If you feel uncomfortable, feel free to say so. Why can't the protagonist quickly improve his strength between time stops? I decided to advance the theory of lifespan originally planned at chapter 50 to chapter 16. The protagonist's lifespan is twice that of a normal person, but during the time pause, the protagonist's time will not stop. This is equivalent to saying that if she stayed in the time-stop world for one year, her lifespan would also be reduced by one year. Moreover, the magic in the time-stop world is not fluid. Learning magic requires constantly changing locations, which is more time-consuming. And another thing is that the protagonist has been training himself, and the speed of progress is already incomprehensible to ordinary people in this world. You cannot completely stop time during training. You need to restore time when throwing a throwing knife, otherwise it will be suspended in mid-air.

I would like to give you a suggestion, rewrite some Sweet Lily novels every day, and stop making all these fancy conspiracies. Regardless of force or conspiracy, Shi Stop is both powerful and sinister. Unless you add more restrictions, it is really poisonous for a person who plays with time to be played by others. Shi Stop is basically a high-end dimensionality reduction attack in any novel [Chigua]

It's pretty good. I originally came here for Sakuya, but actually the writing and plot are pretty good. The additions are a bit short and not enough to read. I hope the author will make more updates and don't want them to be unfinished or eunuchs [Add one to the bookshelf]

There is no doubt that the protagonist has a growth process First, let's analyze some people who are mindless and like to give bad comments. The person the protagonist let go for the first time was a foreshadowing. He was recycled later, and this incident promoted the protagonist's growth. The writing style is normal and the concept is quite novel. It can be read as a normal light novel.

The earlier part of the title succession was really boring (except for iGTV [smile]). After the plot of the team adventure, the perception improved a lot. Speaking of which, the protagonist's hard-working and reliable maid character really struck a chord with me (I don't know much about Dongfang, so I don't know) Is this the case for Sakuya Izayoi in the original drama?) It seems that some people can't stand the fact that the main character is a maid despite being powerful. I think this setting is quite good. 🤔 I can't tell what's cool about it, but it just makes me happy. Could it be that I'm a m (bushi) Originally I only wanted to give it four stars, but overall I feel that the potential is endless, so I offer it five stars. The author has done a good job, and the little gift is great 👍

I love watching it. So far I don't think it has any major flaws, but I suggest the heroine become a vampire (bushi).