Li You******

Not bad... Clear thinking

Well written, very good, come on, come on

The character of the protagonist is a casual cultivator with average qualifications but focusing on Fu Dao. The writing style is very good and the details of the characterization are the highlight. I hope to maintain...

It's well written, the whole rhythm is controlled without being impatient, and the writing style is also good.

Tomato hasn't seen the protagonist of the original work for a long time. He didn't travel through time, didn't suppress his cultivation, didn't suppress it, and had the small climax that he should have. It's good👍 In the early stage, Li Youran's character design was strengthened, and the core was centered around "the calmness and tenacity of a low-level casual cultivator + the delicate focus of the Five Spirit Root Talisman Master + the gentle obsession of inheriting his parents' last wishes." The three core characteristics are implemented from the four dimensions of behavioral details, emotional expression, daily habits, and external interaction, so that the characters have memory points, a sense of hierarchy, and avoid flatness. The following are the specific methods that can be implemented, which fit "Li Youran's Cultivation Daily". Once the layout is completed, there will be a small climax of the plot. Thank you for your support [Blowing Kiss][Blowing Kiss][Blowing Kiss]