Protagonist: Guardian of the Light
[Human male protagonist + multiple female protagonists + adventure plus warm daily life + loving interaction]
[There will be linkages with other worlds in the future, and there will be private designs, but the characters will definitely not be OOC]
The fourth-dimensional monster Bruton transports the lonely human being to My Little Pony. The lonely heart will eventually be filled with friendship, but this also means that the spatial isolation of the My Little Pony world will be broken, and the darkness from other worlds will appear.
Reader comments
[Laughing] Give yourself a five-star rating
Let's re-evaluate the books I wrote. I had a lot of inspiration and creativity at the beginning. I wanted to write a novel as soon as my brain got hot. But once the momentum passed, I didn't know how to continue writing. Looking back at what I wrote, I can only say that it was too bad. I didn't know what I was writing. There was no main line or theme at all. I just couldn't think of anything to write. But I really don't want to give up on my first book. I want to write it well and make some achievements. The most important thing is to write this story well and make it comfortable for both Olympic fans and horse racing fans. So dear readers, please don't be merciful if you see something that makes you unhappy. You can accept whatever you want to scold me.
Well, I saw someone in the comments saying that the plot progresses too fast. I can give some specific information here. The protagonist is very charming, right? It can be said to be a succubus. Although some parts are good, the plot is too pleasant and it is boring. Add some schedule, and as for the main plot, don't push it too happily, and the protagonist's participation feels like it is passed by in one stroke. There is a sense of participation, but not too much.
Overall it's pretty good, highly recommended. There should be more and more people who keep watching. It's true that not many people read pony fanfics, so it takes passion to keep writing them. Come on [send heart]
Seeing this Bruton, things are not simple anymore.
[Laughing] Give yourself a five-star rating Let's re-evaluate the books I wrote. I had a lot of inspiration and creativity at the beginning. I wanted to write a novel as soon as my brain got hot. But once the momentum passed, I didn't know how to continue writing. Looking back at what I wrote, I can only say that it was too bad. I didn't know what I was writing. There was no main line or theme at all. I just couldn't think of anything to write. But I really don't want to give up on my first book. I want to write it well and make some achievements. The most important thing is to write this story well and make it comfortable for both Olympic fans and horse racing fans. So dear readers, please don't be merciful if you see something that makes you unhappy. You can accept whatever you want to scold me.
Well, I saw someone in the comments saying that the plot progresses too fast. I can give some specific information here. The protagonist is very charming, right? It can be said to be a succubus. Although some parts are good, the plot is too pleasant and it is boring. Add some schedule, and as for the main plot, don't push it too happily, and the protagonist's participation feels like it is passed by in one stroke. There is a sense of participation, but not too much.
Overall it's pretty good, highly recommended. There should be more and more people who keep watching. It's true that not many people read pony fanfics, so it takes passion to keep writing them. Come on [send heart]
Seeing this Bruton, things are not simple anymore.