High abuse/double male protagonist/dog blood/slow heat/first person
The following is an introduction to text slice camouflage
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"I'm sorry... I'm sorry." I heard myself say, my voice was surprisingly calm, "I shouldn't be jealous, I will be a good boyfriend, and I won't--"
"Boyfriend?" He sneered, "Su Yan, are you worthy?"
Is it worthy?
These two words are like two knives, accurately piercing the last bit of my self-esteem.
The carpet was soft but my knees hurt terribly.
Turns out I was on my knees... Without even realizing it.
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Until that day, I smelled the same perfume as the man in the restaurant on the suit jacket he took off.
At that moment, as I stroked the fresh bruises on my arms, I seemed to realize the absurdity of it all.
I am like a devout believer worshiping a statue of a god that has never appeared.
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"So... Are you still missing someone?" I raised my eyes and forced myself to look directly at him, "How about you support me...? I'm very obedient, even more obedient than before. Anything is fine."
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Tips: 1. If you feel bad and want to quit, you can also scold the author for a few words before leaving. The author will think about how to correct it, so be smart;
2. We are writing about abuse, so the character behavior should not be promoted by the author. If you scolded Shen Xing, you can't scold me, haha QAQ;
3. The author himself does not have any psychological problems or special hobbies. He used to write sweet articles. Everything was caused by the final week. I love everyone [love].
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Reader comments
It's a very sad novel... Maybe it's because I haven't read it before... The overall atmosphere is really well created, it's a very depressing atmosphere... It's easy to be a substitute and panic with Su Yan. After realizing that you are not Su Yan, you feel pity for Su Yan. Poor Su Yan... At first, he thought that when he met Shen Xing, someone finally cared about him... Later, he was abandoned mercilessly by Hao, and was treated as an object. He comforted himself that at least it was a home. Then he finally had a small life that he could live with, although it was not a good life... And because the child had to go back to Shen Xing (old_body), he had to despise himself (qu_physical and mental). It is completely unimaginable what the author went through in the final week to make Su Yan's self-esteem fall into the dust (by _ Even if there is a change in Shen Xing later, I guess the author may let Shen Xing get away with it, but as a reader, I can't accept it... He has difficulties, he has changed, and then he is a good man and a good husband. What about Su Yan? After all, Su Yan. A small part of the suffering is caused by biology, and the other part is caused by Shen Xing. ..... This is all ૮₍ɵ̷ɵ̷̥̥᷅₎ა, I can't say more ૮₍ɵ̷ɵ̷̥̥᷅₎ა
At first she thought he was a substitute, but from the moment Shen Xing nodded after Chenchen was born, she felt that he loved Su Yan, a person who couldn't explain it clearly, a person who didn't dare to believe that he would be loved.
Did Shen Xing secretly call Xiao Yan many nights when Su Yan was asleep?
Starting from the time he shouted out and that photo, they will be fine in the future, right?
The first time I read a first-person book, I was amazed. The author is really good at writing. I will continue to learn!
It's a very sad novel... Maybe it's because I haven't read it before... The overall atmosphere is really well created, it's a very depressing atmosphere... It's easy to be a substitute and panic with Su Yan. After realizing that you are not Su Yan, you feel pity for Su Yan. Poor Su Yan... At first, he thought that when he met Shen Xing, someone finally cared about him... Later, he was abandoned mercilessly by Hao, and was treated as an object. He comforted himself that at least it was a home. Then he finally had a small life that he could live with, although it was not a good life... And because the child had to go back to Shen Xing (old_body), he had to despise himself (qu_physical and mental). It is completely unimaginable what the author went through in the final week to make Su Yan's self-esteem fall into the dust (by _ Even if there is a change in Shen Xing later, I guess the author may let Shen Xing get away with it, but as a reader, I can't accept it... He has difficulties, he has changed, and then he is a good man and a good husband. What about Su Yan? After all, Su Yan. A small part of the suffering is caused by biology, and the other part is caused by Shen Xing. ..... This is all ૮₍ɵ̷ɵ̷̥̥᷅₎ა, I can't say more ૮₍ɵ̷ɵ̷̥̥᷅₎ა
At first she thought he was a substitute, but from the moment Shen Xing nodded after Chenchen was born, she felt that he loved Su Yan, a person who couldn't explain it clearly, a person who didn't dare to believe that he would be loved. Did Shen Xing secretly call Xiao Yan many nights when Su Yan was asleep? Starting from the time he shouted out and that photo, they will be fine in the future, right?
The first time I read a first-person book, I was amazed. The author is really good at writing. I will continue to learn!