Genshin Impact: Daily Life of a Visitor from Another World

Chapter 15, this is the best retelling I have ever seen. There is no exaggerated description, and there is no protagonist who quickly becomes fond of you. It is very plain, very everyday, and very - healing. What can one meeting change? It will not directly open another path for you, it cannot make you rich, it cannot have many fans, love has nothing to do with the world, it only allows the protagonist to get a trace of comfort and a trace of expectation, which is enough for her to pick herself up.

I just read this at noon today. I finished reading it. It's very interesting. I think this is what a reverse story looks like. The author's writing is very plain, but this is exactly what an ordinary person looks like, not that Long Aotian will do the world today and tomorrow. Even if some places are a bit repetitive, these are real ordinary people. The characters who appear stand out and make us look forward to the next one. Who is it? On this basis, the text is good, so this is a very good article. There is no fierce fighting, no vigorous love, and no mysterious origin and identity. There is just an ordinary person in the role, oh... No, a friend. After traveling through time, he is still living an ordinary life. This is a life that many people can only hope to achieve. Cheers to the author, the writing is superb! [Blow kiss]💕🍉

Hehehe, it looks good

It's very good and interesting to write. The daily interaction with the characters is very warm. I can invite more new characters in the future. It will be very interesting! (^O^)y

It's like boiled water with a spoonful of sugar, very light and real. It's a little less vivid and a little more quiet. Personally, I feel pretty good. There are no big storms and waves, and there is a slight sense of warmth. There are also shortcomings. I hope the author can use more words or sentences to describe the characters' emotions. Stop "saying xxx". I have read Chapter 128 so far, and I feel that the author has made great progress since Chapter 100, but the description of the characters' emotions is still a bit lacking in vocabulary. I hope the author can continue writing. Come on ๑v๑I believe the author will make greater progress ε٩(๑> ₃ <)۶ з There are also some appropriate OOC, for example, Zhongli likes that bowl very much. Appropriate OOC can make the character more vivid, and it is really fun. I hope to have more (´▽`)

It's not like the style of Tomato's online articles, which is plain and everyday, without the cool plot points and design, and the words and sentences are soft and unobtrusive, like boiled water. I like plain water.

I have followed sixty or seventy chapters, and I really love this kind of daily-style plot. It is rare to see books of the same type. That's right, when the author describes the characters, he always writes "silent for a while" and "didn't speak" repeatedly. It feels a bit awkward after reading too much. Again, I really like this kind of daily plot 😄

I also liked this book very much at the beginning, with light daily life and light descriptions, and a feeling of peace and quiet in the years. However, after reading it for a long time, it became a bit boring. There is no main line and no ups and downs of the plot. I felt that both the text description and the plot were a bit repetitive and too single. What I was particularly interested in at the beginning was that the protagonist gradually met many new characters and friends, but I found that the people I knew seemed to be limited to those few people. Among them, the most uncomfortable thing for me is that one character appears too much, and there are some indescribable emotional lines in it. From the beginning, it can be seen that the author likes the young master and has a preference, so it is normal to describe the young master more, but I also hope that the protagonist can make more friends. It is best not to describe the emotional line too much, which seems a bit weird in daily life. In addition, I hope the plot can be detailed and I can try to add some new events. Of course, the above is just my personal opinion. I still like this book very much. It is a breath of fresh air among many fans. If there is any offense, I hope the teacher will not take it too seriously, because this is a story written by you. Of course, you will like it how you like it, but I also hope that more book friends will like this book.

Very well written! The description of the environment and the psychological description of the characters are very detailed, making people feel like they are actually there. The plot is also great and very everyday. (Zhongli's red porcelain bowl never left his body, which made me laugh so hard) The characters are a bit OOC, but not indecent. During the reading process, I had a little personal opinion. After hesitating for a long time, I still want to express it. While reading, I found that the author used the sentence pattern "not..., But..." A lot. When I first heard this, I thought the author's description was so great and amazing! But when this sentence pattern appears once or twice in each chapter, it feels a bit cheap and immature in appearance. (Sorry, I only thought of this description after thinking for a long time. I'm really sorry!!! ꒦ິ^꒦ິ) I think the frequency of this sentence pattern can be slightly reduced. The above is my personal opinion, I hope it won't offend the author too much, I'm sorry. <(._.)>

Chapter 78, okay, the article is light, the protagonist and the characters of Genshin Impact are light, there is no intense emotion