My Little Sister Keeps Wanting to Be My Wife

A good-looking, fine-grained, exquisite short story. The plot design is relatively ordinary but the presentation is pretty good. The writing seems to be of a high standard, and many pictures are very artistic, but some scene descriptions and side descriptions are repeated a lot, which is understood as a poetic and emphatic expression; the protagonist's childhood experience can be increased in length; the male protagonist's character is still not active enough, and he has been defensive in the early and middle stages; the description of the female protagonist sometimes seems too delicate, maybe to show the love and clinginess of the heroine. The above are all personal opinions. Overall, it is a very good work [I almost cried] and I was very moved when I saw the ending.

My favorite sentence after reading: The sun and the moon, the cracks are still there, but they are glued together Comments: Author, you are the first one to let me experience the feeling of being solemn and scared to turning into a maggot in bed in one night. The whole work is cut in half, very concise. The middle part suddenly fast forwarded to a few years later, which made me stunned. The conversational sweet article will make people laugh unconsciously. Overall, I will give it a medium to high 🤭 (a suggestion: if you have a little drool, improve it 🤭)

I am reviewing this book after reading it in its entirety. It is a good book, quite sweet, with a lot of sugar. The plot is fast-paced, a daily novel, and there are few scenes. There is only one knife, and I can only use it with a few strokes. The author's writing style is relatively immature, and the chapter on the hint of the knife and the symbolism of objects appear several times. , But it is also acceptable. At the end, the hero and heroine suddenly felt better when they got older 😢 (Shi cried with joy after eating too much). That's all. I'm not good at Chinese, but I hope more people will read this book. Come on, author 😘😘😘

Just like prose, it is definitely worth reading. This book is not like ordinary online novels. When you read it, it is as beautiful as reading a prose. I can't describe it. This kind of book is a unique treasure in Tomato. Come on, author.

It is a short novel that can be finished quickly, but the emotional content is very delicate. If you look closely, there are many touching parts. It is not dramatic but not boring. It is a steady stream of daily life. It is very comfortable to watch. From the brother to the husband, the journey of the hero and heroine has not been easy. It made me smile after reading it.

5 Stars is encouragement. It is a very nice short novel, but I personally feel it is a little dry. I hope the author will work harder in the future and I look forward to your next works.

The process of expressing emotions is also quite delicate. But why is it so short and weak? The phone case is the main thread throughout the article. Mainly used the operation method of connecting the previous and the next. Expresses the author's love for mobile phone cases

It's a very nice book. It shouldn't be called a novel, it should be called a story. This is the first time I've seen someone on Tomato skip the middle love stage. It's quite novel.

It's really good, very sweet 🥰🥰🥰 After the tribulation, there is something strange behind it, I don't understand it

Quite interesting, a bit short. Very good