Dong Yi's Journey Through Kivotos

Please leave more comments. Although the author's writing is not very good, I still hope someone can read it.

In fact, I originally planned to give it four stars, but considering that it is one of the few high-quality BA-themed novels in Tomato, and it is constantly updated, it can surpass other fan fictions that have been updated for a long time. But here are some shortcomings. First of all, the most obvious one is that the dialogue does not have double quotation marks, so sometimes it is not clear whether it is a narration or a dialogue; secondly, it is also a common problem of most BA second creations. The length is too short, and there are some that the protagonist can participate in, and there are pictures but no content is written. If this is done, the plot will go by very quickly, so the whole book will be completed quickly. If you want to write a good BA second creation fanfic, you can go to station b to check out some precautions for second creation, and then look at some relatively high-quality second creations. For example, General Tears is also a work by Xing Lei, as well as a work in which the main character is Sand Wolf Sulfur Scale and the other protagonist is Sand Wolf Bai Ye. There is one in Tomato, which is the work of Xing Xun, you tonic bully me Kouya.

It's pretty cool, but can it be added? Quotes.

This book is very good to me, but this is just my opinion. I cannot unify other people's opinions, but from my point of view, this book is very good. I hope the author can continue writing. After all, I have begun to expect how much he can write and what kind of ending he will have.

It is considered a very good book in this circle, but I still have to ask when 44 will be released.

This book feels like the content is quite good and has a refreshing feel. The only drawback is that the part about sucking the cat made me feel very uncomfortable.

Can you put double quotation marks in what you say? It gives me a headache. I'll give it five stars after adding it.

Come on, the author will just keep updating.

Author, just don't stop updating

It looks good. I just need to add the "-" symbol to the dialogue.